Reading Reviews From Member: Rosemary Carlie
  
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Review #1, by Rosemary CarlieBeing A Malfoy: Meet Blaise Malfoy

17th November 2011:
Im sorry but it's obvious you have not read the harry potter books, so honey, i think its time for a little literature lesson.
1.Blaise is a MALE.
and 2. READ THE HARRY POTTER BOOKS BEFORE YOU THINK YOU HAVE THE RIGHT TO WRTIE HARRY POTTER FANFICTION. JK ROWLING SPITS WHERE YOU STAND!

Author's Response: I have read the books lovey so you can take your literature lesson and shove it up your arse.
1. Incase you haven't noticed this is a next generation story.
2. I took the name Blaise and gave it to DRACO MALFOY'S daughter, an original character just for this story. She is named after the MALE Blaise Zabini, Draco's best friend.
3. The whole point of writing NEXT GENERATION fan fiction is that you can twist it anyway you want. Hence the terms oc and au.
4. DON'T YOU EVEN DARE TALK TO ME LIKE THAT. WHO DIED AND LEFT YOU THE QUEEN OF FAN FICTION WRITING. YOU THINK YOU HAVE THE RIGHT TO INSULT ME LIKE THAT YOU COW?? DON'T YOU DARE EVEN BRING J.KROWLING INTO THIS CONVERSATION! WHO DIED AND LEFT YOU THE QUEEN OF WHERE J.K SPITS?!?


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Review #2, by Rosemary CarlieBeyond the Slytherin Dungeons: Prologue

17th November 2011:
Ok so you have an incest story with really bad grammar and spelling? btw. school is not spelt "scholl" and it has a horrible plot. Really Haven? that name isn't even decent. Do you even know the meaning of the word Haven? I'm surprised you spelt dungeons correctly judging by the spelling and grammar in this story. I'm sorry but if i needed something to make me barf, i would much prefer eating a 3 week-old rotten egg. I have asked my friend (sitting next to me) and we both agree that we would rather jump in front of a train than keep reading this story.
Lots of Love,
Rosemary Elizabeth Carlie III


Author's Response: Okay first off, I fail to see how it's and incest story as Draco and Snape aren't even related. It was my first chapter and the story is going to go on hiatus while I edit it and redo that chapter okay? I'm not perfect! There is a double meaning to just about everything in this story and Haven is one of them. Her name means a safe place; a refuge. She is snapes rock, his safe place. She is what he has to fall back on. Ok the spelling isn't correct because darling I'm not freaking perfect!!!
Obviously you and you're friend have not taste in fan fiction, so for all I care, you can go eat that three week old rotten egg and then barf you heart up!
Big Love NymphadoraLupin xx
P.S enjoy the trainstation, bitch xx


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