Reading Reviews From Member: Loving_Sirius_4eva
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Review #1, by Loving_Sirius_4evaDelilah's Black Book of Poems: Epilogue: What happened?

17th November 2016:
I can honestly say this is the best Dramione stories on this website! What a bittersweet ending! You created a story that simply has no flaws. Thank you for your dedication!

Author's Response: Loving Sirius 4eva,

Wow, thank you! There are so many wonderful, creative, heart-felt Dramione stories on this site. Thank you so much for ranking it so highly! I just love these two characters that inspire me and keep me up at night.

It does have plenty of flaws though. I see them every time I re-read for edits. Haha!

Thanks so much again for your truly amazing compliments!

Dark Whisper

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Review #2, by Loving_Sirius_4evaDelilah's Black Book of Poems: If My Eyes are Sad

16th November 2016:
This chapter has rendered me speechless. It was so complex and yet beautifully written. I can't stress how much i am in awe of your writing. I could keep reading it forever! What an amazing chapter!

Author's Response: Loving Sirius 4eva,

"If My Eyes are Sad" is truly one of my favorite chapters of this story. Every time I watch the movie #6, Tom Felton's portrayal of Draco's sadness stuns me completely. His eyes... his sad, sad eyes.

And thank you so much for using the word "complex." I wanted to write a complex, but readable story, so your comment is very special to me.

Thank you so very much,
Dark Whisper

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Review #3, by Loving_Sirius_4evaDelilah's Black Book of Poems: Surrounded by Magical Graffiti - Part 2

16th November 2016:
I love this story so much! Your an amazing writer!!! Where did you find you inspiration for such a story?

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! The inspiration? All credit to JKR, the musical score of HP, Draco's character potential, and love itself. Lol!
So wonderful that you like it so far... before taking its sad turn into darkness. Hope you keep reading...

Dark Whisper

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Review #4, by Loving_Sirius_4evaDelilah's Black Book of Poems: Abraxas Malfoy and a Christmas Past

16th November 2016:
I can't believe i haven't read this story of yours yet!!! I'm already crazy in love with it! I shall continue my procrastination by reading more :)

Author's Response: Loving Sirius 4eva,

Thank you so much for taking a chance on this story! It is quite long and complex and this is only the beginning! There is much to come!

Thank you,
Dark Whisper

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Review #5, by Loving_Sirius_4evaA Binding Love: Celebrations

23rd September 2015:
Really good! LOVED IT. Please update soon:(

Author's Response: Thank you!! :D I will, promise!

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Review #6, by Loving_Sirius_4evaSurvival Instinct: How to: violence

30th May 2015:
I had to read the whole story again. i had forgotten what had happen. Since it's past the 20th I hope to see another chapter! I love this story! PLease update.

Author's Response: Someone has reread my story.
My life is now comlpete.

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Review #7, by Loving_Sirius_4evaBeing the Other Woman: Thieves and Broken Noses

24th February 2015:
AH an update!! It's good to see another chapter :) Adam is awesome. I wish had a brother like him. I still don't believe that James is the father and Keith still bothers me. I have to know more :) Great update :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it!! I wish I had a brother like Adam too. I just wish I had a brother in general. Three sisters can drive you nuts, even if we are all "grown up".


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Review #8, by Loving_Sirius_4evaBlind: The Shortest Horror Story

18th January 2015:
It's been too long! I missed this story. This chapter was a great update. I really wanted Caine not to be her cousin. It would have been awesome to see James all jealous and angry that they are so close to each other :) But still, great update :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I considered Caine not being her cousin, but I decided on something else instead ;)

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Review #9, by Loving_Sirius_4evaThunder: I love my job.

26th December 2014:
Great update. i'm grateful for it. I really do love this story so i'm taking you up on that early update.

Author's Response: Thank you! And the next chapter is almost done, I swear!

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Review #10, by Loving_Sirius_4evaBeing the Other Woman: Seriously Serious

13th December 2014:
I don't believe its his child. I still feel that there's something stirring between Veronica and Healer Bennet. The chapter was fantastic. Vi's reaction was powerful and scary :) Can't wait for the next.
I enjoyed reading it from James POV. It gave me an insight to his thoughts. He usually frustrates me when i have no idea what he's thinking and he makes stupid decisions.

Author's Response: Thank you!!! I was super proud of a faster update as well.

James is...uhh.. James. That's all I can say about that. haha


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Review #11, by Loving_Sirius_4evaA Binding Love: Heavy Heart

21st September 2014:
SERIOUSLY JAMES! Break up over this!

Amazing chapter. Top notch. I loved James' worry towards Nat at the end.

I did notice that this chapter was short but since you promise for a much longer one next time, that is not a problem.

I love this story so much. Can't wait for the next update :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I'm aiming to make the last chapters long, promise!

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Review #12, by Loving_Sirius_4evaBeing the Other Woman: Too Good to be True

10th September 2014:
Thank you for the fast update! I'm glad you got into your zone and kept going.
This chapter was bloody fantastic. The ending was the BEST. And because of that, it does seem too good to be true.

I love the flashback/dream and the way James talks so lovingly about his sister. it's all so beautiful. I really hope she gets better.

Can't wait for more :)
P.s. i love your dedication towards fanfic.

Author's Response: Isn't everything always a bit too good to be true? Isn't that the whole point? ;)

Thank you so much for the review and the lovely comments. They make my day.


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Review #13, by Loving_Sirius_4evaBeing the Other Woman: James Sirius Potter is a Man

29th August 2014:
AMAZING UPDATE. Just as i thought this could't get any better (because it's the best story) you prove me wrong.
This chapter was mind-blowing. I love everything about it. You make me gal in love with the characters all over again :) Do update again. Never give up :)

Author's Response: I will never give up, my love! Its just a matter of when I can fit it all in, is all :D


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Review #14, by Loving_Sirius_4evaA Binding Love: Breaking

25th July 2014:
Another update! I want to know more. They are so freaking adorable I want to cry!!!

Anyways.. Great update. I'm glad Albus finally knows how she feels :) I need to know what happens between James and Lee so please update soon :)

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're liking it! Thank you for reading :)

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Review #15, by Loving_Sirius_4evaEvanesce: A Deal with the Devil

16th July 2014:
I love it!
I love her and Albus :)
I'm really loved this chapter and see something promising coming.
The beginning was absolutely mind blowing. At first, I was wondering who she was talking to. When I found out, i was grinning like a love sick puppy. :)

You gotta procrastinate again and write another chapter


(im keeping your identity a secret. your welcome)

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Review #16, by Loving_Sirius_4evaBeing the Other Woman: First Loves

27th June 2014:
Yay! Great chapter. I'm glad she's finally a healer. She deserves it. The whole hospital scene towards the end was intense. I like how things turned out. I'm staring to think Keith is actually cute and sweet. I'd like to see some more of him :)

I have no idea how Violent and James are going to end up together. I can't wait. It's too suspenseful. They said goodbyes :_( So, i have no idea what's going to happen. I'd love to know though (hint* hint* - tell me).

I love it when we get an insight of the boys POV. I'l be looking forward to the next chapter :)

Update soon : )

Author's Response: Keith will grow on you. I know people are a bit skeptical on him and don't want to trust him, but for the most part, he's really helping Vi out.

James and Violet... the whole story is kinda about their love... so I can't just end it after the 11th chapter, right? Right. There's your hint ;)


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Review #17, by Loving_Sirius_4evaThe Hoax: Chapter 2

23rd June 2014:
Every single time you open your damn mouth, you get a detention.

Love that line. I love the re
Action ship between Blaise and draco. It's hilarious :)

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Review #18, by Loving_Sirius_4evaThe Hoax: Chapter 1

23rd June 2014:
Haha . I love it. Draco seems cocky. I like that. I can't wait to see where this goes. I'm going to keep reading.

I know this story is updated but I feel the need to review :)

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Review #19, by Loving_Sirius_4evaBeing the Other Woman: Finding Out the Truth

17th June 2014:
WOW! I don't know how you update so quickly. I swear two days ago it said you had done 50% of this chapter. AND it is WELL written :) Nevertheless, i am thankful for such a quick update.

Poor Violet. She was wrong. Something is fishy about Veronica. She seems legit but i can't be sure. She sounds like a cunning women.

Fred! He is amazing. I loved his scheme and the amount of trust he has for Violet. It is adorable.

James. Sigh. WHY SO WEAK BOY! Leave your traitorous wife!
I wonder what his reaction will be? Really can't wait to read that.

this story is going somewhere interesting. I want to read more :)
10/10 writing
10/10 plot
10/10 for the cliffhanger.

Author's Response: Well, it just so happens that I don't have a life after my family goes to bed... So my fingers find my keyboard and they just keep moving. Who needs sleep anyways, right? The reviews really motivated me to get one out fast for all of you. They made me feel really good :)

Freddie and Violet used to be really close back at Hogwarts, so I'm playing off of that as much as I can ;). James needs to buck up a bit and grow a pair, right?


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Review #20, by Loving_Sirius_4evaBeing the Other Woman: Surprise, Surprise, Surprise

14th June 2014:

Please update just as fast! This was an incredible chapter. Fast too:)
I really do hope she's cheating on James. But something tells me that you're not going to make that true :)

You deserve heaps of reviews. I really do love this story.

Author's Response: I HAVE TO LEAVE IT LIKE THAT!! It adds to the surprise, hence the title. duh :D.
Veronica needs to be cheating on James. Bint. But I can't make everything so predictable, can I?


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Review #21, by Loving_Sirius_4evaBeing the Other Woman: The Benefit

10th June 2014:
THANKs for the quick update :) Gosh, this just keeps getting better. I loved the tension on the dance floor. Ah, James. Isn't he perfect? I think James should tell his wife the truth and stop stringing her on.
I do wonder what's up with Keith, now that you mention it. He does seem like he has a secret agenda.

Great update. 10/10. Well written. interesting plot. Quick updates are always good :)

What's going to happen in the next chapter?

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it and my quick update ;). James is... well, he's James. He's too afraid to tell his wife the truth... he's already broken her once, he's just going to end up doing it again. He's being selfless and selfish at the same time, really.

Next chapter? well... surprises, surprises, and more surprises. ;)

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Review #22, by Loving_Sirius_4evaBeing the Other Woman: Awkward Situations

30th May 2014:

Haha. I am delighted by this quick update. I LOVED THIS CHAPTER. PLEASE UPDATE JUST AS FAST. I want to see what happens at the benefit. Especially when James sees her with healer Bennett :)

Great update. No improvements needed. Request: Shove some jealously from James Potter in the next chapter. especially when he sees her all dressed up :)

Author's Response: Hahahah Well, I just wanted to make sure!! I'm definitely going to be updating very soon, but I am in the process of moving into our new home, so it'll have to be once the weekend is over. The chapter is almost ready to go, though, so don't you worry!!

There will definitely be lots and lots of jealous in this chapter. Don't you worry.

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Review #23, by Loving_Sirius_4evaBeing the Other Woman: The Talk

23rd May 2014:
ARGH! OMG! Brilliant. I love the tension between them. Why is james sticking around with Veronica when he believes Vi is the girl for him?
Come on james get the girl!

I absolutely loved this chapter. Please update soon. I really don't want you to abandon this. I have been feeling sad lately. Most authors haven't updated there stories since last year. So i always look forward treading this story because it updates every few months. The plot is amazing. The characters are fantastic. and i just love the flutters that explode within me. James has that effect on me :)

Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: I think more than anything James feels guilty and feels the need to stay with Veronica. I finally figured which direction I was going with this story and I feel like I will keep writing for a while yet! Don't you worry, love :)

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Review #24, by Loving_Sirius_4evaLetters to L.C. : Valentine's Day

6th May 2014:
OMG! This is actually the perfect ending! I love it. It was beautiful. Lenny and Sirius finally got their happy ever after. EVERYTHING WAS PERFECT. I did think it was going to have a cliche twist and Sirius was faking the whole act. But it wasn't. Yet he managed to make such a show for Lenny.

Author's Response: Thank you! Lenny definitely deserved the happily ever after :). Sirius will always eff it up... but at least he loves the girl !

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Review #25, by Loving_Sirius_4evaLetters to L.C. : McGonagall's Office

22nd April 2014:

This chapter was awesome.
Great Chapter idea. I love how they were all brought in one by one. I hope the story doesn't end in a tragic.

i really love this story.

It is sad that it's coming to an end already. Perhaps a sequel is in the making?

haha. Can't wait for the next chapter,

Author's Response: Well you KNOW its gonna be packed with Sirius/Lenny stuff. Would i have their love story any other way?

Now I know I'm a bit dramatic sometimes.but end it tragically? You don't know me as well as I thought you did ;) Jk!

I'm hoping for a sequel, but with a second baby on the way, I'm not sure how much time I'll have. We will have to see in the coming months!

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