Hey it's really great. Just one thing lol you've spelt Lily's name wrong, it's just one L in the middle.

Author's Response: Shoot. I'll go back and fix that. Thanks for the heads up! And thanks for reviewing!

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Love the way you've written this. Remus and James' sortings were done exceptionally well. Loved the lines "What are you?" "A Gryffindor" it shows that remus knows who he really is but is still self concious about what others think and I believe this stays with him forever. I love how James thinks of his father and how his home life is percieved as being perfect. Really great story.

Author's Response: Hello :) I'm sorry for the late reply - I've just had my last exams, so I'm fully focusing on HPFF now! xD

Remus and James are similar in that they both percieve the world wrongly - as you've picked up on! - and this develops in future chapters. :)

Thank you for your lovely review - I'm so glad that you're enjoying the story so far and I really hope that you continue to do so!

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That was a really good chapter. I like the idea. I was just wondering the names of the people you used in the banner because they really look teh part of Rose and Hugo. Thanks

Author's Response: Their names are Alexina Graham and Liam Aiken. Thanks for reviewing and I'm glad you liked it!

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Wow that was really really good. By far the best fan fic I've read in a long time. Just two thoughts though Peter was working for Voldemort before he became Secret keeper and he was passing Voldemort and the death eaters information from the Order and The muggles in the street heard Wormtail call out that Sirius murdered them before he cut off his finger and blew some people up. Other than that it was perfect and I really hope you write more, you're so descriptive and it was written so well. Loved it heaps. =)

Author's Response: Well, I had the idea that those who did hear him, ended up dead when the explosion hppened; maybe I should have made that clearer. But I'm glad you liked it :)

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Really good chapters so far, can't wait to read more =)

Author's Response: Why thank you!! It's nice to hear that someone is enjoying them. :) It makes me a happy author. I should be updating fairly frequently. :) Thanks for reviewing, it means a lot.
~Mischief_managed18

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Cool Story, feel really sorry for Remus though =(

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Really liking this story so far

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I really appreciate you taking the time to review!

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That was a really cute chapter and I hope you continue to write more

Author's Response: Hey, thank you so much, I am working onto the next chapter! :)

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Good overview of Snapes life. In one part you have said that Lily is standing by Harry's side not James'. Just thought you should know.

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Loved the story, it was really great to read a story from this time period. I really wanted to know the answer to the Clue: LCEN YLNM DH UWCVLQQGG UDDQWCJG. I couldn't come up with it :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Haha, I was waiting for somebdoy to ask that. I'm a complete idiot - I created this awesome code that I planned to revisit later in the story, but when I came back to have the Aurors solve it, I realized that I had forgotten to write down the key. Thus, I had no idea what the message was. I literally spent hours trying to decode it, but to no avail. Yeah, I'm stupid. Anyway, thanks so much for reviewing!

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