This was great, as all of your writing is. I really love it from Sirius's as I'm sure everyone does since he's the character we want to see the reactions from because he's the guy. I thought you captured him wonderfully and the emotion was pure and utterly perfect. I really hope you continue with this and this series, its probably the best thing I've read on this site and for any fanfiction in general. ~Lots of Love, AlainaAuthor's Response: Thank you very much Alaina! It felt so good to be writing from Sirius's POV for this and hopefully they'll be another chapter soon. It was loely to explore his grief and come at the story from a different angle, so I'm very glad you enjoyed it :) -AC Report Review
Hey there! I really like this story so far, its so much more unique then all of the other Sirius/OC stories. I really like how your style of writing reflects your character and how its light-hearted and humourous. I literally laughed out loud when shhe threw the toast on Sirius's face. So I have really enjoyed it so far and I hope you update it soon! One question though: Does Lenny have some sort of disease? If this is like a climax in the story then you don't have to tell me, but I was just wondering :)Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! I'm actually working on finishing up writing the letters, but I do plan on continuing this! It's just this is my first semester of college, so it's a bit hectic. Lenny does not have a disease, actually. She's just special in her own way. She lets her mind wander and doesn't really catch it like everyone is so used to doing. You'll find you'll be able to relate to her in the next few chapters :D. Report Review
There is so much I have to say here. Ive been reading your story for about a good 4 months now, and let me say that I absolutely love it. In the beginning I thought it was a bit odd, how all that older stuff happened to just 1st years, but now I understand why the story moved so quicky. Ir really love how you started from first year, because now the readers can really understand the friendships between the mauderes and kristen. Instead of just saying theyve been friends forever, you showed us that. I love how you show the progessions of each of the characters and how you manage to keep the story full of drama, yet yet light hearted and full of sweet moments. Keep writing!!! Report Review
Where have you been? You haven't updated in FOREVER, and I miss the story! Come back :(Author's Response: The next chapters in the queue I promise you! I just never know which story to update next, and thus sometimes stories accidently get neglected :) Report Review
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