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Review #1, by ThePotterheadThe Marauders and Marauderettes: Meet the Pranksters

4th June 2011:
This is good. However, if you want to be accurate, then here are some little things:
- Dominique's sister is called Victoire, not Victorie.
- I take it you're American. In Britain, we don't use the word 'mom', we use 'mum' and as all your characters are British, they should use 'mum'.
Other than that, this is good.
Please read and review my stories!

Author's Response: Thanks for the advice. I grew up in Britain for a few years then moved to the US. I'll be sure to.

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Review #2, by ThePotterheadBetween You and Me: Latest News: Engaged?!

12th May 2011:
Really good, but just one thing. It's Weasley, not Weasly. Sorry, but I'm really fussy about stuff like that.

Author's Response: Thank you for that :]

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Review #3, by ThePotterheadModern Magic and Misgivings: Psychos, Stairs and Slime, Oh My!

12th May 2011:
This is good. I would recommend using 'Mum' to refer to characters other than June's parents, as I presume they are supposed to be British, so they wouldn't say 'Mom'. Other than that, I'm impressed. xD

Author's Response: Yeah, I was beginning to make that change in later chapters, then forgot to do it in the earlier ones. Thanks for the review though, I'm glad you like it!

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