YOU'RE ALIVE!!!

I MISSED YOU.

So glad you're back, this piece was really really good. I'm really upset that you're not going to finish your stories, is there anyway we can find out what happens to the characters in the end? But I get that college takes up a lot of time :)

Good to see you back :)

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GAH OMG DOM WHY ARE YOU SO ANNOYING. YOU HAVE THE WORST TIMING EVER. JUST WHEN IT WAS GETTING INTERESTING. WHAT THE FUCKING FUCK.

POOO.

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Oh my God. This is the only fanfiction that has ever made me cry. I'm going to go and hug my dad now, and then go and curl up in a corner and cry for a few hours. Brb.

Coffee xxx

Author's Response: Are you cereal?? Aw, all these reviews for Flatline are so so nice!! :')

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Wow. I filching LOVED this chapter right up until the end. Yes, I do agree that Aggy has been acting a little bratty lately, but James... Wow. That was way too far. Has he not realised that Aggy had just saved not only his, but several other people's lives as well? I'm pretty sure that wasn't selfless. Honestly, I think James was totally wrong about her, and just acted like a complete cow. But really well written and I enjoyed it up until the argument!

Coffee x

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OHMIGAWDOHMIGAWDOHMIGAWDDON'TLEAVEMEHANGINGLIKETHATJUSTDON'T!!! :'( This chapter was truly amazing, my favourite so far, and that's saying something! Annoying cliffhanger at the end. No, not just annoying. Gnawing, provoking, exasperating, ANGERING cliffhanger! I love it.

The kiss in this chapter was amazing, so fiery and hot. On the verge of almost sluttiness and sexual, but not slutty at all. Again, I love it.

10/10. I haven't reviewed any of your other chapters but I thought this one just deserved it so much I had to. I think your story is amazing. My problem with my writing is that I move everything on too fast. I can be halfway through a year within ten chapters, but you have it just right. I mean, you're only at Christmas with 32 whole chapters! I applaud you. You're a very talented writer and I really can't wait for the next chapter :)

Coffee x

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