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Review #1, by cupcakesnessFalling: Prologue

14th August 2012:
Really like the begning eves the reader something to dawn on

Author's Response: Hello,
Thanks, it was really fun to write, I'm glad you enjoyed it and that it gives you something to think about,
HiddenFace x

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Review #2, by cupcakesnessCharmed: Chapter 2

12th July 2012:
Really like seeing the differences of Hugo and Ells. Hugo seems sweet I like his personality. Chapter very well written your an amazing writer. Like how Hugo and ells both like muggle books.

Author's Response: Awww, thank you so much! I'm really glad that Hugo came across as a sweet guy because that was exactly what I was aiming for. I just posted a chapter so it shouldn't be long before another one is up!
Again thank you for reviewing. And keep reading... :)

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Review #3, by cupcakesnessCharmed: Chapter 1

12th July 2012:
This story is so well written it amazes me great job on the first chapter cant wait to read further and find out why Hugo is a sob to ells lol

Author's Response: Thank you for those encouraging words! I can't wait to write more! I was pretty scared when I first posted this story since it's my first one, so if you have any advice I would love to hear it...
Thanks once more for your review :)
Keep reading and reviewing!

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Review #4, by cupcakesnessUnperfect: It honestly takes one to know one

10th May 2012:
I really like how you described him.

Author's Response: Thanks you tried really hard :)

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Review #5, by cupcakesnessThese three words: Chapter 3: Weasley Secrets

5th February 2012:
Dam I hate you took say the banner but I get it was to big. Love this chapter love how everyone has something crazy going on in their life can't wait till chapter 4

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Review #6, by cupcakesnessThe Way I Am: Headlines, Swear Jars, and Food Fights

30th January 2012:
love it and i love that your writinf a story about hugo your on of my favrite authors and hugo is one of my favrite charaters so i got so excited when i saw you were writing a story about him and yes! add drama and seriouse themes i would love for this story to go far update son this is amazing :)

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Review #7, by cupcakesnessUnorthodox: The Mistake

29th December 2011:
This is amazing i've readed over my head and both or amazing your a great writter and I hope you updates :)

Author's Response: Thank you!

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Review #8, by cupcakesnessThese three words: Not his type

29th December 2011:
Awww Raniny reminds me of me, This story pretty awesome so far keep updating :)

Author's Response: Thanks for review and yeah raniny is just me i made her just like me

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Review #9, by cupcakesnessThese three words: Hangover and Best mates

29th December 2011:
You can clearly see how much of a good guy Hugo is and I like the ending how she uses a spell to makes herself look older and how she makes a sock money that awesome :)

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Review #10, by cupcakesnessOver My Head: Of Supposed Best Friends and Extreme Ginger Syndrome

25th December 2011:
I really like Alyssa she has some guts calling out the Potter,Scamanders, and Malfoys like that. I really like the background story it makes you understand her view of things alot better. This story is pretty awesome so far, I really like Alyssa so far shes my favorite character so far, and my favorite quotes were “All of you Gingers—that means you too, Potters—get out. Now. Seriously. I have a wand, and I am not afraid to use it, I don’t care if your father saved the Wizarding World. Get out.” and “I don’t remember inviting you into the compartment! What gives you the right to just storm in here and pollute the air with Extreme Ginger Syndrome! Honestly, I’ll probably have orange hair in a month.” This is a really good first chapter,I can tell you worked hard on it, can't wait to know more about this story

Author's Response: Yes Alyssa does have guts...that's probably why she's a Gryffindor :)

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Review #11, by cupcakesnessthere story: Midday

2nd December 2011:
I like the fill in its explans alot more oh and theres some words you need to spell wright just saying like you spelled Scorpius name wronge at some point, but i did that to in my first story (Thats why I use the spell check on the wesited and re read the chapter 2 time before i save it) I kinda don't understand what is going on like are'nt you at the part where the kiss? Or is this before? I dont know but I still really really like this chapter and im glab your going to update more. Now this is a pretty good job for a first time story cause mine was crap, keep updating :)

Author's Response: thank you ill check al of that and i love the support you give.

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Review #12, by cupcakesnessTypical Clueless Guy: The Breakup

25th November 2011:
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY THEY BROKE UP, and Rose is getting married, ahh another wedding and I love wedding, I hope now Van and Hugo will be together, and Lilly was funny by saying 'So congratulations on your break up' it reminds me when i was datting this jerk that none of my friens told me they hated him intill we broke up, this story so awesome and great i cant wait to know what ganna happen next :)

Author's Response: YAYAYAYYAYAYAY - they broke up :)

Hey, if the dudes a jerk then I'm glad that you broke up with him. I hope Vanessa and Hugo will be together too :)

Thank you so much for reading&reviewing :)

Ellie :D

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Review #13, by cupcakesnessJar of Hearts: Nightmares and Memories

24th November 2011:
I usally dont read same sex story its not that i have anything against it i just dont usally read i, but this was really good and I love that song jar of hearts, and i did'nt see the knife in the back nighmare coming which made it really good start, I really liked this chapter and I really want to know whats there story and how it ened so bad
10/10 :)

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

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Review #14, by cupcakesnessMerlin Knows!!!: Midnight ecstacy

10th November 2011:
I like the name for the chapter that what got me into the story first and They way you word the story makes me understand clearly what is going on , i really am hook it this story i enjoyed writing it was diferent and great :)

Author's Response: Thank you:) and I am really glad that you can understand because I was worried that i was being too brief!! thanks again and hope you enjoy the rest of my chapters that will come soon:D

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Review #15, by cupcakesnessThe Epic Love Story of Eloise Longbottom: Chapter 1- Introducing Me

6th November 2011:
Hey ive readed all of the chapter and review most of them but this one and im wanna tell you please update soon i miss this story so much :) it was one of my favorite and i miss it please update :)

Author's Response: Oh my gosh, thank you! I've been super busy, but I swear I'm going to write over Christmas Break! :)

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Review #16, by cupcakesnessTypical Clueless Guy: The Proposal

2nd November 2011:
Awww Hugo being really sweet, and I love the pig joke its so true and I have little werid thoughs like that to, that why I love van so much I can relate to her weridness just as much as my own, I love the side love story like jen and james and now rose and Scorpius so sweeet love them :), and before I forget I LOVE THE NEW PICS, I went back and saw all of them I love the one of van and hugos is my FAVORITE there all so AWESOME, can't wait till chapter 13 this is such a amazing story :)

Author's Response: The pig joke was actually what I was thinking at that the time, which is why it got in there. My brain can be a scary place at times, enter at your own risk.
Magic_Phoenix is just like a genius at making chapter images, and she makes me such PRETTY pictures so I love her lots and lots :)
Chapter 13 should be up soon, I'm just updating my other WIP first :)
Thank you so much for reviewing,
- Ellie :)

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Review #17, by cupcakesnessIt Was Only A Kiss: chapter 007.

31st October 2011:
Wow she finally told Rose I wonder how Hugo going to reacted? I cant belive she loves Scorpiuse. There love came so easy I wonder if anything bigs ganna happen? 10/10 :)

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Review #18, by cupcakesnessThe Reckless: Chapter I. The Nightmares Of Reality

27th October 2011:
WOW THIS IS AMAZING, so much into one chapter I cant wait to know whats going to happen next, how there going to act when they see hes gone?, will his dad even care? This is amazing keep writing it SO GOOD and heartfulled I felted like i was really in the story, This is the fastest ive came to love a story its great

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Review #19, by cupcakesnessTypical Clueless Guy: James' Visit

27th October 2011:
Awww the James and Jenifer thing was so sweet, I love wedding to, there so sweet and you can feel the love , and YES!!! fianlly Van is ganna try to get Hugo to love her, but he dose love her and WHEN IS HE GANNA BRAKE UP WITH THE SHE-DEVIL i need to know!!, ahh I cant waut to know whats gannna happen next :)

Author's Response: Hello :)
This review made me smile, so thanks :)
I love weddings as well, which is strange, because I've only ever been to one and that was the uncle that I hate's and it wasn't even in a church. Hmmp.
They got divorced six months later.
And when is he going to break up with the she devil? I know something you don't know (na-na-na-na-na) :p
- Ellie :D

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Review #20, by cupcakesnessthere story: catching a cold

24th October 2011:
awww he kissed her, this is kinda fast you dont really get to know anything about there friendship or how they came to like each other

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Review #21, by cupcakesnessTypical Clueless Guy: The Decision

20th October 2011:
Aw I cant belive what just happen!,the whole chapter I was like "JUST TELL EACH OTHER!!",but I know it better if they tell each other later cause I love this story so much!, is Hugo really ganna break up with his crazy pshco girlfriend? I cant wait to know whats ganna happen next :D

Author's Response: Thank you for another lovely review :)
Haha, that was kind of the aim actually. Yeah, the first part, or 'the falling', as I so pathetically nicknamed it, is done now, but now we move onto where the actual story begins, which is 'how to date someone but no technically date someone because you refuse to tell someone you like them'.
If that made sense, I will be impressed :D
Thanks again :)
And Hugo may be a Gryffindor, but if you look at the first comment for this chapter, you'll see what I told someone about next chapter...
- Ellie ;D

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Review #22, by cupcakesnessIt Was Only A Kiss: 006

18th October 2011:
OMG, I cant belive she cheated on Hugo, with Scorpius!, I didnt see that coming, I cant wait to know what will happen next!

Author's Response: next chapter will be up soon, it's in the queue! lifes gotten to me, so i've been kind of busy !

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Review #23, by cupcakesnessTypical Clueless Guy: The Kiss

18th October 2011:
When I saw the name of this chapter I had a mini panick attack, THIS WAS AMAZING, they kisses! and you made Hugo sound like the hottest guy in the world and it was AMAZING, if this was just the first kiss I have cant wait till they kiss some more, this was AMAZING!! I can't wait to see whats going to happen next 10/10 :D

Author's Response: Hello darling :)
Oh, this made me smile, thank you for such a lovely review :D
If you're really pleased they kissed, then you're going to be really angry with me for the next chapter :(
Thank you and hugs -
Ellie :D

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Review #24, by cupcakesnessTypical Clueless Guy: Lily's Love

11th October 2011:
I love it, poor Hugo hes dosent know what to do, and Van is so clueless (love it), I really like this chapter it was nice and sad Hugo seem even cuter in these chapter. (I LOVE HUGO)

Author's Response: I LOVE HUGO TOO.
Thankyou for another lovely review, they make my day :)
Next chapter is going in the queue in like... 2 minutes, and I'm really excited for you guys to read this one :)

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Review #25, by cupcakesnessThe Virgin Count: A Little Fun

11th October 2011:
I though it was so funny how easly Hermione started day dreaming about Ron, loved this chapter :)

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