When I read the last part of the chapter, the song 'Stacy's Mom' was stuck in my head. I love this story too much to even CONSIDER sleep.Author's Response: Haha that's a great song; it's perfect for this chapter! I'm glad that you're enjoying this story so far!
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I am crying so hard but I won't make a sound as my sister is asleep right near me. This is a beautiful story that I'm glad I had the chance to read. THANK YOU!!! Report Review
Hey, I really do think that this is a good story idea. It's just that I think that everything is going to fast. Maybe you can introduce Malfoy and him taking Lauren's spot in a few chapters or so, and maybe you shouldn't just describe a character straight away(as in a paragraph) you should probably take time on that as well. And I'm really sorry for correcting you, but Draco Malfoy became the Slytherin Seeker in his second year. ANYway to draw this incredibly long review to an end, I was wondering if I could be your beta'd. Pretty Please.Author's Response: I will take all the help I can get. I am not a writer, and developing a story is new to me. So ill take any advice. Yes, if you wanna be my beta that would be great!! Report Review
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