Amazing chapter, I hate admitting it but I'm more intrigued than ever at this point. All I could think about while reading it was that vision where Sirius still had a chance with her. You'll need to get the next chapter up soon!

Author's Response: Haha well there'll be something else on that soon ;P I'll try and have the next chapter up asap!

Thanks for the review
~Roonyskatoony~

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Ah such a good chapter. I was dying to know how she was going to deal with all of this. UPDATE ASAP!!

Author's Response: I will! :D
It's mostly written I just need to string it all together! :P
Thanks for the review!! :)

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A very good chapter, please update soon!!

Author's Response: thank you! i'll try!
~ally

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This is a good start, I look forward to seeing what you do with it.

Author's Response: Thanks! So do I!...Kidding. I have a plan. I swear. ;)
Hugs,
Lucky

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Finally! I'm so glad you posted this chapter though I have to say I am a bit confused. You'll just need to post the next one as soon as possible to clear things up I guess!

Author's Response: I know, it's been a while x.x
Hopefully it'll be clearer in the next chapter but if not, feel free to just ask for an answer xD

Thanks for the review! :)
~Roonskatoony~

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I'm not so sure about some of the characterization but overall it's an okay story and I hope you get the next chapter out soon.

Author's Response: Thank you for being honest, that truly means a lot. You can't please everyone, right? And it's good to know what you feel I'm lacking in. Feedback can only help me to improve. While you may not like them now, I do hope you'll like them after they've gone through developments; they're going to be tremendous people.

It should be up soon, it's in the queue. Thank you so much for reviewing, I really appreciate it.

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I'm loving this story. You managed to make a very testy plot line work amazingly with your characterization and it's amusing as all hell. Update soon!!!

Author's Response: oh, thank you so much! i'm glad you're enjoying the story. =)
i will!
~ally

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This is great, please update soon!!!

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Amazing chapter!!! Finally some action between Iris and Sirius!!

Author's Response: Gah, I know, it's been so long coming xD

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Before I go on to read the other chapters you've posted so far, I want to say that this is really well-written and a wonderful start!

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Well that was a bit unexpected. Good chapter, though. Update soon!!!

Author's Response: Yeah, I know. Constant vigilence!

Thanks so much for reviewing, I appreciate it immensely.

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This is a really amazing story!! It's so well-written that it sometimes surprises me :)

Update soon!

Author's Response: Aw thanks! I'm really trying. That means a lot to me.

Thanks for reviewing.

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Okay I have to say before I keep reading that this is exceedingly good dialogue. You have Lily's sense of humor down exactly as I imagined it.

Author's Response: Why thank you! I've always thought of her as really witty, and I wanted to write a story where she got to be really witty.

Dialogue is also my weak point, so that really made me feel awesome. Thanks a ton!

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This is amazing. You're characterization is so realistic! Please update soon, I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! An update will be in soon!

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The dialogue is really choppy and unrealistic.

Author's Response: well.
sorry that you did not like it.
I would love it if you elaborate why you did not like the dialogue so that i can improve next time.English is not my native language so its a bit difficult to write and this is the first time i am writing.

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Wow, this has to be my favorite story on all HPFF. Please update soon!

Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad to hear it :P

I'm afraid there may be more of a wait for the next chapter, I've come to the conclusion that writing two or three chapters would probably be best and it'll also reduce all that crappy waiting times between each of the chapters. In other words, I'm a lover of prewritten chapters xD

Thanks for the review :P
~Roonyskatoony~

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DEFINITELY THE MOST AMAZING L/J FIC I HAVE EVER READ!

I just wish there was more!

Author's Response: Thank you!

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