Charlotte,

I hope you take this the right way but I think this may have been one of the best chapter you have written thus far. It wasn't as though there was anything particular going on in this chapter but the emotions felt more real and it was like I was actually there in the story in this chapter. I felt the dust on my fingers as I turned the loose door handle. It was great. I liked the photographs at the end of this chapter and I hope it helped hermione get a feel of Draco and the depth of his emotions for her. Great addition!!

Until next time...

Meg

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Charlotte,

Yeah!! Now we know, but two steps forward and one step back. LOL. But I really like the ending with her giving in for a moment to the fact that she liked Draco a lot more than she was willing to tell him. I'm surprised though because she has liked hime romantically for quite some time and then the moment he finally admits it, she is scared and rethinks/overthinks everything. Bah, I kinda want to shake some sense into her right now. I'm like come on girl, he wants you!!! :)

Anyway, I can't wait to see where you go now with this intriguing story.

Thank you for the shout-out. I'm so happy that you find my reviews helpful, or atleast worth something. :)

Until next time!

Meg

Author's Response: Hahaha, yeah I'm sorry about that. (Two steps forward but one step back.) (': Well I'm really glad that you enjoyed the ending. She couldn't stand her guard for too very long, could she? (; Yes, when her feelings were finally returned she completely turned around. Well, more is to ensue next chapter! (I actually laughed at the "I'm like come on girl, he wants you!!!)

And yes, your reviews are wonderful, and it's always lovely to hear what you think. I thought the shout-out was only necessary (:
And I'm glad you are enjoying the story (: (': I hope to see you next chapter!

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Rusty,

That was a big curve ball you threw us with Narcissa. I was wondering how it would play out in this chapter but I guess we will have to wait for Draco's reaction. Yeah!! Hermione is finally back in touch with her true self. I can't believe she could deny magic for that long because her knowledge of magic is quite extensive. Anyway, I think it is great that she is welcomed back into society with open arms from everyone. I find it weird that George called Hermione "Granger", normally only people who disliked her called her that. She was almost apart of his family at one point so I think it threw me off just a little. Reunion time in the next chapter!! I can't wait for everyone's reactions, including Draco's.

Until next time!!

Meg

Author's Response: I think George was rightfully ticked after she left them all. She was like family, so that is what he said...in my head at least. Just put the next chapter in for validation...we are fast approaching the end! Next chapter is dinner at the Burrow.

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Serene chapter with a lot action happening in a slow and building way. Selflessly Draco was finally able to help Hermione start the healing process. Showing his true feelings for her without the complication that has been troubling them in the past was nice to read. Strong ending to the chapter in that they both are able to find a compromise that suits them and their relationship and I could see the growth in them as a couple. Support was the only thing Hermione really needed to help her move on and heal. So, I'll be reading on when you update next. Seriously well thought out chapter and I really liked the story on elizabeth's house.

Author's Response: Thanks :) I'm glad you enjoyed it :). I'm putting up the next chapter today so I hope you enjoy that too :)

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Charlotte,

I hope the next one is indeed longer. You owe us (your readers) after that cliffy! :) Other that the great ol' giant cliffy at the end of this charmingly short chapter, (I hope you know I am just teasing you) this was a great chapter. Hehe... I'm still waiting on Draco's true feelings. You didn't think I would forget, did you? :P Though he seem abnormally happy in this chapter!

Nah, I like your story too much. I just accidently missed review that one chapter, you'll be hearing from me again. I hope you update soon because I'm on the edge of my seat.

Meg

Author's Response: Ho ho ho, well his true feelings may or may not have been revealed! And no I didn't think you would have forgotten, and so I am just glad that I didn't have to make you wait any longer. (: And the update is up! And haha Meg you're great, thank you so much for all the reviews.

I feel like I am not responding enough to your review, but I do not know what to say without you reading the next chapter first! But thanks for reading this far, and I hope to see you next chapter!

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Emmo,

Hmm.. This was an interesting chapter. I would love to see more of what was going on. I think you could have spent a bit more time on the breakfast scene with Draco and Demona. I really liked the part with Goyle. It would seem true to fashion that Goyle would have his mouth stuffed so full he could barely talk. You used some interesting descriptive words during the fight such as cranium and thick red blood. Most people would have used skull but I think cranium fits the moment just right.

Megthechef43 aka Meg

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singerhotti24,

I was just about to lose hope. I know how life can be at times. I nearly squealed in delight when I saw this had be updated. I am not disappointed with this chapter, it was worth the wait. :)

I was on the edge of my seat for nearly the entire chapter and all I can say is wow. You wrote the scene every dramione fans wishes for. It was fully charged with emotions and the dam of lust finally broke. There are been quite a few almost moments through out the story but I'm glad you waited. The anticipation was killing me and I can't wait to see where you take it from here.

Amazing Chapter addition to one of the most Amazing stories on this site.

Until next time...

Meg

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Mischief_managed18,

It has been a while since I last reviewed you story. I love everything going one so far. The mystery of who is "X" and what her intentions are exactly. Why did Draco refuse Hermione when she kissed him. What is he scared of?

I'll be reading on. Until next time...

Meg

Author's Response: It's always lovely to see familiar names pop up, so thank you! :) Ohh goodness, I'm so excited for the big reveal of "X", though I fear that may be towards the end of this story. He's scared of many things, as will be revealed later. It's mainly that he doesn't want her getting hurt and is afraid to screw things up, but more on that later. Thanks for the fantastic review, it means a lot. :)

Hope to see you again,
~Mischief_managed18

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Charlotte,

Great chapter!! There is so much information and we finally know what is going on with Draco. Draco finally sat down Hermione a told her the truth. I can't wait to see how things pan out with Hermione's parents and for the relationship between the two to grow a little more.

The letter was perfect. I smiled when I read that.

Great job and great chapter!

Until next time!

Meg

Author's Response: Aweh Meg (': It's so nice to hear from you again. (I was worried you had stopped reviewing D: ) Yes. More is to happen with Draco and Hermione in *SPOILER* two more chapters. And haha yeah you will be meeting the parents very soon! I am so glad you enjoyed it (': I am glad that it made you smile. And yes, see you next time!

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Dark,

Is it bad that I obsessively check my notifications for your posts. I'm so glad you let me, umm I meant everyone :) , know when this story is updated.

Wow. This was an intense chapter. So full of love, hate, lust, drama. I was devastated when Hermione said no. I was heartbroken that she could love him because he made a mistake.

She offered herself. It was sweet and not slutty which tends to happen a lot in dramione. You made it her choice, she loves him and want to show him. She was smart about her decisionand approached him and was firm in her resolve. It was perfect. I loved that he resisted at first and didn't just hope in to bed at her first suggestion.

He finally told her the truth and his worst nightmare cam true. She rejected him. So horribly sad. I want them together. She was his only light in the darkness.

Hermione was true to form and insisted he switch side now before too much bad could happen. Oh, I wish he would listen to her because then they could love each other.

At first I thought she would be red-hot with anger because he had used the imperius on her. But the brief glimpse inside her head let us know that she couldn't hate him. She loved him with her whoel heart. Gosh, this chapter was sad.

Draco, poor draco. At least he did the right thing and told her the truth before it went too far. It was brave of him. I wish it had ended better for the two of them. I wonder how they come to speaking to either other again.

10/10 as usually.

I can't wait to read more. Thank you for your kind words at the end. I'm so glad Snowflake helped.

Until next time...

Meg

Author's Response: Dearest Meg,

I think you might be the only one that reads my updates, so I might as well send them directly to you. LOL! XD

Anyway, well, now that you have read this chapter, you can probably understand how I struggled through it. I knew the end, it was the 'how to get there' part that was the problem. There was plenty of Dramione action in this one. Love, hate, lust, drama... you listed them spot on.

I was very torn about hermione offering herself. Was it too out of character and too slutty? I was truly worried about that. I was really torn about writing it that way. I wrote it several different ways (part of my writer's block, really), but in the end, deep down, it was what needed to happen, I think. I certainly did not want him to push her, so it had to be her suggestion, you know? She offered out of love. He needed to be torn. And I needed to set it up to where she was admitting her love first, which is then how he ended up asking THE question. And it was so important to get right or this entire story could've been a huge Failure! Ugh!

His worst fears came true, poor Draco. He knew it. He knew starting a relationship with her would be disastrous and it all came true. My heart cries for him.

I could not let their relationship go any further without having her try to pull him to the right side. It had to be said. She had to try at this point, but perhaps too late. :(

I wanted to have Draco still be the flawed Death Eater that he is in using the Imperious. How dare he do that to her! But Hermione could not switch from loving to hating so quickly. That's just not how love works. She knows that now, but couldn't voice it.

Yes, he did the right thing in telling her before they went too far. I have had that planned from day 1 and it has been such a long, long time ago.

How will they ever speak again? Well, I have my sad, tragic plans, of course. ;(

And truly, your suggestion helped me get through this chapter and I cannot THANK YOU enough.

My Dramione heart thanks you,
Dark Whisper

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Charlotte,

Oh gosh! No answers yet. You have me waiting in anticipation for all that is to come. Poor Hermione was going crazy but now we have a very clear view on her feelings for Draco. I know you said it will come but I'm ready to know how Draco feels about Hermione. I love the note. Apparently he is in hiding because I don't think he would use ferret if he had another way.

I can't wait to read more. Another great chapter!!

Meg

Author's Response: Yes, she was a little out of sorts wasn't she? (A BIT OF A SPOILER: sadly that doesn't end next chapter.) Oh ho ho no don't even worry about it Meg, Draco's feelings come very soon. Like, the chapter is creeping up. It's coming. Oh, it's coming. Then everything will be out in the open. Except there is more to it then that. And now I'm making it sound like a regular romance. It... Oh no. Okay. Well. I never make anything easy. And yes hmm I will keep you wondering about the letter and such! (I'm sorry I am half asleep and so my responses aren't what they used to be.) I hope you enjoyed it! (: See you next chapter.

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Charlotte,

Great chapter. I'm excited to read on and see what is going on with Draco. They had a moment in the last chapter. I am not sure what direction they were headed in this chapter. I guess that is the point because they don't reall y know.

I'll be reading on... :)

Meg

Author's Response: Yeeeah sorry I just wanted to get Liar up asap as to not make you guys wait. And thank you for reviewing Meg, I love reading your reviews. (: Andandand well. Hm. Yes. I'm not quite sure what to respond, except well, Draco and Hermiones feelings are rather complicated as of late due to the situation, and their new found feelings. (Trust me he has them. They're in their somewhere haha.)

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Charlotte,

Hello again. LOVE THIS CHAPTER!! I think the ball was cute with the entry scene but I loved the flying scene. It was so personal and really let's their personalities to come to together with out all the messy stuff and distractions. I love that Hermione is feeling attracted to Draco and I wish I knew more about how he was feeling.

I'll be reading on. Great job!!

Meg

Author's Response: HI MEG :D Yes I know, finally no messy situations or distractions. Just pure emotion (; And yes Hermione is really starting to feel something now, isn't she? haha. And well I think Draco's thoughts will be shown relatively soon. Well. Not very, very soon. But it's coming. Oh dear I hope I haven't said too much. You'll see what he thinks of everything in due time, my dear.

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GoG,

OMGosh! I want to be a female version of Rick. Lol. I think I love Harry Potter enough that when I die I might just go to live in Harry Potter's world. LOL. I think it is great some of the little details you added. The sticking your hand in your pocket and you will find what you need from Nicholas. Great little bit!!! Plus the feeling when he took the wand was awesome too. I hope him and Harry can get along.

I'll be reading on to see what happens to Rick.

Megthechef43 aka Meg

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Spangles,

This was such a beautiful story and heartbreaking. I was crying by the end of it. The deal breaker was when Hermione named her daughter after this special little girl and was able to honor Tonks. I didn't understand what made Rosie special at first. I was curious to why no one else wanted to be her friend. I love that Andromeda made Tonks go to muggle school instead of being homeschooled. It seems very much like something she would do for Tonks.

I read the last line and I start crying all over again. Great story. I'm so glad I read this.

Megthechef43 aka Meg

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Ashley,

I like how this story is going. I was a little depressed when I found out she was pregnant but you have a better imagination than me. :)

FYI... When you are pregnant it is strongly recommended not to take a bath because the rise in internal body temp can be dangerous for the baby.

I'll be reading on...

Meg

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Ashley,

It could still be Draco's now that I have heard the math. Because technically most of the time conception happens about 2 weeks after you are said to be pregnant. Lol. So even though Hermione is 7 weeks pregnant she conceived 5 wks prior.

I'll be reading on...

Meg

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Ashley,

Yeah!! I'm so happy with this chapter that I could squeal!! Lol. She is going to give him a chance! Yeah.

I'll be reading on..

Meg

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Ashley,

Oh wow what a night. I hope she doesn't regret it because Draco is better than Ron!!!

I'll be reading on...

Meg

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Ashley,

I love that Hermione and Draco are sneaking around. Normally I don't condone cheating but Ron is slihgtly repulsive and horrible to Hermione. It's only a matter of time before she realizes she can do better.

I'll be reading on...

Meg

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Ashley,

Aww, they were able to be friends again "just like that". I'm glad that part of their friendship wasn't ruined. I love that speech and his sort of apology.

I'll be reading on...

Meg

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Ashley,

Oh my gosh... My stomach is doing flip flops. I love the ending to this chapter. It was cute and playful and how Ron had treated her, it was the perfect way to end the evening.

I'll be reading on...

Meg

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Ashley,

Aww how cute and it is the perfect set up to get them to spend more time together. I think it could be great place to add and anecdote about maybe a previous set up by his mother.

I'll be reading on...

Meg

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Ashley,

Oh gosh! Ron has a horrible temper. If I was Hermione I could see not being able to handle him. The bad table manners are horrible enough but then add in the explosive behavior and the destroying stuff I would leave him in an instant. Poor Hermione.

I'll be reading on...

Meg

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AshleyAlertts,

I like this chapter and I like that it was written in first person from Draco's POV. I think you had the right amount of attitude for Draco. Loren was cracking me up. I can just see her fawning all over Draco and poor Hermione. I hope she doesn't end up marrying a man out of obligation.

I liked the little insight in to Draco's train of thought about Astoria. You wrapped up that part of canon well. I could see that actually happening. I wish we knew more about Astoria from canon because I think of her as not too bright which is a baseless thought. Anyway, Great Chapter!

I'll be reading on...

Megthechef43 aka Meg

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