I absolutely love this story!!! Please write a sequel, your style is unique but you still keep JKR's flavor to it and I want to read more. I am a frustrated writer myself and am in awe of anyone brave enough to put themselves out there like this. Maybe one day I will get the courage to do so. I hope that if I do it is half as good as what you have written!Author's Response: Thank you mamabear,
I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I have started another but could not resist one more edit of this one.
The people here have been very helpful in their reviews. I'm sure if you were to try your hand at a story here, it would be good and pleasant learning.
Bill Mullens Report Review
I am enjoying this story very much! It is interesting to see Riddle as a child and I am very much looking forward to more! Post soon!! Please!?! Report Review
I love how you have reunited Harry and his friends with Lily and the Marauders! It is awesome! Just to let you know though, you gave Lily's friend Rose two different last names in this chapter. Keep up the good work! I am looking forward to more. Report Review
You are brilliant! (Absolutely mad, but brilliant!) This is the craziest take on Harry Potter I have read that still works! I look forward to the sequel! Report Review
I have loved this story and would love to see where their lives lead them. I espescially would like to see how Mr. Weasly does teaching his sons! I am sure it will be interesting how he deals with Gred and Forge when they cause mayhem. Sirius being a father figure to Malfoy would be a good read as well! Report Review
I have thoroughly enjoyed this series but would like to request you fix something in this chapter. You forgot to include Mondungus Fletcher in the list of order members that where lost to the war. He just died in the previous chapter so it is a little odd that you left him out.Author's Response: Good eye. Don't know how I missed that, but I will correct it immediately. Thanks! Report Review
This is a different variation of after the war but I am enjoying it very much. Please keep it coming! You are one of my favorite authors on the site because you aproach everything from a new angle! It is very refreshing!Author's Response: Oh yay, thank you! Yes, I do try to give old cliches a fresh approach. The idea of Narcissa having a daughter is way overdone, but as you've noticed, it's not done in the way in which I've been writing it. I imagine a much more friendly world. No less struggles, just more optimism. When you don't have a war hanging over your heads, you can afford to be more optimistic. ;) Report Review
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