Great Story, do you want me to make you a banner?Author's Response: That would be great!!! Thank you so much!! Report Review
well, i know that you are quite busy and all, but you have only replied to ONE review, and i think it would be really nice if you just replied to some of your fans! Not all, just a few! It'll only take you a few seconds, just say 'thank you' or something!
other than that, great chapter and an urge to read moreAuthor's Response: Thank you for your review. I hope you understand that I am very busy with real life stuff, and my top priority when it comes to HPFF is getting new chapters written, and reading my reviews. While I hardly have the time to do even this, I really don't have the time to reply all of the time, and I'm sorry if that makes you angry. I just think that people would prefer an update to a generic 'thank you' on their reviews. I appreciate each and every review more than the reviewers could ever know, and I hope you don't feel that my not responding reviews is me under-appreciating them. I always make a point of thanking my reviewers in the Author's Notes, and I really do mean that. Report Review
Aww, this made me so sad, yet so happy that they finally get to be together :) really nicely written.
one suggestion.maybe from fred's p.o.v, another one-shot?
i hope you write more !Author's Response: Thank you!! Yeah, another one from Fred's POV has always been floating around in my head but I don't think I'll be writing it anytime soon. I like this one as is too much, haha. Thanks again (: Report Review
oh my god. all i am thinking is 'please don't kill aiden' Report Review
i've just had the best pre new year's eve ever! Just reading this! you are so good at writing and this deserves to win every dobby award there is!
10/10 as always! Report Review
So many twists and turns. I can't stop reading! Report Review
So addicting! I really really am into this story. Can't wait to read more! 10/10 Report Review
This is SO GOOD! just wondering, what is the thingy on the floor that Kreacher did and Harry got mad at him for? I like how you make Ron sound so much like him... He's so funny!Author's Response: Hmm..I'm actually not sure :P
Thanks for your review! Report Review
This is one of the best stories i have ever read! I just can't wait to read more!Author's Response: oh thanks Harmoni. I tried to make it subtle. I'm glad you liked it Report Review
This is really beautifully written, and was actually quite intriguing.
I pulled up this story, expecting to find an h/hr fic, and instead I found a hidden gem.
I think you should reclassify who exactly you are talking about here.
weasley is not spelled wesly
beautiful story, and hope to read more 9/10
A/N unless you are going to include h/hr, you might want to change the ships/pairings to oc/oc or something like that
check out mine, click on my name :) Report Review
Hi.I love the ideas you choose for all of your stories. They are all amazing and creative. I never would have thought of this in a million years. One thing, though, is that your chapters are very long. That's usually a good thing, but if you split them up, its more appealing to the eye. When I read one of these chapters, my eye immediately goes to the long, chunky paragraphs. I think you should break them up a little so it will be more appealing. Amazing job though, I never thought about it this way.Author's Response: Thanks for the review, this is actually rather helpful! I've seen quite a few stories that only have a couple thousand words each chapter, and I wanted to make mine more like an actual novel, or more like the actual HP books. But if you think it would be better to change it slightly, I may try and re-work them slightly. About this story though, thanks! I really appreciate your view. Report Review
Really Nice! I hope you update soon!Author's Response: Thanks, I plan to as soon as I fix my microsoft word. Report Review
YOU HAVE GOT TO UPDATE! THIS IS SO GOOD! Report Review
OMG you updated! I AM SO HAPPY!!! I have been reading this story for the past year or so begging for an update! i must say, i was very sad when harry left. i would have loved an h/hr fic. So happy to hear about Ethan, I remember first reading about him a few months ago. he must be so cute!!! Please update soon! this is so interesting!!! 10/10 Report Review
Ok. So are Aunt Daisy and Uncle Viktor AU or are they supposed to be Aunt Petunia and Uncle Vernon. I actually like it, but Kami Kanto is a weird name for Harry's twin, considering they don't have the same last name. Why is that? I like how its like harry potter, but its not. read mine...? click on my name...review. Report Review
I like it. I always wanted to know a little more about riddle in the orphanage. I really like how you use Tom's character, and portray it in a little boy. Review mine.click on my name :) Report Review
I don't want to be harsh, but this isn't very good.
1. Grammar and spelling is bad, please proofread
2. This is very hard to believe.
3. Why in the world would Harry feel like crying?
I can't appreciate it. 3/10 Report Review
Please try to make this more believable. I mean, come on, Harry will obviously have more to say, and her being pregnant should be a surprise. You need work on portraying good emotion. Sorry, but I didn't like it.Author's Response: Thank you for the review anyway :) Report Review
This was so good! I almost wanted to cry, I was so happy. Maybe you could describe the wedding dress again. I sort of forgot what it looked like. I really hope you will write a sequel. You are an amazing author and I am so happy whenever i see you have added a chapter. Please update!Author's Response: Aww to be called amazing, i think it's the highst compliment to be paid. I am so sorry I have taken long in updating but right now school and writer's block are the ugly reasons that are holding me back. I am so flattered =) Report Review
I was going to write something like this! Instead I did Make you feel my love. I like it. I found it really interesting but sweet and I just love this song. Check out mine if you have the time, just click on Harmoni.Author's Response: Well thanks!! I tried looking for your story but couldn't find it, but I have read What I Was by you before and I really liked it. Anyways, I'll keep an eye open for your story. And thanks for the review!! Report Review
I have always been intrigued by this subject, and this is beautifully written. I love how you incorporated the magic, and you are truly an amazing author. Keep writing! Report Review
I can't believe there's only one more chapter! I would love a sequel, maybe with kids and stuff.? Please Please PLEASE write more!!! 10/10Author's Response: I'm heavily leaning on writing another sequel to this =) Report Review
This is the one of the BEST h/hr fics I have ever read. I hope you update soon! I love this story! Report Review
My absolute FAVORITE STORY!!! I've read this story over and over again, and I LOVE IT! I love all of your stories! It's pure h/hr goodness. Please post another story!Author's Response: wow I feel so honored you feel that way!! it really means alot. Report Review
I like it! Usually I'm not a fan of crossovers but this one was good! I can't believe it's your first story! It's SO GOOD! Update ASAP! Report Review
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