Reading Reviews From Member: dessertdisaster
  
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Review #1, by dessertdisasterHogwarts - a pirates tale: The Problem

13th May 2011:
wow. Wonderful... wonderful! I would kiss you, but here are the reasons why I'm not going to:
1) the plot is awesome, but your story could use a beta. Like, some sentences just don't CLICK, ya know what I mean? So, sentence structure.
2) punctuation/some spelling mistakes. No explaination necessary.
3) the characters are really good! all 'in character'.
4) you could be a girl, although you have 'thomas' in your name. If you are a boy, kisses! If girl, hugs! :)

ciao, keep writing,
Dessert Disaster

Author's Response: Yes i am a boy lol and i will look over the story so far and try to correct errors, kinda hard when you don't have an editor, some things you just don't catch right off.

Thank you btw for the review. It always makes me happy when someone enjoys what i write.


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Review #2, by dessertdisasterA Love Story to Last Five Minutes (Because a Lifetime is Just Too Long): Hit me Baby One More Time

10th April 2011:
Hey! Howcouldyoudothattodracoandhermione,THE BEST FU*KING COUPLE EVER?!?!?!?! AND, YOU ACTUALLY SEEM LIKE GOOD WRITERS, CEPT FOR THE HATE DRAMIONE PART. HHOOWW COULD YOU DO THAT, AND CALL IT A DRAMIONE?!? YA'LL ARE SICK!

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Review #3, by dessertdisasterSimply Irresistible: Draco, Draco what are we going to do with you?

9th April 2011:
I can't even put that in words...AMAZING only half describes it! The BEST DRAMIONE IVE EVER READ! WRITE MORE! PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE!

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Review #4, by dessertdisasterTruth or Dare?: Gryffindors+Slytherins+Ravenclaws+closed eyes= Disturbed teachers!

5th April 2011:
Love! :) :) :) u rock! Funny And silly! LOVE!

Author's Response: Oh thanks I'm glad that it's silly. And the next chapter should be there soon.

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Review #5, by dessertdisasterAmerica:Where the British Fall in Love: Chapter 2

5th April 2011:
LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE!

Author's Response: Thanks! That really means a lot that you like my story.

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Review #6, by dessertdisasterChoices: Chapter 7

5th April 2011:
One word: LOVE! I. LOVE. IT!

Author's Response: thanks, that means a lot!

keep the reviews coming
xxx


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