wow. Wonderful... wonderful! I would kiss you, but here are the reasons why I'm not going to:
1) the plot is awesome, but your story could use a beta. Like, some sentences just don't CLICK, ya know what I mean? So, sentence structure.
2) punctuation/some spelling mistakes. No explaination necessary.
3) the characters are really good! all 'in character'.
4) you could be a girl, although you have 'thomas' in your name. If you are a boy, kisses! If girl, hugs! :)
ciao, keep writing,
Dessert DisasterAuthor's Response: Yes i am a boy lol and i will look over the story so far and try to correct errors, kinda hard when you don't have an editor, some things you just don't catch right off.
Thank you btw for the review. It always makes me happy when someone enjoys what i write. Report Review
Hey! Howcouldyoudothattodracoandhermione,THE BEST FU*KING COUPLE EVER?!?!?!?! AND, YOU ACTUALLY SEEM LIKE GOOD WRITERS, CEPT FOR THE HATE DRAMIONE PART. HHOOWW COULD YOU DO THAT, AND CALL IT A DRAMIONE?!? YA'LL ARE SICK! Report Review
I can't even put that in words...AMAZING only half describes it! The BEST DRAMIONE IVE EVER READ! WRITE MORE! PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE! Report Review
Love! :) :) :) u rock! Funny And silly! LOVE!Author's Response: Oh thanks I'm glad that it's silly. And the next chapter should be there soon. Report Review
LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE!Author's Response: Thanks! That really means a lot that you like my story. Report Review
One word: LOVE! I. LOVE. IT!Author's Response: thanks, that means a lot!
keep the reviews coming
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