I love the story so far, and the characters are very fun! Huzzah Al and Tatum! James seems like a very self-centered yet somewhat clueless person.

The only thing I'm confused about is why, for the last several chapters, the beginning quotation marks are showing up as being on the bottom (,,like this) rather than on top ("like this"). It is a bit distracting while reading, and I don't think it's just my computer being funky.

Author's Response: Thank you. :) Your observation about James is quite spot on, I'd say. :)
As for the quotation, it's because I have one really old and one new computer, so when I type on the old one, the quotation shifts. It's weird, I know. I'll probably fix it sometime in the future, when I find more time.

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Holy wow...tactics.
(Very impressive. Very.)
This was very well written! I'm looking forward to seeing how their tactics play out on the field.

Author's Response: Glad you liked the tactic stuff, it was good fun to write! Thanks for reviewing :)

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Funny thing...I have a plant named Hester, too! But she doesn't move. Grows really fast, though. She's a Victoria Speedwell, not a spider plant or a variation thereof.
I'm liking the story so far! It's very interesting.

Author's Response: Haha, what a coincidence! Are you sure she's not actually capable of conscious thoughts? Plants are devious things.

Thank you for reviewing! Glad you liked it ♥

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Just to let you know, there's somebody on fan fiction dot com who's copied one of your stories and is pretending to be you.

Author's Response: Could you link me please? You could send me it on formspring. My pennname is just dobbyismyheroHP

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There is somebody on fanfiction (dot) net who has copied this story. Her current username is cherrypie03601, and she's used the same title as well. She's also copied other authors in the past. Just thought you would like to know.

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There is a girl on fanfiction (dot) net who is copying this story and The 10 Rules of Dating (and even using the same names). She has almost the same username as you, except with another 0 in front of the other numbers.

Author's Response: So many plagiarizers, so little time -_- Thanks, I'll take care of it.

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I was so excited when I saw this was updated and then as soon as I started reading my mom called me to dinner. I was like- what? no! NO! I NEED TO READ THIS CHAPTER FIRST IT'S IMPORTANT TO MY WELL-BEING. AND I DO NOT WANT TO WAIT ANOTHER HALF-HOUR TO READ IT, THANK YOU VERY MUCH.
This is a great chapter. James truly rocks :)

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This is a really good story! I was very surprised to see that Harry's animagus form was something other than a stag, but I think you explained it very well!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I confess at first I thought of making him a stag but then I thought that his form should be different from the curse. Glad you're enjoying it!

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This was beautiful :)

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Way to go both of them for overreacting.wow.
Yikes.

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This. Was. Epic.
I love the kiss- squid poo? Priceless.

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Yay! An update!
Loved it, as always. Poor Lily, though. Such terrible timing for her to tell Finn.

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Lorcan is adorable. Even if he does think he's 'older'. I love this story so far- please update soon!!!

Author's Response: Next Chapter is in the queue :)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Lily just needs to get rid of the date already...plus it would make Finn happy. :) Her cousins would get over it eventually.
And James being the "smart child".hahaha.

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