Ah, I see that you've managed to fix the spacing now. It looks a lot better now but I think you might need to spell check a bit...for example it says 'the bat spoke to Remus' instead of the hat (the sorting hat) so maybe a bit of proof reading and spell checking is needed. Aside from that, great ideas! Keep writing! :) Can't wait for more.Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and I appreciate how you tell me what's wrong or stuff I should fix. A lot of the times it's just "Good story," so I like yours better. Thanks again! xxx Report Review
Interesting start. :) Can't wait for more posts! But perhaps you want to fix up the spacing because it look's a little funky right now, or perhaps it's just my computer?Author's Response: Thanks! And it's probably NOT your computer. I write my stories on Microsoft first, and then copy/paste. I'm trying to fix the spacing when I transfer it over, so hopefully it'll get prettier. Thanks again for the review! Report Review
okay, so apparently you can't leave more than 1 review per chapter, and since I've already reviewed on ch 76, i'll review on ch 75 this time. :P
Your story is back up now!! :) but PLEAASEEE when are you posting more?! :( Report Review
hi, i'm not sure if this is the right place to write this...
but i am in the midst of planning and slowly beginning to write a story...
i was wondering if it must reference the past as it is something that happens to the girl as she grows up, and she is one of the main characters that the story revolves around...
it will not be of graphic nature, just when she is confronted and cornered, and the scene will skip to her emotions and feelings after wards when she is alone.would that violate any rules?
thank-you for the many tutorials by the way, it's helped me realize what is and what isn't appropriate. Report Review
i just recently started reading fanfics again, and am glad that i stumbled upon yours.
i know life gets hectic, which is why i'm not sure if i'm ever going to start writing fanfics again, but i want to let you know that i thnk your's is great, i enjoy reading it alot, especially because it's so realistic, well...the whole...people and their emotions, and problems and how lily is not perfect, the fact that she has flaws...etc.
though slightly frustrating at times, i'm glad you put all those chapters in, and i feel like it's easier to relate to, to have a lily with flaws than to have a 'perfect' love story...
anyways, i can't wait for more! esp. b/c lily and james aren't officially together yet..well..again/they haven't been engaged for the 2nd time yet/still haven't married...
i hope you haven't forgotten this fanfic and the readers :) can't wait for more! Report Review
Finally all caught up! Really great ideas, I can't wait for more! :)
Also I have a side question, did you ever post ff on sites other than hpff? I can't help but think your username is familiar to an author I use to follow either on ffnet or the threads/website from warnerbros...which is a long time ago, i know haha, but just wondering! :) Report Review
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