I love this story so far; it's super, super creative. I just love your take on Scorpius (both in this story and your other stories) and how he's so different from Scorpiuses in other stories. And is it a bit too early for me to start shipping Lucy and Scorpius already? I hope it's not, because I can already imagine all the awkward biscuit-filled scenes they'll have. :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Ah, I'm fond of my pathetic artsy Scorpiuses. You may ship them, although I hope I can surprise you!

Thank you for reviewing ♥

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Oh, poor Narcissa. I kind of feel bad for her, but I didn't really like Lucius much, anyway, so... I actually want Oliver to make a reappearance, though I know Narcissa has to end up with Lucius, because they're cannon and all that. Great chapter, though; please update soon! :D ♥

Author's Response: I think Oliver will make a reappearance. I'll try to update soon. :)

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Wow, this was absolutely stunning and amazing and gorgeous and a million more adjectives that would still not be enough to describe it.

WHY IS EVERYTHING YOU WRITE SO AMAZING?

*ahem* This was such a beautiful piece. I loved how Bill and Fleur really did fit the fairytale of Beauty and the Beast, especially de Beaumont's original version, but the ending was rather different. In the beginning, Fleur could be compared to Beauty and Bill, the Beast, but near the end, Fleur seemed to be the Beast and Bill was more like how Beauty was described in the original fairytale.

The imagery in this story was just so stunning. It was like poetry and flowed so well, too. This review seems inadequate to describe your masterpiece, thank you so much for writing this, it was an absolute pleasure to read :)

Author's Response: Thank you!

AND IT ISN'T, I PROMISE. This was the product of a lot of random paragraphs being cobbled on top of each other.

I absolutely think Bill and Fleur are a perfect fit for the fairytale Beauty and the Beast. de Beaumont's version, while a classic, I feel like has been told and retold so many times that I didn't really want to stay faithful to it.

And yes! You got their role reversal exactly!

Thank you! Masterpiece it definitely isn't, but this review is so sweet! Thanks for reading! :)

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Even though Luna is a rather hard character to write, I think you did an amazing job of writing her. I love her imagination and her relationship with her mother. I used to wonder what Luna's mother would be like, and I think you portrayed her mother wonderfully, and it's easy to see that her mother did have a big role in growing Luna's imagination. I love Luna's imagination, and I think it's one of the things that always stuck with her, even when she grew up. Your writing is absolutely lovely, and I enjoyed this piece very much, especially since there aren't really that many stories about Luna as a child.

Author's Response: Luna is a challenge, I do agree -- and yet, I love writing her! She's cropped up a surprising amount in my writing, with this and this story's last chapter, and in a short story and a duel entry as well. Her imagination is such a huge factor in how she IS, really, and I do think it comes into play a lot in how I write her.

There should be more stories about the Weasleys as children, in my opinion -- too often people focus on drama and whatnot, and lose sight of the goodness in the simplicity of a story. (I'll clamber down off my soapbox now.) Thank you for taking the time to review this, and for saying such complimentary things! It really means a lot to me! ♥

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Ugh, I still don't know if I should shop Florpius or Florbus. It's mind boggling. I think I'll have to wait for the next few chapters and then make my decision. What if Scorpius and Lucy ended up together like in Starving Artists? lol, that would be hilarious.

Moving on from all that shipping weirdness... I loved this chapter! It was so funny; I absolutely adore Flora and all her awkwardness and all the awkward moments in this fic!

Author's Response: haha, I knew that as soon as I introduced a Lucy, I'd inevitably end up shipping them at some point! but the ships in this story are fun to write indeed. I'm looking forward to seeing how you all react to some of the later chapters!
thanks so much for reviewing, glad you liked it! ♥

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There are just a few things I would like to point out (again, sorry!):
1)"Within a few seconds, I heard, 'Hermione! Your back!'" The "your" should be changed to "you're".
2)"...I’ve just got back from playing Quidditch with the boys, their still playing." The "their" should be changed to "they're".
3)"'Ginny, we know your decent...". The "your" should be changed to "you're".

Anyways, I really liked this story! I thought it was really funny that Ron didn't know what Cinderella was and yet he was almost acting it out in real life with Hemione. I also liked how Harry and Ginny seemed smug when Ron and Hermione saw each other. Also, I really liked the simile in this: "Her voice rang like church bells, music to my ears.".

Author's Response: Aw, thank you for all the lovely reviews! It means a lot! Love Livvy x

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I love how Fleur and Bill are compared to the The Beauty and the Beast. I think that the fairytale really fits them well.

There are a few things I noticed though, so I'll list them out:
1) "Everyone was on the other side of the room, Fleur crying quietly to herself..." The comma between "room" and Fleur should be changed to a colon because after "room" comes a list of what they were doing, and colons are usually used to introduce a list.
2)"'Bill, Bill, your avake!'". The "your" should be changed to "you're" because "your" indicates that "avake" belongs to Bill, but "you're" means "you are", which would make more sense in this sentence.
3)"Had she just, disagreed with Mum, famous for her temper? " There shouldn't be a comma between "just" and "disagreed", and there should be a "who was" after the comma that comes after "Mum".

Sorry for all that mechanical stuff, I just thought it might be helpful to point that out. Other than that this first chapter was very good and I love the characterizations of Bill and Fleur!

Author's Response: I will be sure to change them, I'm not the best with all the mechanical things, thank you for pointing them out!

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Wow, I loved how Minnie's triplets are all named after the previous Weasley women in the story! I think that was a great touch and a great way to wrap up the story.

There is just one thing I'd like to point out; "Beuxbatons" is spelled Beauxbatons.

This was a lovely story to read; great job!

Author's Response: Oooh, I should change that, thanks for pointing that out! :) and thank you!

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It was rather sad that McGonagall had to die, and I'm glad that Lily named her daughter after her! I also liked how Lily ended up with Scorpius--usually it's Rose and Scorpius that end up together, and I'm glad how you changed that made this chapter original. I love the theme at the end of the chapters where the daughters featured in the next chapter are born.

Author's Response: Yep, I used to really love Scorpius and Lily, but now I'm more ScoRose. but I still like Lily/Scorpius xxx

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I was so sad to hear that Jasmine died in her sixth year. I loved the bit at the end about Lily, and how it relates to both the previous chapter (because it is similar to that part about Molly and Ginny) and how it links to the next chapter (because the next chapter is about Lily).

Author's Response: Thank you for the review :) and I know, I liked Jasmine!x

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Hello! I'm here with your reviews from winning my challenge; I'm so sorry it's taken so long, things have been very busy for me at the moment.

Anyways, I really like the story so far. However, I do think you could elaborate more on different some things, because it seemed kind of list-like at first. But other than that, this was a very enjoyable chapter, and I love the last paragraph with Ginny, and I think it fits very well with leading into the next chapter, which is about Ginny.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review, though I don't know if I'm going to edit, because my laptop broke and I didn't have it saved on a PenDrive, so I'll see! Love Livvy x

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I think that James likes Kara...! This chapter was very funny, too. There was only one thing I noticed: in "...and was also quiet the bachelor", "quiet" is supposed to be spelled as "quite" because "quiet" and "quite" have two completely different meanings.

Author's Response: thanks for that! for some reason, that always seems to cause me trouble lol

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I love the character of Rose, her life does seem fairly chaotic, and I hope I'll find out more about Michelle in the next chapter. I also love James' funny pick up lines, I hope he has more!

Author's Response: i'm sure jamesy does lol

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Hello! I'm here to give you the rest of the reviews from my challenge. I'm so sorry that I haven't done it earlier, it's just that RL has been very busy, so I don't have much time lately.

Anyways, I love the story so far. I like how Kara and her mother are characterized and their relationship. I also love the story's humour. Overall it's a very good story so far, and I'm off to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: thanks so much!

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Fred and Scarlett and definitely so cute together, and this date was just so very, very sweet. Lovely chapter, I think I like this date the best of all out of the three of them.

One thing I thought I should point out is that in this phrase "she hoped they would last quiet a long time", it should be spelled "quite" instead of "quiet" because "quite" and "quiet" have two different meanings.

Other than that, I found this story very enjoyable, so wonderful job! :D

Author's Response: thanks so much for the gramatical errors you pointed out! i'll go back and edit everything when i get a chance and i'm so glad you liked the story! it means so much

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Another great chapter! They are very cute together. I like how Scarlett was so angry when she was told to change out of her outfit, that was funny. I also liked that it was George and Angelina together and the concert, because later on they do get married.

Author's Response: i thought that adding george and angelina would be cute (: i thought they were so cute in the books and just couldn't help but add them!

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This was a very good start to a sequel to "Think of Me Naked." At first I was a bit confused as to why she didn't want to date him after she had just snogged him in Hogsmeade, but then it explained that she wanted to be friends first.

There were a few grammar/spelling mistakes dotted here and there; the one I noticed most was that Hogsmeade should be spelled with an e at the end.

Overall, the story was well-written and I loved the characters of Fred and Scarlett, and as a couple, they are rather cute. I think this was an excellent sequel, so great job! :D

Author's Response: thanks so much! i hadn't noticed the gammar mistakes, but i'll certaintly go and correc those. thanks for the awesom review though!

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This story was so cute and humorous. I loved it; it was so very funny :) And I think that Fred would be the kind of person to ask something like that. Overall, wonderful story!

Author's Response: thanks so much

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This story was very cute, and rather original, too, since I've never read a story where Rose and Scorpius were late for the Hogwarts Express and had to wait together.

I don't know if it's just me,but Scorpius tends to say "bloody" a lot. And in this sentence, "Grab my arm and we shall Apperate there.", it is supposed to be spelled like "Apparate" with an a.

Other than that, lovely story, I very much enjoyed it! :D

Author's Response: thanks for the corrections and leaving a review! it means so much!

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I'm very sorry I haven't reviewed this earlier! Anyways, great job, and nice start with this story! Thanks a lot for participating in my challenge! :)

Author's Response: That's ok as I'm sorry for not responding lol :)
Due to the House Cup review task I have seen this review and thanks a lot. The challenge was great fun :P

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I love Lily's character in this story, and the part about the barriers in the beginning was a great touch, and I think really sort of captured what the story was about. I also really love Tina! Overall, great job so far.

Author's Response: Thanks, this review was awesome!

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Wow, that was so sad. Very well done with this, I love how Dennis reflects on him and Colin, and I love the end with the goodbye colin part, even though it was so, so sad, and the use of the song was a good touch, too.

Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it! I can't wait for the results! :) x

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Great job! This story was rather funny, and I really like Aurore's characterization. The story sounds very interesting so far, and I like how Aurore and Fred are actually enemies because of Brigette and James.

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Wonderful story! I especially love the characterization of Rita, and I love the part at the end with that Evan guy. I think Roxanne really develops a lot as a character, so great job!

Author's Response: thanks so much! i actually loved writing roxanne because i could develop her as a character as much as i wish! but thanks for the review (: it means a lot!

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This is a wonderful story! I think that you've captured the Black sisters' personalities wonderfully, and I love the way you've written Narcissa. I can't wait to find out more about that Oliver boy, great story! :)

Author's Response: Hi, Ramya! Thanks for reviewing my story. Spoiler Alert! You will find out about Oliver in Chapter 4.

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