Aww cute, small story. Anyways glad I came back and finished reviewing because I myself love getting reviews. :)Author's Response: thanks! i appreciate it a lot. Report Review
I feel like a terrible person because I never came back and reveiwed it. Yes I know I'm a crappy fan, but I tried. Anyways this story is still cute and I hope to read more of your stories in the future.Author's Response: awww thanks :) Report Review
Okay so far, so good. Like your veiw on dating its pretty funny. I feel bad for Rose that her Dad died. :(Author's Response: Why thank you! I appreciate your review! Report Review
I wonder what was in the Great Hall. Well I expect to hear from you soon. Good job thuslly. Report Review
Like it, you ease into the story. So far so sweet. :) Looking forward to see some drama. Report Review
I think it'd be funny if ontop of James being her stalker, she has a pretty boy stalker, and James has to compet with Pretty boy Beauxtons dude for the best stalker. Or maybe it's the lack of sleep getting to me. :) Pick ur choose.Author's Response: lol, I LOVE your suggestion! I was tired too, but I think that this would have been a good idea, had I not written eleven more chapters afterwards... I'll think about it. It WOULD be funny, wouldn't it? Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Well this story is actually a delight, keep it up, I think i leave this reveiw at short and sweet.Author's Response: Oh my goodness! You don't know how good it feels to ACTUALLY get a review (I sound desperate)! Thanks for having the time to read it :) Report Review
Okay so at first I was all: Another Cliched Love Of A Clumsy Girl, we've all heard one. But then when she caught the snitch with her hair...favoriting story as we speak. :) Love it, that girl's got spunk.Author's Response: this review honestly made my day! thank you! When I started this my deepest fear was that it would be an utter cliche, but I agree, my main goal was to give Piper spunk :P Thanks for the review and the next chapter is already in the queue so it should be up soon :) ~Ria Report Review
Wow, this chapter was really awesome. Good job, sorry if you felt like I was beign a negative Nelly on the last review, I always hate pointing out mistakes authors make (I feel like such a hypocrite) Anyways, I liked this chapter, look forward to seeign more from you.Author's Response: i really appreciate people who are willing to correct my writting :) thank you! :) your reviews gave me the motivation to update more often and hope that there are people out there who are reading what i write! dont be afraid to critique anything that i write :) Report Review
Okay, so there were some grammer mistakes, but those can easily be fixed. The first bit is alittle...I don't want to say dull, but yeah its not the most adventurous. Please do not be offended by this, I do like your story, I just wanted to offer some consructive critism. But all aside that, it's a cute story. Report Review
:( Poor Baby. Tom honorable, I like him so far. I'd like to see some serious pranking action though :) Lots of mischeif to be explored.Author's Response: i have most of it planned out, i might add a pranking scene just for you, though :D Report Review
Well I like the character, bad-girl thing, I like my characters like that. Hope Dom is happy and hooks up with Tom. Not without a little drama of course. :)Author's Response: of course, drama is key :D Report Review
Your plot is very original, and I get all the nerdy refrences: My mother is fairly nerdy, enducing me to know the ups and downs of nerd language.Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you get all the nerdy references. My dad is a nerd, I grew up watching the star wars episodes :) x Report Review
I like your characterization so far, wonder were it goes...Author's Response: Thankyou so much!! You'll just have to wait and see... :P ~carellio Report Review
Hm. So apperantly Sirius has a death wish? Lol, well it's...I guess you could say akward to act as if that Author's Response: Yeah I Guess You Could Say He Does...The Conflicting Loyalties Make It Hard For Sirius...Thanks For The Reviews :) x Report Review
Ha-ha I love your story! I like how confident and brave she is. Hope her and Sirius end up together and happy. :) Im a sucker for happy endings...anyways love your story.Author's Response: It Felt So Good To Be Able To Write A Confident Girl In One Of My Stories For Once...I Knew She'd Have To Be Confident & Brave With James As Her Brother...I Really Want There To Be A Happy Ending Too So I Suppose Its Lucky I'm The Author Haha :) Thanks For The Review x Report Review
Now they know that Albus almost kissed her...wonder whats gonna happen between them.Author's Response: Omigosh, you dont even know how much your reviews mean to me :) thank you so much! I appreciate them so much!! Report Review
Ha-ha chubby bunny. Well good to know Xandra like nutella, cause now I know I'm not the only one. That stuff is crazy good...Author's Response: THANK YOU SO MUCH! Your reviews mean so much to me. I was getting kinda dissapointed cause of the...lets say...lack of...reviews :) but your reviews are keeping me going!! :D -Alex Report Review
Glad Xandra made the team, can't wait to see her do crazy embarrisng stuff.Author's Response: :D Dont worry, she does plenty to embarrass herself (and possibly others) later on :D Thanks for reviewing (I might not be able to respond to all reviews cause phone is being a stupido hehe) -Alex Report Review
Bahahahaha, Lol. I like how crazy Xandra is. Also Albus's description is hot too. :)Author's Response: HAHAHA,thanks, I especailly like Albus's desription too :) -Alex Report Review
Lol, I have a friend named Xandira, who is equally spontaneous. Anyways the first chap. Is a riot, can't wait to see your plot build. :) Report Review
I adore the beggining of your story, brilliant. Report Review
Hey I like your story, it's really creative! I think maybe you could spice up Ed's life a bit with drama, and romace with Albus, but it's cool. Anyways, I would love to have story graphics for my story: 'Devilish' I don't know how good the actual story is, but if your up for it then cool. Thanks! :)Author's Response: Thank you! I have quite a few chapter written already with impending drama, but surely I will spice it up. I was wondering when it would be too soon to make things crazy for her, and now im convinced! And I would love to! I'll take a look at your story. How do I go about sending you images? Report Review
Like I said before, love the story, not to happy with the grammar, but still, good story. And maybe a little less cussing would be nice :PAuthor's Response: thanks or the feed back im trying to get the next chapter written love constructive critism so thankyou x Report Review
Really lke your story I just think that A little more spell check will do you good. :) But overall nice story. Report Review
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