Oh my goodness my dear. You've done it again. Written another brilliant chapter. I absolutely loved it! Gahhh Dom can't get over Aidan. I love them together. Poor Aidan. :/ But gah!! AGGY AND JAMES. OH MY ROWLING I LOVE THOSE TWO. Gahh. That's all I have to say. GAH!!
I love you. I love this story. You're amazing. That is all.
~Mischief_managed18 Report Review
Gin-gin!! My love! My dear! My amazing writer and friend!
I love you. Just sayin'. So excited that you're writing a Scorose now. You can take over for me since Fallin' is almost over :/
Anyways, getting off topic. I love that this is from Scorp's perspective. Absolutely love it! I'm so in love with this kid already so good job on that ;P Question, who would you use to portray Scorp? And Rose? Curious.
I can't wait for stuff to start happening :D that ending already has me hooked. I can't wait to read the next chapter so WRITE WOMAN, WRITE!
A few typos here and there so you may want to either go over it yourself or have someone edit it for you *cough* me *cough*
Anywho, lovely story! I love you and I'm excited for this story!
~Mischief_managed18Author's Response: Mischief!!! I love seeing when you review missy! :D I love you 2! I still cant believe its nearly over. Im gonna have to read it again after its done. I love him too, hes such a sweetheart! Yay Im doing good! :D *happy dance* Hmm... I see Scorpius being Alex Pettyfer (hope thats how its spelt) and I dont really know who I would use to portray Rose cause I always think of a redhaired Hermione. Who would you use? I KNOW I CANT WAIT EITHER! IM WRITING, IM WRITING! GBut, Im going to update In Time first. Im so excited that your excited! I love this story. :) More soon, Gin-gin Report Review
Poor Lily... I couldn't even imagine being in that situation though I think I would act a lot like her. I don't think I would be able to ruin my friends' happy moods with my news and I would act the same way towards Petunia. Gah I understand why Petunia is so upset, but kicking out your own sister? And your younger one at that?! Petunia's going to be in for a nasty shock later when dealing with the whole house on her own.
Another wonderfully well written chapter. You can't help but feel as Lily is and it really draws you into the story. Good job on that! I can't wait for the next chapter, you're doing a fantastic job. :)
~Mischief_managed18Author's Response: Thank you, that review was awesome! I really felt like this chapter developed her and changed her into her new self, the one who has to survive.
I would react the same too, I think. Which is why Lily reacts this way. She is me!
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Good job my dear. :P Few mistakes here and there like the "I'm Rose" we said. and a couple other things here and there. You my dear, seem to be sticking hard to some stereotypes with Slytherin. xD But overall, pretty good chapter, can't wait to see where you go with it. :D
~Mischief_managed18Author's Response: Oops haha :P darn you evil typos!!! And I'm sorry you know I don't mind the snakes S2 there's actually going to be an introduction to a character in Slytherin I'm just not sure when it's going to happen :P
Thank you love bug it makes me happy to know you enjoy it S2
Bella Bug Report Review
Why hello there my dear :P
Okay I know I read this ages ago, but I never reviewed, so I figured I'd go ahead and do that now.
I think this will be a really interesting story and I can't wait to see where you go with it. You've created some great characters and I think you can do a wonderful job with them. It is sad, but I still enjoyed this story so far. :)
S2 S2 S2 to my dear friend,
~Mischief_managed18Author's Response: Why Hello :D So thank you for reviewing even though you read it a while ago the review means just as much :D Thank you!!! Cassi right now is my favorite but I'm not sure how the story will play out just yet...it's a little tough to write :P
I'm glad you're enjoying it :D S2 to you too :D
Bella Bug Report Review
I mean... her plan worked... ish.
But oh goodness the whole part with her and James dancing was beyond amazing, it made me incredibly happy.
Then the letter. Poor Lily. I can't even imagine how that must feel. Losing both parents in the matter of a few months can't exactly be the easiest of things.
I think you captured all of her emotions quite well throughout this whole chapter. Her sadness, anger, everything was very well written and I applaud you for that. Great job my dear.
And I love that she fell asleep in his arms. Gahh so adorable... Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work.
~Mischief_managed18Author's Response: That's basically the reaction I was going for. Does that make me sadistic. Why yes, yes it does.
Yeah, that was one of those scenes that just flowed from my fingers as I typed. I like it too!
Yes. I was going to have Amos attack her, but I also didn't want that abuse. Also, I figured I should really encourage sadistic b-wordy revenge, so I changed it.
I love that too, it's just SOOO CUUUTE!!! Report Review
Mwuahaha!! :D I'm so flippin' excited now!
Oh gosh, that stupid git. I knew it from the beginning, can't wait to see how her plan plays out though, that should be quite interesting to say the least. I'm so glad her dress is blue, and silver accessories for a blue dress are always incredible looking. I actually did that for my senior prom, so maybe I'm a bit biased. :P I can't wait to see how the whole ball scene looks and how everyone takes to her dress and his whole plan of hers. Gahh
Keep it up, off to read the next chapter! (Which is sadly the last as of now. :/)
~Mischief_managed18Author's Response: Yeah, Amos is just SO TERRIBLE! You'll probably be surprised at how it plays out, but you'll just have to wait and see.
That dress is based off my Homecoming dress from this year, except mine was much shorter.
Yeah, I'll try to get on that. Unfortunately, I also hve an essyay and an English project and a History term sheet to do. :( Report Review
Argh!! Okay seriously, why doesn't she just drop Amos already? He's bothering me and it's chapter 3. I love Sirius. And Remus of course. :P And James at the end of the chapter, bloody brilliant and such a sweetheart. I mean come on, Lily. He's singing you to sleep and rubbing your back. MARRY HIM ALREADY! *calms down*
Okay... it was a brilliant chapter and you've officially got me hooked. OFF TO THE NEXT ONE! :D
~Mischief_managed18Author's Response: Yeah, Amos is just a twat. I love Sirius too, he's just so much fun!!! And Remus is awesome, and James is just perfect. (That reaction, the 'just marry him' part made me laugh. Thank you! :D)
See you next chapter! Report Review
Urghhh why Lily, why?! I mean come on, he's kissing you that soon into the first date and then immediately asking you to be his girlfriend? Something fishy about that. *sigh*
I love that James is jealous, but isn't insistent on breaking them apart. At least, not yet. :P I can't wait to see where you go with this! Goodness.
OH! And I just wanted to say I have the same taste in colors as miss Lily. Just about everything I own is blue, it's a bit ridiculous but it makes me so flippin' happy. RANDOM FACTS, YAY! :D
Anyways, yet another brilliant chapter and now I'm off to read the next (I'm sure equally brilliant) one. :P
~Mischief_managed18Author's Response: Yeah, Lily's not exactly an expert on boys. Poor Lily...
I figured that mature James wouldn't try to break them up because he doesn't want to hurt Lily and right now her makes her happy.
Yeah, so do I, though my stuff isn't all blue. I just WITH it was.
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Well, I must say, I'm quite intrigued already.
I'm not normally one for Jily stories, but I figured I'd give yours a shot because you're an awesome author. :)
Glad I gave it a shot. Really sad with her mum dying from the car crash and all that, and with Petunia being a brat at the beginning, but I loved this whole chapter. You've done a brilliant job so far and I can't wait to read the next chapter, so I'm off!
Keep up the good work,
~Mischief_managed18Author's Response: Thanks! That's one of the greatest compliments from someont, when you write so that they like a pairing they normally wouldn't like. It makes me all warm and fuzzy inside. :D I'm really glad you liked it, it's different to write and I like it. Report Review
Ahhh!! So glad you didn't abandon it and that you simply rewrote it. I'm already extremely excited to see where you go with it. Though I don't know how the boys will function and actually manage to survive without her. o.O
Gahhh this chapter was so emotional. I teared up a few times while imagining what her parents must be feeling. Such a horrible state to see your daughter in. And the whole thing with her mother pouncing on the boys, I loved it. xD
Wonderfully well written. Though at times the tense seems a bit awkward, that could just be me. Oh well, overall it was fantastic. :)
I hope this review means the box won't eat me o.O that would be unfortunate. You're awesome, this story is awesome, keep it up. I seriously can't wait to see where you go now!! :D
Sigh. On a side note, I want Draco. That is all. :P
S2 (heart!!) for my lovely writer,
~Mischief_managed18Author's Response: Haha thanks so much for the kind review! I'm glad I didn't abandon it either, because I know I would regret it later! Oh yeah, Harry and Ron, they will definitely be in a mess for a while. Poor guys. :(
Haha you really think so? I had trouble writing it because I'm just not very emotional when it comes to writing stuff like this! I don't tear up or anything so I never really know how well I do. Super weird, I know O_o. I know!! I feel so bad for doing that to her parents! Their only child:(.
Crap I knoww! Or at least I caught a few errors after it was validated. I had written the 2nd part of this in Hermione's pov (don't ask me how that's possible, its hard to explain) so I realized I had left an 'us' and a 'my' in their and it made me mad! I was like "Gosh dang it! Really?!" I'll have to edit those parts when I add a chapter image.
This review was seriously awesome! Thank you so so so much for leaving it for me! I was having doubts about it before you reviewed, so thank you thank you! You have just given me the motivation I needed to write the next chapter! It may be a little while bc I'm not a very quick writer but I will try my hardest to get it up asap!
Thanks again! You also awesome and so is Fairytaled! I love it!
On the same side not, I would like Draco also. Don't we all? ;)
Thanks so much!!
~Harmonia Report Review
Ohhh dear. Yet another brilliant chapter. AND AL ASKED HER OUT! They're so freaking cute together, I can't stand it. Al is flippin' adorable, I absolutely love that kid. Oh gosh, and the whole Scorpius/ Rose thing is wonderful. I love that Ron just started laughing. Man this story is coming along wonderfully, as all your stories do. Can't wait for another update. :P
~Mischief_managed18 Report Review
Gahhh. I loved it. I absolutely loved this ending and I'm glad that you aged them flawlessly throughout the story. It wasn't too much and it wasn't too little. You did a brilliant job and I swear I was tearing up during that speech. I've always sort of envisioned how my years at Hogwarts would be and just having someone say all those things seems to really hit home, you know? Gahh. This story was utterly brilliant my dear and I'm glad I finally came back to read it. You have a way with words, don't ever doubt that. I'm glad that Al was able to move on and that it appears they'll have their happily ever after (for the most part. ;P) Goodness dear, this was amazing. Keep it up. :)
and here's a true *mischief managed* for this story. Great job and congrats on finishing it. :)Author's Response: I did a little happy dance in my chair after reading this. I'm really glad you lked it and if I'm ever valedictorian for anything, that's how I'm going to do my speech. I used my own imaginary years at Hogwarts to write this story because I thought they deserved a real sounding speech. I wanted it sincere, so I kind spliced together the Harry Potter books, a bunch of fan fictions, and high school. Apparentl it worked!
Al deserved some peace afer the pile of Hippogriff poo that was his life. Yes, they lived happily ever after.
I'm so glad you liked it and thanks once more!
I solemnly swear that I am up to no good... Report Review
AHH! As soon as they were up on the tower I wanted to scream at Lyra to turn into a hawk. So freaking glad that she killed Rookwood in the process. That bastard deserved it. especially after killing Allison. Maybe that's why she was so bent on having them win. Though I think she's also just a good person like that. Argh. MUST READ MORE
~Mischief_managed18Author's Response: Good prediction! But no swearing in reviews, the moderators don't like it! And yes, that's so why she did it. She wanted revenge on a truly sick and twisted person. Grrr, Rookwood... Report Review
Ahh! Bloody brilliant. Having Allison explain the whole concept of deep magic and allowing them to be able to turn that way was bloody brilliant. I love that Astoria was prepared and pretty much had this thing planned down to a t. I can't wait to see what happens during this little battle xD
GAHH! Brilliant. Ta ta for now, off to read more! Yay!
~Mischief_managed18Author's Response: I needed to throw Allison back into the mix since when I originally wrote her in I had a completely different plot in mind. This is how she came out, and it nicely explained the girl's far advanced magic.
Astoria is brilliant. She's jus amazing and I wish she was my mum!
Thank you! Report Review
Ohhh Victoire, I could hug you right now. xD Bloody awesome. Reminds me of Aragorn in LOTR when he's looking for Merry and Pipin. Argh. I NEED MORE STORY!! So freaking excited right now. Short chapter but it was bloody brilliant. I'm glad Al was the one to find the evidence originally. Proves that these kids are useful. Keep up the good work.
~Mischief_managed18Author's Response: LOL, I was reading Sherlock Holmes when I wrote that chapter so it just overflowed into Victoire. Also, I kind of liked showing the Aurors that Muggles weren't so stupid after all.
XD I like getting people addicted to my stories. It makes me feel good! Thanks again! Report Review
Mwuahahaha I absolutely love Lyra and Lily right now. I love that Lyra immediately understood what her mother had said and that she is beyond determined to win this fight. I'm so bloody excited right now. That little bit of taunting at Rockwood was awesome :P It definitely helped lighten the mood somewhat and I'm glad for that. Oh gosh I can't wait to see what comes from all of this. Keep it up missy!
~Mischief_managed18Author's Response: Lyra is was too boss to take imprisonment sitting down, so I gave her airs and total confidence. She needed it and so did Lily. Also, it made me feel better for landing them in a dungeon. Thanks as always! Report Review
Ahhh. Good old Minnie. xD I absolutely love that woman. I have so much respect for her. On another note, I love that this chapter was from Al's POV. I also loved his little talk with James. It would seem as if James isn't as dim as we think him to be. And Roxy's little comment to Al about Lyra being worth it. *sigh* I loved it. THEY NEED TO FIND LILY AND LYRA! GAH
okay, done with that now. No more yelling for miss MIschief. hehe miss Mischief. I'm weird. I apologize. I'll continue reading now and stop freaking you out. ONWARD!
~Mischief_managed18Author's Response: Yeah, Minnie is a pretty BA old woman.
We needed to see what was going on, hence Al.
I always figured that James had to have his moments and this was definitely one of them! He's always stupid, insensitive, and totally obsessed with pranking so I thought I'd give him a deeper, wise side to spice things up a bit. Plus Al needed advice, and who better to give it than the big bro? :D
That's totally ok. I get like that too! (It's like that in at least one of my author's notes... I start talking in Old English and everything. It was bad.) Report Review
Wow I just had a major sense of deja vu as I read that last sentence. o.O weird. Anyways, amazing chapter! I loved that Astoria stood up for Lily and put her foot down to Draco. I can tell that Draco is conflicted and that he does feel somewhat bad for what he's done and regrets it but I can see where he's coming from in the sense that they won't accept that he changed even if he'd done a complete 180. Some opinions will never change. Gahh. I love this so much. Keep it up, I love it.
~Mischief_managed18Author's Response: Astoria was awesome because Lyra deserves at least one awesome parent! She too amazing for Astoria to have a stick up her butt too.
Public opinion really influenced Draco because he tried to change, but was always mistrusted and let it make him bitter instead of trying to overcome it. Report Review
Gahhh!! Oh my goodness. As soon as I saw that Lucius was one of the escapees I knew it couldn't be good. I'm glad you put that Narcissa never really loved him and that he was the one that convinced her and Draco over to Voldermort. That's always how I've kind of pictured it in my head. Though Draco being with them now kind of shocked me. I mean in a way I guess it makes sense, but it still makes me sad. Cursing her own father, I give Lyra some major props. Gahh. I can't wait to see what happens after this little run in. It shall be interesting. :)
Yet another great chapter and I can't wait to read more.
~Mischief_managed18Author's Response: Yeah, it was a big huge gigantic plot twist because I like action! And Draco had to be evil for this to work, or it would make no sense. Narcissa always seemed reluctant, so I threw that in there to explain her.
Lyra Malfoy is a beast. There is no other way to describe her. Report Review
Ahh!! Go Lyra for being drunk and still able to say no to that stupid arse. But gah Al!! Poor thing. I can understand why he is the way he is. The whole thing with Allison must've been beyond devastating and I can see why he doesn't want to put himself out there to get hurt in the same way. Losing someone is hard enough but the thought of losing another is unbearable. Poor guy. But gahhh they're so flipping cute together. And I absolutely love Karen and Hugo. So flipping cute. Probably one of the most adorable couples ever. :P
Anyways, this was a fantastic chapter and I can't wait to read more. Keep it up!
~Mischief_managed18Author's Response: Yeah,Lyra knows where she stands no matter what.
Al has some issues, but here comes the gigantic plot twist!!!
Karen and Hugo was just something light and fluffy to throw in because I figured SOMEONE had to work out. And they are pretty cute together, thanks! Report Review
Urgh... I love that they did a whole makeover and everything and by the way you described all the girls, they sound bloody gorgeous. xD Stupid Al... why do guys insist on being so ignorant and bloody stupid?! GAHH! I love the zip line idea o.O I want one really bad. And that would be so much fun. I want to be a part of this giant family. Think of all the wonderful shenanigans they'd get into. Sign me up!
I can't wait to see what's awaiting the girls at the Hog's Head. Hopefully something awesome, TIME TO FIND OUT!
Another wonderful chapter my dear, keep up the good work.
~Mischief_managed18Author's Response: Lyra appreciated the results even though she hated the process. Al had to be stupid or there would be no plot line. And the zip line was just this random idea I wanted to include! I get those a lot.
I would love to be a part of this family, that would be freaking amazing. See you next chappie! Report Review
I thought it was Miranda? o.O Mehh details hahaha
Great chapter my dear!! :D Oh my goodness. I still freaking love Lyra and I'm quite fond of Lily as well. I loved the whole lesson they had with Al and the duel between him and the girls. Those girls sure know their spells, it's awesome. Gahh I have a feeling this story is going to continue to be amazing and I can't wait to read more. xD
Keep up the good work, love!! :)
~Mischief_managed18Author's Response: Meh. It probably was, I just didn't bother to check. Oops.
Yeah, Lyra is pretty awesome, I just love her and the girls!!! They're so awesome it's just no contest. Thanks. Report Review
Ohh goodness. I was missing out big time when I didn't immediately favorite this story and keep checking back on it. Though I suppose the one good thing is I now get to read a bunch of chapters all at once! Woo!
I absolutely LOVE Lyra. I think she's bloody awesome and totally BA. I love that she got Fred and Louis. Heh. They deserved it. I'm loving this story already and I can't wait to continue reading. Goodness missy, you have a true talent with words. Keep it up. :)
~Mischief_managed18Author's Response: Yeah, she totally is. I love her. She is my BA side that I never egt to show, so she's one of my favortie characters that I've ever created!
Thank you, I've read since I was really little, so I have a large amount of examples to work from. I've always loved words and the stories you can create with them. Thanks for the read and review! Report Review
So I read this about a month ago but I was at work on my phone and I can't leave reviews on my phone so I couldn't do it then. I figured I would come and leave this the review it deserves. :)
Absolutely fabulous my dear! I love this story so much. You used just the right amount of detail and captured their emotions quite well. I love Scorose stories and I could totally see one happening like this. xD It was a very interesting plot line and I loved it from beginning to end. I absolutely loved the whole Scorpius/ Rose confession part and I certainly hope they get that happy ending. :P
I'm sorry it's been so long since I've read your stories and I miss seeing you around mine as well. :P Off to catch up on the rest of your stories!! :)
~Mischief_managed18Author's Response: Hi! Yaeh, I've been getting lazy about checking stories for updates. Oops.
Thanks for taking time to review, I'm glad you liked it! It was just an idea that came to me that I had to act on. Thanks again! Report Review
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