Wow, hello. I really enjoyed reading this - I always found Charlie intriguing and I must say I think you get him completely right :) I love their relationship and cannot wait to read more about this mystery.Author's Response: I love Charlie, but I've never written him before, so that's awesome to hear. :)
Thank you so much for reviewing.
Sam. Report Review
Hello, I really liked this and I love the relationships you show. I cannot wait to find out what else you have in store for this and I look forward to reading more :) Report Review
Hello, I really liked this. I am so intrigued to find out what happens next. I love the relationships you show and yeah - sorry I am no good at leaving reviews - but I am finding this really interesting so far :) I cannot wait to read more as I love your writing style.Author's Response: Hi! Thank you for reviewing--you're too kind, and I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I'll try to update soon :) Report Review
Yay, another chapter :) I love your writting once again and the characters feel so wonderfully real :) I thought I should just tell you there are a few typos but anyway I am loving the little preview and cannot wait for the next chapter :)Author's Response: Lol, I am so sorry, you always end up catching my Typos that I dunno I've made! There will probably always be typos (I'm not a super-stellar writer anyway) so if you see them, I'm sorry and I'll go back and look but I'll always miss them. I am SO HAPPY that you like the characters!! It's brilliant that you think it feels real too, that will make it more emotionally... interesting. I'll use interesting. Thank you for the wonderful review, I'll have the next chapter up soon.
P.S. WARNING: One of the people who influences my writing is Steven Moffat, if you know who he is, you have been warned, if you do not, watch some of his TV shows (Sherlock & Doctor Who) and feel your heart break and pure terror wash over you as you realize this man is my Idol and influenced my dramatic story twists. Report Review
Yay, more :) I am still enjoying this story and I love how they got here and everything that has been shown. I like how now things seem to be coming together for her and how Teddy is still using her nickname constantly. So yes, basically I really am still enjoying this story :)Author's Response: Yay!! I am so glad!! Thanks for the review!! :) Report Review
Yay :) I loved this chapter and oohh I like the way it concluded, I cannot wait for more as I really do love this story, your writting is always brilliant and I really do love it :)Author's Response: Aw :') Thank you!!! I'll post the next one soon :) Report Review
Hello - yay an update :) Sorry it took me so long to read this but I must say I loved it (I think I noticed a few spellings, like you said wand head over head at one point and I think you meant the former to be hand. Just thought I would check) But yes I loved this and will move to the next chapter now :)Author's Response: Oh thanks!! Sorry about that, when you get caught up in writing you can skip things sometimes, thanks for the heads up :) Hope you liked the next chapter :) Report Review
Yay another chapter :) I kept checking back wondering when there would be more and here it is :) I really liked it and ah yes life, it does tend to catch up with us occasionally which can be both a blessing and an annoyance, but anyway I really enjoyed this chapter :)Author's Response: Hullo again!! I'm flattered that you kept checking on it and sorry there wasn't a new chapter when you did, but I'm really glad you liked it :) Gah -_- Life isn't bad by any means, just busy and it's a rare moment when I can actually work on this story in peace, but eventually, I'll get around to finishing it :) Thank you for your lovely review!!! Report Review
Aw, that was so sweet and I loved it from that perspective and I cannot believe it is now over :( That was once again really good 10/10 I really liked it and really don't know what else to say to praise it any more :)
By the way it is not weird you cried while writing the previous chapter (Apologises if that was a rhetorical question :))
Sorry to be a bother but do you have Pottermore? (Sorry exceedingly curious to who here has it, once again my apologises for being a bother)
I cannot believe this is over now :( I will have to continually reread it :) Also I cannot wait to see what else you write :)Author's Response: Thank you so much. You have no idea how much I treasure each and every one of your reviews. I cannot express my immense gratitude to you, as you are the ONLY person who took the time to review every chapter!
To answer your question, yes I do have Pttermore, but I haven't been able to get in yet as I am still awaiting the email! For when I finally do, my username is QuaffleSky175
I'd love for you to keep reading this! I am currently working on my next story and I'd love for you to check it out too!
To conclude, thank you thank you THANK YOU so much for all your reviews! Report Review
Aw, actually in tears here that was brilliant :) Very well done and no! not one more chapter. There has to be more ... I ... okay then I'll calm down - this is brilliant 10/10 :)Author's Response: Thank you so much!! Is it weird that I actually cried while writing and re-reading this chapter?!?!
yes, I'm afraid there is just one chapter left, but I hope you'll enjoy it! Your comments are also so appreciated so I can't wait to see what you think of the last one!!! Report Review
Aw, I loved it and I'm welling up here. That was wonderful (10/10). I really loved it and I actually cannot think of anything more to say :) Yeah I really loved it :)Author's Response: Thank you so much yet again!
The next chapter (which is the second last one!) is now up...and if you thought this one was emotional. Report Review
I loved the description of the money :) Well I actually loved all the description :) I loved the reaction of Mr. Weasley especially :) 10/10 Once again cannot wait for more :)Author's Response: Hello again!
I thought it was important to describe the money so vividly. After all, the Weasleys are always described in the books as being very poor, so I thought that once Fred and George started actually earning some, they'd really take notice of it! Oh, and I love Mr Weasley so I thought I'd give him a comical, light-hearted reaction in the midst of all the chaos!
Thanks again, and hope you enjoy the next chapter! Report Review
I really liked this chapter, it showed relationships well and well yeah I really liked it :) 10/10 as usual and I cannot wait for more :)Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm surprised it's a 10/10 but it made me smile to see that, so thank you! I'll get more up as soon as I can! Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Cool, a new chapter :) One thing (other than the fact I really liked it and cannot wait to find out who the Slytherin boy is - I have an idea but I think I'm miles off :)) I think hermes is meant to have a capital as it's a name. But yeah I really liked it and cannot wait for more :)Author's Response: I must have overlooked that in my editing, thank you for noticing. I hope you keep reading, and I hope to have more validated chapters up soon! Report Review
Ah I loved the ending it was sweet. I loved it once again 10/10 :) Cannot wait for more :)
I think I noticed one small typo (Sorry as I'm probably wrong) but is giver meant to be give?Author's Response: Thanks again! I didn't even notice that typo (yes it is a typo, you're quite right!) and will get it fixed ASAP!! Chapter eight is on its way! Report Review
I loved it once again :) 10/10 I did notice some errors though it should be drawn instead of drew and is it meant to be before instead of below (I'm not 100% sure but I just thought I'd say about them just in case)
I loved their reactions and the description of the potion and how well they'd made it :) Cannot wait to see what else you do with them :)Author's Response: See, this is what reviews are for! I didn't even notice those mistakes and will rectify them whenever I can! Glad you liked my potion description...it was never really described in the book, so I had to use a bit of artistic license! Thanks again...your reviews are always so appreciated! Report Review
I really sound like a broken record but your writting is brilliant and once again I loved it :) I loved the reactions to their OWL results. I really liked George's reaction to Fred's final idea as well :) 10/10Author's Response: Broken records are good, really! Thanks again. I'm glad you found that particular bit interesting as it is a theme that is constantly explored in this story! Hope you enjoy the next chapter which will be up soon! Report Review
I loved it. I love how well you show the twins :) I cannot wait to see what else happens and how things in the story affected them :) 10/10Author's Response: Thanks once again for another lovely review!
Hope you enjoy the rest...chapter six shall be up shortly! I really appreciate you sticking with this story and always leaving wonderful reviews which always make my day :) Report Review
You're probably tired of hearing this but once again I loved it :) I loved the conversation between them about their younger siblings and once again cannot wait for more (I really don't know what else to say but I thouhgt I should review :)) 10/10Author's Response: Thanks once again, I'm really so so glad you enjoyed it!!
I could never get tired of hearing that and your reviews are always appreciated! Only one other person has actually reviewed this story (and even then it was just one chapter!) so you have no idea how much I appreciate you taking the time to actually do! Next chapter will be up soon! Thanks again so much and hope you enjoy Chapter Five! Report Review
Once again I loved it :) I did notice a few typos but I've forgotten what they are as I was so wrapped up in the story :) I cannot wait for more :) 10/10Author's Response: Thank you I'm so glad you liked it! And I'll try and get rid of the typos as soon as possible, thanks for telling me about them! I'm currently writing chapter six, and I must say it's putting up a good fight :/ but I will post it as soon as I'm satisfied with it. Once again, thank you for your review! Report Review
I loved it once more. I really am enjoying this story and cannot wait for more :) 10/10
I really think you've captured the twins brilliantly :)Author's Response: Thanks as always for your review, and thanks for continuing to read on! The next chapter is in the queue and should be up soon! Report Review
I really like this story :) The raelationships between the characters are brilliantly written and the group's dynamic is brilliant. I cannot wait for the next chapter :)Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'll put another chapter up in the next few days but I've got another story waiting to be validated so it may be a while Report Review
I really liked this. I found it funny at times and I love the characters voice you use. I now move ontot he next chapter. Report Review
I really liked this and I really cannot wait for more. I really like the way you show them and write them, how different their thinking seems to be and that :) 10/10Author's Response: Thanks again, I'm glad you continued reading! Chapter three is currently in the queue and should be up soon! I really wanted to show them as individuals and I'm glad you picked up on this! Report Review
Wow. This was beautifully written and I move onto the next chapter now. I did notice one spelling error, at one point you typed Frey, I think it must have meant to be Fred and was jsut a typo but ... yeah I thought I'd mention it. I really enjoyed this :) 10/10Author's Response: Thanks for pointing that out, I'll fix it as soon as I can! Thanks for reviewing, yours is the first one and as the chapter had been up for several days already, I was starting to get worried that people wouldn't like it! Thanks for the kind words!! Report Review
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