wow. This is a grand opening, to say the least. I actually really, really love the HG pairing in the book, but when it comes to ffs I'm definitely a GD fan, so I'm all but upset with you. This was a really enthralling first chapter, looking forward to more!!! Report Review
wow, they're very frank about what they feel.
But they do have great chemistry... Draco's attitude about Muggles is really annoying though! Haha.. But he should stick to it at least a little more...Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! :) Report Review
This is moving faster than I though ;)
I really love that Draco's "secret" passion is Opera, I like it a lot myself too. Great chapter!Author's Response: Yes, it was written when I was much younger so I didn't really understand how to draw out a plot appropriately. I hope you can still forgive it! Oh, good! I'm glad you enjoyed that. :) Report Review
a surprising kiss and a grat story so far!Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! :) Report Review
They're cute.. I guess if you're physically that close to a person of the opposite gender there is some attraction.. At least from one side! Love your characters. ^^Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yes, I think it always happens at one point. It might not go anywhere, and in the end two people might end up completely platonic, but there's always that moment, and it can change everything (imo =P).
Thanks again! Report Review
I know exactly what it's like to be seen as a couple even though you're not, haha. My whole workplace thought me and my best friend were dating, it so happens that he's gay...
Anyways, seems like a fun story! Looking forward to reading the rest!Author's Response: LOL, I've been through that! Quite awkward/amusing, but fun to look back on. =P
Thank you so much!! Report Review
Great one :P
As everyone else I just assumed that Dominique was a girl, though I should know better than to judge a person by their name, since mine is not that common either...
Two friends of mine, twins, were actually named "Flower" and "Star" until they changed it a few years ago. Could be worse than Dominique, haha...
Anyways, love this one-shot! (And it's title too, btw)
Let's wish Dom and George good luck~Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Glad you enjoyed this! Report Review
LOL - this is so funny. Although I got a little bit confused at the end - was he playing or real?
Anyways, I thought it might be Hermione when you described her hair :P Loved it! Report Review
I like your story, just that everything seems a bit rash. The conversations, their thoughts...
Also, you have some typos in there and some punctuation marks are missing.
I hope this doesn't sound too harsh, since I really enjoy reading your fanfiction! Just wanted to mention it. Report Review
Harry's short advice was indeed very surprising. =O I wouldn't have thought that he'd do such a mature decision within such a short period of time..
Looking forward to more. Report Review
Interesting idea for a story. I thought everything was a bit hurried, her normal reaction to such a weird request, her recognizing him the first moment they see each other in seven years and her being convinced so easily. Still, I think I will like this story, I want to know more about your characters ;) Report Review
Amazing one shot, the scenes from Sirius' past were truly touching and sad. Especially Remus' reaction to Sirius trying to lure Snape into finding him as a Werewolf, was something I had never thought of before. The way you described Peter (his hurt when they call him an idiot, the resentment of being not as great a wizard as his friends) makes me think differently about him. I always thought he was a character that is very hard to grasp. Anyway, I loved your story!...Author's Response: Thank you, Shinicha, for taking the time to review. I'm glad the story made you think differently about some things, huge compliment, :) Report Review
thank you so much for this wonderful fanfiction! loved every bit of it (even though I got a bit confused with Lycanders and Lucys toad stories óo ... ) Anyway, GRREAT!Author's Response: Thank you for all your wonderful reviews! I hope you'll read the sequel, Our Little Secret: Lost. It's a WIP, but I update frequently. ;) Report Review
ohmygod, they are so grrreat together! and lol, britney sparkles.Author's Response: Thank you for being a romantic with a brilliant sense of humor. :) Report Review
This is great. I love the way they communicate with each other, and you took Lucius' sayings from Machiavelli, LOL?
I'm now officially in love with your FF!
(great first kiss btw)Author's Response: Lucius was very Machiavellian, although not enough to help Voldemort win the wizarding war, thank goodness!
Thanks for the love. *hugs* Report Review
Love Rose more and more ;)Author's Response: I heart you for saying that. Report Review
haha, I really love this so far. Scorpius is really sexy the way he acts, and Rose is in a very weird way strict and daring and funny at the same time. Looking forward to more!Author's Response: Malfoys are sexy. It's in the genes . . . and jeans . . . heh. I didn't want Rose to be a clone of her mum, so I'm glad you like her mix of characteristics. :) Report Review
this seems like the beginning of a great fanfic! ;) it's very witty and i like the way Scorpius thinks. Looking forward to the next chapters!Author's Response: If you didn't like the way Scorpius thinks I'd be in trouble, because you'd stop reading, so huzzah! you like it! Thanks for the shiny compliments. ^_^ Report Review
Really liked this chapter too.
Even though I was a bit confused - I thought Lily was a Seeker, not a Chaser?
Maybe I didn't remember correctly... Report Review
I loved the chapter. Before I thought it was a bit rediculous for Rose to be jealous over losing a friend at the age of 11, but this chapter made me understand Rose much better!
And I think it's very funny indeed that Draco and Ron would bet their children :PAuthor's Response: Children hold weird grudges. I know I did-do. :P
But, I'm glad you understood where Rose was coming from. That was important. And thanks for the review. Report Review
nice start into the story. Rose reminds me very much of a character from a book about a party planner I've red (don't remember the title though)
Looking forward to hers and Malfoys meeting ;) Report Review
This is so sad! I thought that Ginny is really going too far with forcing him to say things he probably doesn't even mean, but the last word turned the whole story around, pretty amazing what one word can do.
I liked your story ;)
Oh - and I think it's "c'est LA vie", not le... Report Review
great first chapter, even though its a pity than ron had to turn out to be this kind of guy for the story to work... Report Review
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