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Review #26, by ShinichaI Will Never Let You Leave Me: Snake-Cooties and Frostbitten Noses

27th April 2011:
I can't tell you how much I love to see a chapter full of friends DG talks and walks after so much drama! (which was very enthralling as well, but I'm seriously afraid to go to the toilet, who knows, creepy Harry might lure in the bowl ;O;)

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Review #27, by ShinichaI Will Never Let You Leave Me: A Blaise From The Past

27th April 2011:
After I posted the last review I almost immediately thought "No WAIT it has to be this Aunt ..." ..it was her right?

Ah, so much drama, I have to do loads of homework, but here I am, reading your story for hours without being able to stop ;_;

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Review #28, by ShinichaI Will Never Let You Leave Me: Newly Found Dread

27th April 2011:
Oh no - he couldn't be Percy, the suddenly perfect Quidditch player!?

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Review #29, by ShinichaI Will Never Let You Leave Me: Weasleyfying a Malfoy

27th April 2011:
hahaha, I can't help but laugh!
I hope there will be a draco POV to this story, his reaction was indeed surprising!

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Review #30, by ShinichaTale of the Pumpkin Thief: It Takes a Thief

27th April 2011:
This is so much fun, and now I finally understand what they were hinting at in Our Little Secret! I would've thought Rose could do better than the shrieking shack though :P

The last sentence made me laugh out loud :'D ...

Author's Response: Think of the stories students tell about the shack down through the years. Scary stuff . . . and Rose isn't that artistic. :D

Thank you for laughing!


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Review #31, by ShinichaI Will Never Let You Leave Me: Family Matters

27th April 2011:
Oh my god, I was actually scared that Harry would show up at the party, I'm so relieved that it's Draco who came!

(And WHAT was written on the note, I need to knoww!)

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Review #32, by ShinichaI Will Never Let You Leave Me: Leaving

27th April 2011:
Ahh, stupid Ginny, and stupid Tomas, why didn't he tell her that Draco had insisted on her writing the article.. then she might've understood! Huh...

I just wanted to mention that I noticed that you jump between different tenses quite often, like for example here: "Of course she would send Draco an owl, thanking him for accommodating her and helping her out, but it will hopefully be..."
and I wondered if you do this on purpose? Since English isn't my native language I don't know whether that's okay, only that I've always been told by my teacher to not change the tenses :P

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Review #33, by ShinichaI Will Never Let You Leave Me: Comfortable

27th April 2011:
absolutely loved it xOx can't say anything more, have to continue reading..!

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Review #34, by ShinichaI Will Never Let You Leave Me: Biscuits, Bacons and Black-Haired Man

26th April 2011:
Oh my god, Harry creeps my out. I feel more afraid of him than Voldemort (even though this little sentence about his eyes turning read gave me something to think), and I really admire your writing skill, making me feel with Ginny so much.
I really enjoyed Ginnys and Dracos more civil conversation and their little "moment", too. Great chapter, as always.

I just wanted to point out that in one sentence you seem to have overseen a little mistake. "Suddenly Draco no longer was no longer securely placed behind the red enemy line"

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Review #35, by ShinichaI Will Never Let You Leave Me: Mikul Drakushor

26th April 2011:
Wow. Who would have thought that. A completely new side of Draco found in this chapter, and I absolutely LOVE him! This is getting very interesting *o*

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Review #36, by ShinichaI Will Never Let You Leave Me: I Don't Sleep

26th April 2011:
Harry is seriously terrifying me. I admire Ginny for the strength she has to have joking conversations with Draco after what happened to her!
Your characterization of the three of them is great >o

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Review #37, by ShinichaI Will Never Let You Leave Me: Weasly-Do

26th April 2011:
Journalist is an interesting choice of profession for Ginny =O I think I like it!
Very refreshing chapter with the twins, even though the dream in the beginning was frightening! >

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Review #38, by ShinichaI Will Never Let You Leave Me: The Burrow And The Apple Peel

26th April 2011:
now that the harry issue is solved - for now - i wonder how dracos and ginnys relationship is going to turn out ...
i love your writing btw, its beautiful.

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Review #39, by ShinichaI Will Never Let You Leave Me: When

26th April 2011:
wow. This is a grand opening, to say the least. I actually really, really love the HG pairing in the book, but when it comes to ffs I'm definitely a GD fan, so I'm all but upset with you. This was a really enthralling first chapter, looking forward to more!!!

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Review #40, by ShinichaMarry For Murder: Bumper Cars and Cotton Candy Kisses

25th April 2011:
wow, they're very frank about what they feel.
But they do have great chemistry... Draco's attitude about Muggles is really annoying though! Haha.. But he should stick to it at least a little more...

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! :)

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Review #41, by ShinichaMarry For Murder: A Night At The Opera

25th April 2011:
This is moving faster than I though ;)
I really love that Draco's "secret" passion is Opera, I like it a lot myself too. Great chapter!

Author's Response: Yes, it was written when I was much younger so I didn't really understand how to draw out a plot appropriately. I hope you can still forgive it! Oh, good! I'm glad you enjoyed that. :)

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Review #42, by ShinichaMarry For Murder: Manners...Or the Lack Thereof

25th April 2011:
a surprising kiss and a grat story so far!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! :)

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Review #43, by ShinichaThe List: Internal Pining: Ginny's Essay

23rd April 2011:
They're cute.. I guess if you're physically that close to a person of the opposite gender there is some attraction.. At least from one side! Love your characters. ^^

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yes, I think it always happens at one point. It might not go anywhere, and in the end two people might end up completely platonic, but there's always that moment, and it can change everything (imo =P).

Thanks again!


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Review #44, by ShinichaThe List: Prologue

23rd April 2011:
I know exactly what it's like to be seen as a couple even though you're not, haha. My whole workplace thought me and my best friend were dating, it so happens that he's gay...

Anyways, seems like a fun story! Looking forward to reading the rest!

Author's Response: LOL, I've been through that! Quite awkward/amusing, but fun to look back on. =P

Thank you so much!!


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Review #45, by ShinichaI Am Man, Hear Me Roar: Dominique

23rd April 2011:
Great one :P
As everyone else I just assumed that Dominique was a girl, though I should know better than to judge a person by their name, since mine is not that common either...
Two friends of mine, twins, were actually named "Flower" and "Star" until they changed it a few years ago. Could be worse than Dominique, haha...
Anyways, love this one-shot! (And it's title too, btw)
Let's wish Dom and George good luck~

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Glad you enjoyed this!

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Review #46, by ShinichaHardboiled: Hardboiled

23rd April 2011:
LOL - this is so funny. Although I got a little bit confused at the end - was he playing or real?
Anyways, I thought it might be Hermione when you described her hair :P Loved it!

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Review #47, by ShinichaThe Proposal: Chapter 3

23rd April 2011:
I like your story, just that everything seems a bit rash. The conversations, their thoughts...
Also, you have some typos in there and some punctuation marks are missing.
I hope this doesn't sound too harsh, since I really enjoy reading your fanfiction! Just wanted to mention it.

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Review #48, by ShinichaThe Proposal: Chapter 2

23rd April 2011:
Harry's short advice was indeed very surprising. =O I wouldn't have thought that he'd do such a mature decision within such a short period of time..
Looking forward to more.

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Review #49, by ShinichaThe Proposal: Chapter 1

23rd April 2011:
Interesting idea for a story. I thought everything was a bit hurried, her normal reaction to such a weird request, her recognizing him the first moment they see each other in seven years and her being convinced so easily. Still, I think I will like this story, I want to know more about your characters ;)

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Review #50, by ShinichaTranscendence: Transcendence

23rd April 2011:
Amazing one shot, the scenes from Sirius' past were truly touching and sad. Especially Remus' reaction to Sirius trying to lure Snape into finding him as a Werewolf, was something I had never thought of before. The way you described Peter (his hurt when they call him an idiot, the resentment of being not as great a wizard as his friends) makes me think differently about him. I always thought he was a character that is very hard to grasp. Anyway, I loved your story!...

Author's Response: Thank you, Shinicha, for taking the time to review. I'm glad the story made you think differently about some things, huge compliment, :)

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