Hello!! I like where this is going and the summary sounds awesome. The one thing I thought was a little rough was the POV changes. I wasn't really sure who's POV it was at some parts. But other than that, I really enjoyed it.
I especially liked all of the different characters introduced right away. It seems like this story will be complex with a couple of different plots and conflicts, and I absolutely love that kind of stuff.
I loove the title of the story btw. It's just so mysterious.
Oh and I'm confused about the end of the last chapter. Does Sirius like Remus? I can't tell, but it seems like you are hinting at it.
P.S. Thanks soo much for reviewing my one-shot! It's the first story I've put out for the public, so it means a lot to me.Author's Response: thank you for readind!
He may do ;) You never know with Sirius! :D
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