Yay, another chapter so soon! :D I loved Patrick's interaction with Harry in this chapter, especially him figuring out about Harry taking the Prince's advice in his oh-so-Jane way xD You write him so well, it really is as if TV's Patrick Jane has gone to Hogwarts :D
I loved this line: "I didn't intend to show up until this very instant so technically I can't be late." And how I would have loved to have been a fly on the wall when Jane punched Snape, haha xD Most excellent :D
Can't wait for more!!! :D Report Review
OMG YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW HAPPY YOU HAVE MADE ME TODAY!!! I was online on my phone on the bus this morning and I saw this had been updated and just starting grinning like a lunatic (probably scared a few people nearby, too) xD
I'm so happy Oliver and Lucie are together (since, as I'm sure you know, I'm very much an Oliver fan haha) and I loved their date and the flashback to Lucie's crush (silly Oliver for not asking her out back then! Ugh, boys! ;D), but at the same time I just want Percy to admit he loves her and throw himself at her and for them to get together! Gah! It's things like that last paragraph that really make me want some Percy/Lucie action to return, as much as I love Ollie xD
Sooo many amazing lines in this chapter, but here are just a few :)
'With nothing more than a crooked smile and a Quaffle save, Oliver Wood stole hearts.'
"What are you talking about? He looks at you all the time. He's got to when he talks to you, doesn't he?"
"The right time has come and gone, and then doubled back and left again."
'much to Percy's chagrin when he'd apprehend Alicia and me in the corridors and we'd pull out the never-failing "female problems" card faster than he could pull out a detention slip'
"Neither. Usually the Quidditch store is my date."
And the bit with her friends getting overexcited about Olcie/Luliver was so funny, too xD
Once again, my review is kind of crazy (I blame the continued Oliver-or-Percy fight in my brain), so I apologise, but I'm just so happy there was a new chapter for me to review that I don't care if I look like a nutter :D Please update soon!! Though your chapters are always worth waiting for, I do believe I might suffer from serious withdrawal if you don't update again soon ;)Author's Response: YAY YOU'RE STILL HERE! In all honesty, I really like writing Lucie and Oliver together. They're just so freaking adorable, ugh. And Percy's been kind of a butthead lately, don't you think? I'm pretty sure stubbornness is a Weasley trait. I'll try my best to update soon; I'm currently editing all chapters so I want to get that done first. Ahh yay, this review made me smile so wide my flatmates probably looked at me weird too! :) Report Review
YAY NEW CHAPTER :DDD And another one in the works? Excellente :D
Just a couple of favourite parts for you, since I am, strictly speaking, supposed to be revising for exams :P
'I cringed, feeling the words return, hitting me with slaps. My memory had turned into a beast itself; biting, gnarling, gnashing... It was keeping me on the edge, letting me know that I will never be safe. It will always be there. I can always turn back into the wolf and someday I won't have someone to talk me back into my body - scare me back in.
I am the wolf.' - Just loved the way you wrote this :)
'It was early, but not Oh-Merlin-Where-Is-The-Sun early, which was normal for quidditch practices.'
'"Have I told you lately how amazing you are?"
Mary considered for a moment. "Eh... Not lately. You're really falling behind."
I let her go. "I'll get right on that," I joked.'
'"And with only minor injuries," she added with a chuckle.'
Can't wait for more!! Most definitely staying tuned :DAuthor's Response: poor_old_snuffles,
Haha those are all a bunch of my favorites; I'm glad you liked them! :) It's been a while since I've updated, and I figured I needed to get my crap together and get another chapter up. Chapter 29 is in the works and I hope to get it up soon.
Good luck with your exams!! :)
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Yay! More Mentalist on TV and more Mentalist on HPFF, life is good :D Sometimes I watch episodes now and wonder when Dumbledore's going to turn up and whisk him away to Hogwarts, haha xD
Lots of amusing parts in this chapter, and here are just a few of my favourites:
"What about turning it back, huh? Who would honestly want to drink from something made from a rodent? I wouldn't. It's disgusting."
She just narrowed her eyes challengingly, crossing her arms and staring at him without abandon. "Nobody would even know, if it was done properly."
"To complete your understanding of the subject material, of course."
"The fact that the world would be without me...? That's horrible."
"You're very gullible, did you know?"
Can't wait for more!! :DAuthor's Response: season 5 is almost over :( but luckily it has been renewed for another season yay! and you can count on more of Jane's adventures at Hogwarts in the meantime ^.^
(I too wish Dumbledore would show up in the show... heheh)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, again! Always nice to see you back, and of course, still enjoying the story. Love hearing from you, especially favourite parts (McGonagall v. Jane is one of my favourite subplots lol).
There should be another chapter up soon-ish.
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IT IS SO WORTH IT!! Please continue, however long it takes (I have exactly the same problem with one of my own stories: beginning and ending sorted, middle ... not so much :S)!! :D I'm so happy that you updated, I do love this story :) I loved the extra details on Artemis' curse, and Sirius' obsessing is highly entertaining! Look forward to reading more, whenever it comes :DAuthor's Response: aww thanks so so much! both for reading and for leaving me some comments, and I'm glad that you think the story is turning out ok even though I am extremely horrible at updating and am very unsure about the whole thing. I will try to put some more up soon!
Loved this chapter, especially the way you wrote the part where Jane was watching Dumbledore's memory of the Triwizard Tournament, it was awesome :D Plus, the flying lesson was hilarious, as was the line "Because I'm lovable." xD Can't wait for more!!Author's Response: back again, huh? THANK YOU!
So glad you are still reading, still enjoying, and still reviewing! Means a lot :)
More to come soon-ish, probably once I'm done exams.
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YAY YAY YAY YOU'RE BACK!!! HAPPY DAYS!! :D Don't be sad, I'm still here :D
Loved this chapter, especially the way you wrote Wolf-Serena's thoughts!
And she and Remus were so close to finding out about each other!! SO CLOSE!! Please tell me they will find out soon?? :)
More soon please!! :DAuthor's Response: poor_old_snuffles,
Gaahhh!! I'm so glad you're still on here! Speaking of which, I'm gonna run over and read your story in a bit. :) Thanks for reviewing! I'm really excited to delve further into the Remus relationship, so expect more of that soon!! :D
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HURRAY FOR A NEW CHAPTER :D *happy dance* And I'm very glad there are still four chapters to go, but I don't know what I'm going to do when it's over :S
'"I don't think we'll ever know exactly what occured between Scarlett and Noah...but I do know that...well..." She lowered her voice and whispered the second half of the sentence.' OMG you cannot do that to me!!! What was the second half of that sentence??!!
Now for a few of my favourite parts:
'I knew my face was flushing, but his legs were so much longer than mine!'
The two of them getting stuck in the trick step - hilarious!! They should have just snogged right then and there, haha ;)
"LookcharI'mablodidiot..." I'm so happy they finally made up :D
'"Stuck in the trick step, I see."
"A notable observation, sir," I laughed.' Ahh, Lupin, what a man xD
So, while I have forgiven you for the time I had to wait for this chapter (it's an awesome chapter, how could I not forgive you?), GIMME MORE SOON PLEASE :DDDAuthor's Response: You are my hero, you know that? I hope you know how much it means to me that you review every single chapter.
Seriously. You're my hero. I wish I could shower you with chocolates and cookies.
Just, thank you so much and I appreciate the forgiveness. I will update soon! It'll be my new years present ^___^ !
Happy new years! Thank you, again, for all your support throughout every chapter. I don't know what I would do if I didn't have readers like you!!!
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I have no response to this chapter...
Okay, I'm lying. My response goes something like this:
Now that I've got that off my chest, time for some slightly more articulate freaking out:
I CAN'T BELIEVE PERCY SAID THEY SHOULD STOP SNOGGING!!! AND THAT OLIVER ASKED HER OUT!!! But 'cause Percy and Ollie are such good friends, I do wonder if Percy did it FOR Oliver. I feel that Percy's just that sort of a bloke. But that's beside the point. Lucie fancies Percy now so what's she going to tell Oliver??!! Also, 'He didn't have feelings for me; for Merlin's sake, the boy was still so obviously hung up over Clearwater.' - NO he's not, Percy fancies Lucie, too, right??? *sad (but so utterly confused and torn between both boys) eyes*
Right, I'm really going to calm down now. This review makes less sense than special relativity. Favourite quotes, that should help :)
'"I'm Percy Weasley," he piped up, holding out his hand for Oliver to shake. "I'm going to be Head Boy one day."
Oliver grasped his hand firmly and said, "Oliver Wood. I'll be Quidditch captain."'
'knocking over first year after first year until Fred and George oh-so-kindly cushioned his fall by conjuring up of a pool of mud.'
'I was falling for my freckle-faced, four-eyed, snooty best friend.'
"Blimey, d'you think he died?"
"George, mate, that's my foot, not yours."
And, for the record, in case you hadn't guessed, I STILL can't pick a team. Honestly, I'm terrible at multiple-choice questions!! And even though I'm the worst updater EVER so probably shouldn't be saying this ... UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE!!! Though admittedly I am curious about this one-shot you speak of :)
P.S. I REALLY want to go to the studio tour. It physically pains me that I can't :'(
P.P.S. This is a horrendously mental review. I do apologise xDAuthor's Response: I feel like such an evil person for creating this dilemma.
And I'll try to update as soon as possible! Can't guarantee that "as soon as possible" is actually going to be soon though...I only have half of the James II/OC one-shot written and like, an eighth of the next chapter of TSAP. Pretty sure I could give you a run for your money for the worst updates ever title.
Love your review, as always, even though you think it's horrendously mental. Those are always the best kind. x) Report Review
OHMYGODOHMYGODOHMYGOD!!! What a super-fantastic chapter, and dedicated to moi?? Serious love for you right now, haha (in a non-creepy way, promise xD) And, to show you just how happy this update has made me, here is a very long list of my favourite parts (seriously long. I may as well have copied and pasted the whole chapter :P)!!
'We tended to refer to it as his evil lair, where he plotted ways in which to torture us and passed them off as "Quidditch plays".'
I loved the whole description of Oliver's office, it seems so fitting and so Oliver :D
'"And to think I wanted to make up an excuse about my lady problems so I wouldn't have to help you."
He groaned and shot me a look. Whining, he said, "I hate it when you do that! I never know what to say!"'
"Er, so, Luce, I was just, uh, I was just wondering if maybe, um-" he gulped and shut his eyes for a brief moment, as if hoping to be put out of his self-inflicted misery, and I just looked on quizzically "-maybe you want to, you know, if you'd like to, er, maybe we could, um-" Please tell me this is Oliver asking Lucie out in the most adorably nervous way possible?? Please?
"No, not you! I don't even know you!"
'"Fine then, how about Olliekins?" I teased.
He cocked an eyebrow. "Would you like me to start referring to you as Gertrude?"'
'And as I kissed him again, and again, and again, I knew in that moment that I wouldn't want to be with anyone else.' AWWW!!
Gah, you make it so hard to decide if I want Lucie to get with Percy (properly, I mean) or Oliver - I love them both!!! xD Cannot wait for more!!!Author's Response: I just finished writing the next chapter and oh my gosh I feel like I betrayed you you're going to absolutely hate me.
What? Giving something away? I'm doing no such thing.
Thanks for the lovely, lovely review! Report Review
As if you could get rid of me by not updating for a while, puh-lease! I love this story far too much :D And homework plagues us all, so I could never hold that against you :)
I'm so pleased Percy and Lucie made up - which you'll probably realise when you see how many favourite quotes came from that part of the chapter!! :D
Without further ado...
'At one point, Percy was even rolling on the floor with laughter, and I may have snorted unattractively once or twice.'
'"Do we still get to snog?"'
'"Can we stop this now?"
He chuckled. "Out of synonyms, are you, Luce?" he teased.'
'"You want to go to our classroom and snog now?"'
'"He's a right twat and a half," Oliver finished.' - as I use this phrase so often in life, it had to get picked as a favourite quote!
And a last little aww at Lucie and Oliver snuggling on the couch!! And Ollie's little kiss - C-U-T-E!
So, while I completely forgive you for making us wait for this awesome chapter, PLEASEWRITEMORESOON! :DDDAuthor's Response: Oh my gosh, you have no idea how happy I am to see your review! I was terrified I would lose you as a fan for having such poor updating skills. Thank you so much for your--as always--lovely review. I'm going to send the next chapter through the queue right now, promise! Report Review
So happy to see a new chapter up! And in perfect timing with season 5 of the Mentalist starting on TV - life is good :D
Couple of favourite parts for you:
"Confident, are we, Jane?"
"Well," Jane hid a snort of derision, "my mind is brilliant..."
"Sorry. I wasn't listening. You kinda have a monotone..."
And of course, the Bedhead thing is still amusing me just as much as the first time I read it xD
Can't wait for more - especially Jane learning to fly! That shall be awesome :DAuthor's Response: thanks so much! of course Jane has to learn to fly, its wizardry 101 ;)
shall try to post it up soon.
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Oh. My. God. I started reading this after the Dobby results came out and I've been filling every free moment with it since. I genuinely don't believe I can praise you enough for this story, it's just so... wow. Seriously. One of my all-time favourite stories. Ever. I spent every word of it desperate to read the next, completely hooked. And I LOVED the ending, with Witching and Colin and Orla bringing everyone through. I was gutted when it came down to Fred or Colin dying, so thank you for not breaking my heart, haha. And I know I should have left this in a review on the specific chapter at the time, but I was so desperate to continue that I decided to save it for now: the bit when Snape apologised was probably my favourite scene. When I read the last book for the first time and it was revealed that Snape was good all along, I was thrilled, and the apology scene took me back to that moment and reminded me how great a character he is. So, thanks for that too :) I'm fairly certain there's more I want to say but I can't put my finger on it, so I'll have to end my review here. Congratulations on such a fantastic story, I wish it wasn't over!! :DAuthor's Response: So sorry for this late response!
I can't tell you how wonderful it is to hear you say that you started reading this after the Dobby results came out. While the voting and nominations were going on, that was my main wish for getting a Dobby - not for the little gold ribbon, but to get this story on a page I know a lot of people reference when they decide which stories they want to read. So it's a dream come true that you read this story because of that.
Your praise, oh my goodness. I don't know what to do with myself! One of the best stories you've ever read? Excuse me for a moment, I'm going to be over the moon for a little while. That's me right there, on the moon. No big deal. XD
Severus's apology scene very nearly didn't happen. I didn't plan to write it explicitly; I planned to leave him knocking at the door and then end the chapter on a vague note, but for some reason I just kept going. I'm glad I did, just because it turned out to be your favorite part. :)
Thank you so much for taking the time to read this story and for the beautiful review. It really made my month. Report Review
Another great chapter! Only got time to leave a quick review, so here are a few of my favourite quotes:
"Seriously, this is moving on to stalker territory."
"Thorough, but wrong," Jane said, though pleased that he had found out what it was. "An owl is a bird."
"No. They're too busy hitting our mailman."
"It's been more than ten minutes, huh?"
Can't wait for the next update! :)Author's Response: hello again, thank you so so much for reading and reviewing yet another chapter! I'm glad the story still amuses you, and hopefully it will continue to do so ;)
Next chapter coming soon!
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You are correct, I don't mind at all ;) The bit from Everly's point of view was great, she SO needs to give in to Sirius' charm soon (as in, the next chapter or so. Seriously :P) xD And YES, I still LOVE Charlotte haha, she's BRILLIANT :D
Favourite quotes time!
'Remus referred to it as stalking, but that was neither here nor there.'
' "Everly will have to spend time with me if you're hogging Charlie all the time! Everly'll be stuck with me then—so I can—and it'll convince her that I'm—and—and yes!—it's brilliant! Just talk to her, Moony! She's smart and pretty and—and stuff, alright? You could do plenty worse. Offer to study with her for—for bollocks, what—OH! Astronomy! Do Astronomy with her! Girls love the stars! Romantic rubbish—"
"Sirius, I don't even take Astronomy—"
"PRETEND TO THEN!" '
"You'll probably want to go to Pomfrey for that, Snape, but far be it from me and my dirty blood to try and help you." Go Lily!!! :D
"He wants you to have his ridiculously attractive and equally arrogant offspring."
Can't wait for the next chapter, especially the Everly/Sirius action you promised :DAuthor's Response: Confession: I always look forward to your reviews haha. This just totally made my day 5,623 times better. Thank you sosososososoSO much! Report Review
Yay yay yay new chapter! No need to apologise, it was worth the wait ;) (I write the same in all of my own author's notes too, if it makes you feel any better xD)
I really really don't like Noel, please make him go away :( But first, I need to know why Oliver doesn't like him (apart from the fact that he's clearly jealous, hehe), so tell us soon please!! :)
Can't wait for more!!!Author's Response: Yay yay yay new chapter! Haha, well I'm glad it was worth it because I certainly took long enough :P
You and many other people, love. I don't know why there's such Noel hate... Perhaps you will be finding out why Ollie doesn't like him soon, perhaps not (and Oliver jealous? NEVER.).
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First, congrats on the TA status - yay for faster updates! And also, yay for this chapter being so dramatic and so close to revealing everything!! Please tell me we'll find out what's going on soon??
Secondly, I apologise that it's taken me almost a MONTH to leave a review - somehow, I only just noticed you'd updated :O
Now, on to more pressing issues ... BAD OLIVER! Bad, mean Oliver :( This has to stop soon, okay??? Oliver needs to stop being mean and confess his love for Charlotte and then they can live happily ever after :)
Also, I couldn't stop laughing when Charlotte said "The library is locked after hours!" xD
Can't wait for more (even though I am sad that this story will be ending soon)!!!Author's Response: Hehe. Thank you! & no worries! :D The fact that you still stopped by to review is pretty awesome! So it means a lot to me that you did stop by. ♥
I'm editing and getting ready to put the new chapter up right now! It's been too long and I've been slacking because I've been playing the sims too much. D: but that's just random information, hehe.
Thanks so much! :D It means so much that you've reviewed. ^^ You are awesome!! ♥ Report Review
SQUEAL! AN UPDATE! Your updates always make me smile, no matter how long I have to wait for them, and right now I'm grinning like the Cheshire Cat :D (see??)
OMG, I love Charlotte and Remus, every time she tries something I can't stop laughing! They're adorable! Which leads nicely into quoting the first of my favourite parts:
"I'm just saying it'd only be fair if you knocked her up with triplets. That way there would be one pup for each of us, and we'd all get to be godfathers at the same time. You wouldn't have to pick one of us to be first-"
"You know," Remus interrupted loudly, refusing to look at his friends and instead glowering irritably into his porridge. "This joke stopped being funny about 4 seconds before you said it this morning."
Of course, this story is predominantly about Sirius, so I must therefore quote him too:
'Ergh. No he didn't. He didn't feel that at all. That wasn't manly - talking about hearts and stuff. Next he'd think the squirming in his stomach was butterflies or something.
He wasn't thinking that. Not at all.'
I absolutely loved that part xD And the "I kissed you." "Yes, you did." "You're so smug..." bit :D
But no they can't just be friends!! Like you said, seducing women is pretty much the definition of 'Sirius Black', so I hope it won't be too long before Everly realises this, too xD
Until next time!! :DAuthor's Response: I honestly look forward to your reviews every time I get the chance to update haha. I'm so happy you're sticking with me and my horrible-writer-syndrome-ness. Thanks for reading, you wonderful magnificent person. Report Review
Really enjoyed this update - definitely one of my favourite chapters yet!! :D
Just a few of my favourite parts:
'Picking on each student one by one, he had asked them anything from explaining how to place a phone call to demonstrating the proper way of waiting in line for the bus. The bell had rung just as the next two students were about to demonstrate muggle dancing.'
Harry 'Bedhead' Potter = genius, haha xD
'"She misses him."
Rigsby snorted again, "She totally misses him."'
"Speaking of which, should I get one of those? Only I saw some kids brandishing stick-like objects at each other and yelling all sorts of things, and I really want in on all that fun." - The best part of the whole chapter xD
Ooh, and I can't wait for more Legilimency/Occlumency, I'm loving those parts :DAuthor's Response: yay you're back reading and reviewing yet another chapter, I'm glad you are still enjoying the story! The parts you listed are definitely some of my own favourites (and now I got into the habit of always calling him Harry 'Bedhead' Potter haha)
Lots of *fun* legilimency/occlumency parts coming up soon-ish!
Thanks so much! Cheers! Report Review
Time to prepare your day to be brightened! Haha ;)
Hurray for this chapter!! I love-love-LOVED it :D The whole Lucie and Oliver bit was awesome - you make it so hard for me to decide if I want Lucie to go out with Oliver or Percy! Although, until Percy stops being such a grumpy prat, my vote shall lean towards Oliver xD
A few favourite lines for you before I say farewell for now:
"Well now, Oliver. No need to be racist. I reckon your mum raised you better than that."
"Stop acting like Percy. One of him is enough."
"I still think Krum's got big ears - Oi! Why must you always smack me, woman?!"
Bye for now! :DAuthor's Response: Yay a review from you! My day is so bright now I can hardly see. x) Thank you so much! And I'm with you--I know which guy Lucie's ultimately going to end up with, but I still go back and forth between the two because they each have their moments. If only they both weren't so darn adorable. My next update will be coming soon, just because of you. :) Report Review
Woohoo, a new chapter! :D I really enjoyed it, even if you aren't completely happy with it (if it makes you feel any better, I never feel 100% happy with my own updates haha). Now what's all this drama with Claudia and Isabella, hmm??? "And the plot thickens" indeed ... Tell me more ;)
And YESYESYES Oliver broke up with Isabella!!! Thank you!!! :DDD Yay! Haha xD
Can't wait for more :)Author's Response: Thank you! Ugh. Looking back, I still have issues with it. Mostly with the lack of flow. I feel like I jumped around a bunch because, let's face it, it was pretty filler-y. D:
But it gets better, I sweaaar! :D So thanks so much for sticking with me ^_^ This story is really nearing its end so I'm really excited to start tying things together and revealing the big Claudia/Isabella things. :D
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Ooh, delightfully long chapter, yay! I really enjoyed this - I want to be taught Muggle Studies by Patrick! :D
'shooting the girl a glare that was Gorgon in nature'
Note: I LOVE LIFE ON MARS. You couldn't have picked a better set of DVDs, haha :D
Oh, this was awesome.'
'"It will be fun though - you won't want to miss it."
He couldn't be sure, but he thought he heard silly giggles fading into the distance, and his grin got wider. As if his life wasn't amusing enough, he now had now had a cohort of fangirls too.'
"That is how muggles announce their presence in potentially awkward situations."
"Aha! And that's the question, right? Yeah, I dunno."
Can't wait for more, especially with the complete absence of any new episodes of The Mentalist in the UK at the moment xDAuthor's Response: i know i'm totally in Mentalist withdrawal right now, can't wait for the fall and season 5 wooo! In the mean time hopefully this will keep you entertained ;)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, love hearing from you, especially favourite parts. of course we had to include a 'cohort of fan girls', the story just wouldn't be complete without them ^.^
Thanks again! Next chapter soon.
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YAYYAYYAYYAY AN UPDATE :D
I do have a question for you, though: why oh why is Lucie going on a date with Nolan?? She should be going out with Percy (and from his grumpiness in this chapter, Percy clearly thinks so too ;) )! Or Oliver! I don't really mind which, but one of them!! Please?? :)
I really am this close to applying for membership to the Percy Fan Club now, you know - I'm even having trouble remembering that I've already written him as a complete prat in my own story, because in my head he's now Awesome Percy - damn you and your writing skills :P
Anywho, it's favourite quotes time!! :D
'I was, as a thirty-four year old English man had drawled whilst I was shopping in London the summer before my fifth year, an "exotic specimen". Yeah, right. Creeper.'
'But they never looked at him long enough to notice his calculating blue eyes, or how his smile lit up his entire face. They never spent enough time around him to realize that underneath his prattish nature, there was a bloke who could make you feel as if you were the most important girl in the world.
But I did.' - Seriously, AWW! :D
'If Ron really thought that would happen, he not only had the manners of a mountain troll, but the brains of one, too.' Teehee!
More soon please!!! (But also enjoy your summer ... but also update :P)Author's Response: Your reviews are the best. I know I've said that five million times already, but whatever. I'll say it five million more.
Don't worry, I kind of hate Nolan. Luce and him are definitely NOT going to end up together if I have any say in it (and you know, I have all the say in it).
Thank you so much for putting favorite quotes! It lets me pretend I'm a somewhat witty and poetic person for five seconds. xD
I'll update soon, promise. And I hope you enjoy your summer as well! Report Review
Another great chapter, I loved all the interaction between Patrick and Snape :D Can't wait for more, but before I go, here are a few of my favourite lines :)
"Well, that suits you."
'He assumed that he had firmly cemented himself into their minds as that crazy-psycho-eccentric, and that suited him just fine. Misdirection was a trick of his trade, and it was one trick he held dearly.'
'"Because I didn't know. Obviously."
And then he winked, falling back into step with his new guide, leaving her silent and fuming.'Author's Response: so good to hear from you again! I'm glad you liked it, we were definitely grinning ear-to-ear when writing this. More should be up soon! Thanks for the review! Cheers :) Report Review
It's ... it's ... IT'S OVER???!!! REALLY???!!! :'( But the epilogue was so fantastically lovely that I might just forgive you (especially if we get that one shot :P). Plus, now I get to go back and re-read everything, so at least Jane and Oliver will never really leave my life, hehe xD
Favourite lines/parts (for the last time, sob):
"You're a child."
"Fred's too drunk to even know what sex is."
'He was also wearing Alicia's shoes.'
'Of course Oliver liked showing off how masculine he was. Even to an animal.'
'"I picked you." he said.' AWW :D
'I was pretty sure most of the girls there had beards.'
'It was because of his fantastic taste in clothes. We knew when he began to drool it was time to purchase.'
'And no, Alicia never stopped calling him Dodger.'
'I told him I was rather proud and then painted his fingernails while he slept.'
Awww at Mr Perry and Valerie :)
And as an animal lover, very pleased to see that most people got dogs and cats when they left school xD
'Okay, when I say kidnap I mean she put on a slinky bikini and told him he was going with her. I believe drool was his response.'
'He sat in the locker room for three hours after he was surprised with the decision, staring at the new C on his robes, grinning like a sodding idiot.'
Wedding on the Quidditch Pitch, yay!! And loved: 'I also found out why you do not get fresh with someone in the sand. What a disaster.'
'Oliver was petrified of having a girl once we found out and even had a mental breakdown where he was screaming about 'feminine things' as he called them. I got a good laugh out of it.'
Think this is my longest review EVER, and I can't think of a better story to give it to :D I'M GOING TO MISS THIS SO MUCH D: But thank you so very much for writing it :)Author's Response: I definitely will do the one-shot, but not until I really start to miss them. I want to give myself enough time to really move on from who Jane is in my head. I think that's a main reason I started the Rose/Scorpius story. To have another girl point of view under my belt.
I love your favorite quotes / moments! They crack me up. Love napkingate.
Thank you so much for your amazingly lengthy review! I appreciate it! Thank you again for being so supportive while I wrote this story. Report Review
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