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Review #1, by Summer16455Unfogging The Future: Chapter Two.

3rd June 2011:
good. I just found 1 tiny mistake...
what you had:
Oh hi Hermione, she replied smiling.
Correction:
Oh, hi Hermione, she replied smiling.

There needed to be a comma after "oh".

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Review #2, by Summer16455Unfogging The Future: Chapter One.

3rd June 2011:
pretty good! good start to the story! Do you use FanFiction???

Author's Response: sorry i'm not sure what you mean by do i use it? thanks for reading =)

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