Hey! cwatts12 from the forums, here. So sorry I didn't comment earlier--my computer was being a little you-know-what.
Anyway, I absolutely loved this! It's really sweet and reminds me of a few dates I've had. Props to Molly for sticking it out--I probably would've left after the marriage question. Great job, darling! I can't wait to read what's next!Author's Response: Thank you :) Haha, glad it actually sounds like a date - I'm winging it! Report Review
Hey, this is a pretty good start! I'm interested in seeing what happens next. I hope Rane grows up and gets a reality check, because she seems like she's a little know-it-all, and not the good kind. Good job!Author's Response: Thank you :D !
She sounds a little bit annoying, doesn't she? We'll see what happens :D Stay tuned :D
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oh come on! Please please please please PLEASE update! I love this story so much! I need more!Author's Response: I will try to update as soon as possible :) I'm so glad that you're liking the story though, it means a lot to me. Thanks so much for the review and I hope you have a nice day :) xx Report Review
Heyy! So, I really like it so far. It seems like a pretty interesting start to what could be a very funny story.
There are a few spelling and grammatical errors, but it was still very readable. You might want to use a word processor with spelling and grammar check. If this isn't available to you, maybe have a friend or someone at the forums read it.
Overall, pretty great work! I can't wait to read what comes next!Author's Response: thanks for the review :) Next chapters up now so you can read that if you want. Wring chap 6 soon Report Review
I...don't even know what to say. I fell off my couch laughing at this. I hurt because I've been laughing so hard! Well done, ma'am, well done.Author's Response: Whoop whoop *happy dance because you enjoyed it not because you fell of your chair lol*. Thanks for the review=D!! Report Review
BAHAHAH! Ok, I think my favorite Fling Girl name was Adipose 3...bahahahah beautiful!Author's Response: It's my favourite too :P Thanks for the review! Report Review
Oh, so sad! She just wanted love, but he...oh man, if this weren't a 12+ site, I'd be saying really nasty things right now. Poor girl.
Excellent story!Author's Response: Ikr!! Hhahahahaa thanks for reviewing :D
Thank you! ~NGHL X Report Review
hahaha, nice! Of course Hermione would love someone who's part house elf... :PAuthor's Response: Thank you! Report Review
Hahaha! At first I thought "Boo, she's copying Twilight!" but then the line at the end where he realizes he might sparkle made me change sentiments entirely. Bravo!Author's Response: Haha yeah I didn't want to actually copy twilight, but I just couldn't resist adding that line. I'm glad you approve :) Report Review
Rose Weasley, you're in trouble. :P
Great story! I almost entered into this challenge, but I knew I wouldn't have done that great a job. Awesome job, missy!Author's Response: Thank you!
Your review made me smile and I just love reviews that make me do that :) Report Review
YAY! She's alive! Love it!Author's Response: Aw! Thanks for the review! Report Review
Um, I'm in love. Just telling you that now. LOVE THIS!Author's Response: Aww thanks! :D Report Review
Oh man. Let me just say, as a bride-to-be, I'm terrified by this. But it was a great story, really!Author's Response: hehe, thanks! no worries, I know this won't happen to you :) Report Review
Schwoah. That was intense! Really good!Author's Response: :) thanks. Glad you liked it! :) Thank you for taking the time to read AND review my story! :)
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I'm going to go curl up with my fiance and never let him go now. So sad, but so good!Author's Response: You do that! ^_^ Thank you for reading.
Awh, so adorable. Well, in an "I want to slap you upside the head, Ron Weasley" sort of way.Author's Response: Haha, oh, stubborn Ron. :D Thanks for the read & review! Report Review
No! Bad Jamsie! Haha. Adorable.Author's Response: glad you found it adorable :)
thanks for ther reveiwes dear! Report Review
Hahaha! I love it! I love it so much!!!Author's Response: thank you, thank you so much! Report Review
Ack! What was the artifact?! Sooo good!Author's Response: Hehe, thank you and I can tell you the pocketwatch was involved, but the rest of it is a mix of I haven;t figured it out, and I can;t tell you what I have figured out! :D Report Review
Schwoah...I finished reading this and found I wasn't breathing. EXCELLENT story! Really!Author's Response: Thank you! ^_^ Report Review
Atta boy, Sirius! Swimming the North Sea, that's gutsy! Great story!Author's Response: Well, it's not like he has a choice, but still! :D Thanks for dropping by! I haven't finished all my reviews for you, but I'll be by again. :) Report Review
Hooray! I loved it! This is not how real life turned out for me, but yay it worked out for her!Author's Response: hooray back! aw, i wish it had worked out for you :( but i did think Rose and Scorpius need to be together no matter what :p thanks so much! Report Review
Nice! I've actually been in a situation like this before, and I can say you hit that one on the head of the nail! Ooh, now I have to go read the sequel!Author's Response: really? i have never been on a situation like this before. wow, I nailed it? cool! lol, i hope it went well! off you go little birdie, to see what happened to Rose! :D thanks! Report Review
Aww, so sad! I've always felt bad for Severus. Good story!Author's Response: oh yay! thank you! i feel bad for the guy too... **sigh** but i hated him so long after he killed dumbledore that even when i found out he was a good guy all along i have a that grudge against him. lol!!
glad you liked this though!! :) Report Review
Hey! I really like this! It's a good little one shot. I loved the tension between Teddy and Victorie. Keep it up!
-sk8trmafia08Author's Response: Hey!
Thank you for the lovely review. :)
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