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Reading Reviews From Member: crystallizedpineapple
5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by crystallizedpineappleWhat if It hadn't been me????????: Sorted.

31st July 2011:
So many twists in this story, I love it! :) I hope you continue with this!

Author's Response: I will be continuing this story (along with all of them), I'll not be abandoning it or my other stories. It may take abit of time but I'll get there. If you favourite it you'll know when I update.
In the mean time I've just had a short story prequel to this story posted called Ade's magical awakening posted. Please feel free to read and tell me what you think (there is more to be added to the first chapter, I wanted to get the basic story out while it was fresh).
Thanks for the review. Happy reading.

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Review #2, by crystallizedpineappleTorn: Fourteen

31st July 2011:
Wow! I found this story the other day and read it all in one go-very nice writing, and a really original plotline. I like how you have depicted Remus and Sirius; I think you've done very well staying true to JKR's portrayal of them.
What a terrible turn of events in this chapter! Excellent, can't wait to see how it is all resolved. Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you!

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Review #3, by crystallizedpineappleHarry Potter and the End: Payback on Gred and Forge

30th July 2011:
hahaha i love the fred and george scene!

much better catching all the little grammar mistakes; this chapter flowed very well.

i'm glad the weasley brothers accepted dudley, and that they were even impressed with him. :) and i'm curious about this meeting with mcgonagall!

update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! The only hint you get is the meeting changes everything ;)

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Review #4, by crystallizedpineappleBoarders: Chapter 1: The Trio Is Back

10th July 2011:
Haha great plot set up! Any uncomfortable interaction with Snape is sure to make a hilarious story. Update soon!!

Author's Response: Thanx so much for the review!

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Review #5, by crystallizedpineappleHarry Potter and the End: He's a Wizard?!?

6th July 2011:
This is great! I love stories about Dudley, esp. when he turns out to be a good guy, and yours definitely has a lot of potential!

One small suggestion: be careful with punctuation around dialogue, there's a few places where you should use a ? instead of a comma, for example '"Can you teach me," said Dudley excitedly.'

I can't wait to see where this goes, update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Its my first fic. I will try better next time to catch all the typos. I always thought Dudley deserved a second chance.

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