{reviewid: 2657456, reviewer: 'Girlforeverlost'}
11th February 2012:
This story is amazing. I usually don't like A/U on the whole, but for some reason I gave this one a go. I definitely do not regret it! You're a fantastic and gifted writer,I look forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: YAY! Another A/U convert!
Hmmm... well.
I'm glad you liked the story despite the huge differences with canon. I must admit I wasn't planning on doing anything related to canon when I started it, but I wasn't expecting to be SO far from Canon when book six came out. I had to take a few things from the original version and try and get it closer, such as Harry/Ginny and stuff.
I'm glad you like it and welcome aboard.
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{reviewid: 2621866, reviewer: 'Girlforeverlost'}
28th November 2011:
I love this! My heart actually broke for Candice, definitely a relatable feeling.
Can't wait to read more!!
Author's Response:
I' so happy you love this (not that your heart broke aww xd) ahah :P Thank you for reviewing and you will soon ! :)
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{reviewid: 2603059, reviewer: 'Girlforeverlost'}
16th October 2011:
FINALLY!
:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
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{reviewid: 2602904, reviewer: 'Girlforeverlost'}
15th October 2011:
I was so wrapped up in this chapter I cried at the end. That's NEVER happened to me on this site.
Amazing, can't wait for the next chapter.
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{reviewid: 2534564, reviewer: 'Girlforeverlost'}
18th June 2011:
ohmygod *dies*
I can't describe this chapter as anything else. I'm in love with it.
AHH! so good.
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{reviewid: 2491685, reviewer: 'Girlforeverlost'}
10th March 2011:
haha awesome! I was waiting for the more overt sexual tension, definitely got what I wanted within those last few lines! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: haha, glad that you finally got it! i couldn't pass that moment up at all lol.
thanks for the review and i'll post again soon!
-WP :)
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{reviewid: 2485596, reviewer: 'Girlforeverlost'}
25th February 2011:
Ah now we've come full circle! I'm very interested to see how it goes from here. I'm really enjoying this story, and you're vivid writing style sure helps!
Author's Response: yup, its back to the beginning now and im so eager to post these chapters! im really glad that you like it as well as my writing style ^_^
more shall be on the way as always :)
-WP
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{reviewid: 2481663, reviewer: 'Girlforeverlost'}
17th February 2011:
This story is so cute! I'm really enjoying it so far, keep updating! I really like how you introduce characters and build them up so the reader can get a sense of them, especially so early on! I can't wait to see how everyone keeps developing.
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{reviewid: 2480487, reviewer: 'Girlforeverlost'}
14th February 2011:
great story!
I'm really enjoying it, keep going!
Author's Response: Glad you like it, next chapter is nearly finished being written. Thanks for the review! x
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{reviewid: 2478214, reviewer: 'Girlforeverlost'}
9th February 2011:
Great chapter! your flow is amazing, I'm very envious! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: thank you!! so glad that you like it!
i'll be sure to post again soon! :)
-WP
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{reviewid: 2477681, reviewer: 'Girlforeverlost'}
8th February 2011:
This was the most beautiful thing I have ever read on this site. Thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you so much (:
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{reviewid: 2474390, reviewer: 'Girlforeverlost'}
2nd February 2011:
Very interesting! I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: thank you! glad that you like it so far! :)
-WP
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{reviewid: 2461037, reviewer: 'Girlforeverlost'}
7th January 2011:
ahh loved it :D
can't wait for the rest!
Very interested to see whats in the letter, I'm sure it can't be too good.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
ash
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{reviewid: 2460998, reviewer: 'Girlforeverlost'}
7th January 2011:
EE! I'm soo happy for the update! I was just thinking about this story the other day :) Loved it, this Jasmine is quite terrifying, I'm a little worried about her. Can't wait to read the rest!
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{reviewid: 2446423, reviewer: 'Girlforeverlost'}
6th December 2010:
loved it! can't wait for the next chapter what with all your hinting at big happenings!
Author's Response: I'll update soon! Thanks for the review. G
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{reviewid: 2445191, reviewer: 'Girlforeverlost'}
4th December 2010:
ohmygoodgawd what a perfect chapter! The moment I've been waiting for!!! Amazing! Stupendous! Wonderful!
Basically, I loved it :)
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{reviewid: 2442838, reviewer: 'Girlforeverlost'}
30th November 2010:
definitely just read all 12 chapters...where has this story been all my life?! slight exaggeration, but I think it proves my point :) I'm absolutely LOVING this story! You have a wonderful writing style, it's so nice to read and very easy to follow. I think I would like to see more detail, maybe like more description especially with how James or Lily or anyone is feeling, but really that's just me being picky, because there is a fair amount. I'm absolutely favoriting this story! can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: aww thanks :) hahah yeah i suck with description... def one of my weak spot but im working on it!! this review made me really happy and thanks once again!!!
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{reviewid: 2433822, reviewer: 'Girlforeverlost'}
10th November 2010:
I think the best word to describe this chapter is "WOAH!".
Awesome awesome awesome, I was pretty sure something was going to happen with Lily and Luke and I'm glad it has! I feel so bad for James though, what a bitch. I hope he finds someone better. Well written, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Ohh everyone is so sweet :) Thank you so much for such a sweet review, you are too kind!
I am so happy you are enjoying it!
xx
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{reviewid: 2431307, reviewer: 'Girlforeverlost'}
4th November 2010:
I'm absolutely in love with this story. The imagery it creates is so amazing. You're a great writer, I can't wait for more :)
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{reviewid: 2430457, reviewer: 'Girlforeverlost'}
1st November 2010:
I just found this story last night and I am loving it! Ariadne is so funny, and now that you're mixing in the sweet bits with Al it's even more awesome to read! great job keep it up!
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{reviewid: 2409676, reviewer: 'Girlforeverlost'}
7th September 2010:
noo! ahh ok I need the next chapter A.S.A.P.
soo good! just what I wanted! update soon please :)
Author's Response: Its up and ready to read now. Hope you like it!! G.
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{reviewid: 2406275, reviewer: 'Girlforeverlost'}
30th August 2010:
too short! hahaha.
kidding (sort of :P) but a very good chapter. I really liked it, but I must say I'm looking forward to the next one about the ball, I have a feeling katie/al is going to pick up and so is rose/scor. Hope I'm not disappointed!
again great chapter, keep going with it!
Author's Response: Aw, I'm sorry it was so short. But most of my chapaters are the same length no? I'm glad you liked this chapter, and I assure you that i will update soon. Cheers. G
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{reviewid: 2403407, reviewer: 'Girlforeverlost'}
24th August 2010:
I need an update!
WHAT HAPPENS!
very well written, I'm glad shes told everyone about some aspects of her past.
Author's Response: I'll update soon!! I promise! Haha. I'm glad your eager!! Thank you!! I decided it was time to let them know about her past. SHe had kept silent for a long time!! Thank you for reading and reviewing!
-Graceyn
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{reviewid: 2403209, reviewer: 'Girlforeverlost'}
24th August 2010:
Really good! few mistakes here and there- Harry being the godfather to Teddy, not the other way around, but we all make mistakes! Honestly I loved it. Can't wait for the next chapter!
More Albus/Katie though please!
Author's Response: Sorry about that mistake! I'll fix it as soon as i can. I'm glad you liked it more, and i swear Al/Katie stuff is coming up. Thanks for the review. G
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{reviewid: 2386150, reviewer: 'Girlforeverlost'}
27th July 2010:
I love this story! honestly it's very refreshing, most people shy away from making a second generation fic where their main character is obsessive over the fame surrounding the potter/weasleys! I like the idea of it! I just want to see more katie/albus!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're a fan. I was worried about publishing this story here as much as any author, but your feedback is really motivating me to continue. I will definitley be putting in more katie/albus as the story pregresses. Cheers. G.
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