great idea and great storyline!!!Author's Response: thnx alot! u will soon get the next chpt Report Review
i was looking through my favorites one day and i realized that this was saved in my favorites. so i decided to read it again, and i remembered why i favorited it. then, i decided to leave a review,, so here we go.
i truly loved it. i loved the way you portrayed ron's character. i also enjoy reading about "missing moments" in the books, its really cool to get another potterhead's depiction or interpretation of these missing scenes.
once again, i loved it, and thanks for writing it!Author's Response: Aw thank you so much for favouriting it and leaving me such a complimentary review :)
I also love reading fellow potterhead's missing moments. It's always interesting to read another person's interpretation, even if it differs from your own.
Thanks again! Report Review
that was a really great start! im convinced to read every last chapter in this story! amazing! i hope you do update soon(:Author's Response: Aw, Gosh. That's real nice. Thanks SO much. : ) I'm going to update ASAP! I still have to finish this chapter and I'll post as soon as I finish. Almost done! :)
Thanks for the Review and the favorite Report Review
hahahahaha! loved it! i love how ron was like..."who does that?!" and he was talking about himself the whole time! amazing story! hermione and rose have the perfect mother, daughter relationship! Report Review
this is one of the best fanfics i have ever read, hands down. i dont want to sound morbid, ,because i usually hate gore and stuff, but i think that the way you described hermione's torture was so real. i genuinely liked that. it shows how cruel voldemort can be, especially to innocent people as well. im glad that you didn't kill hermione off, but i actually liked lucius malfoy in your story! haha! :) i was sad when he died. like, seriousllyyy, thank you for the storyyy!Author's Response: Thank you! You are too kind to me!! I am thrilled you liked the story so much and I'm really glad you liked the writing style. As you pointed out, my intention was to show how cruel Voldemort can be--I'm really happy that came through.
Lucius...yes, he's my favourite character along with Snape and Sirius, which I guess sounds like a paradox, lol. He had to die in this fanfiction, though.
Thank you again for your wonderful review!
Merope :)x Report Review
you should write a sequel where lavender actually gives the potion to hermione. that would be really cool. well, not for hermione...but stilll haha :)Author's Response: I might do that :) Thanks for reading! :D Report Review
awesome story so far! update soon please! im really excited to read the whole thing! Report Review
I loved this story! nice job! (: you are a great writer!Author's Response: Thank you!!! ~writergirl8 Report Review
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