{reviewid: 2518491, reviewer: 'siriuslylovelupin'}
7th May 2011:
I found a couple spelling and grammar mistakes but it was very good none-the-less.
I really liked it! I liked how you made them go to the Evan's house. Nice twist!
-siriuslylovelupin (MLL)
Author's Response: I've glad you liked the Evan's twist. Something I knew no one would think of. I've very glad you liked it. Thanks for the review. :)
~Luna
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{reviewid: 2512491, reviewer: 'siriuslylovelupin'}
23rd April 2011:
Ah. NOW I understand. Its quite sweet actually, that she loves him so much that shes willing to do that. :3
I loved this chapter, a bit long, but it surely clears up everything!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you loved this chapter. I tried to make it shorter, but a few days of editing and re-editing couldn't do the trick. Thanks for the review!
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{reviewid: 2510367, reviewer: 'siriuslylovelupin'}
18th April 2011:
Hah. Malfoy on medication. XD
poor ron/hermione ):
Author's Response: Draco doesn't stay on the meds long enough, and I never really liked Ron... sorry.
Kinda.
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{reviewid: 2510364, reviewer: 'siriuslylovelupin'}
18th April 2011:
I normally despise dramione fanfics. But since you included ron and hermione dating for a little. I shall read on.
nice job.
Author's Response: Whoops a Sirius and Lupin Luvr!
? Thanks for the review :) Hope you like the rest.
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{reviewid: 2506482, reviewer: 'siriuslylovelupin'}
11th April 2011:
NO! You cant stop there! Ugh!
I really like this chapter!
Author's Response: Sorry, but I had too! Glad you liked it, and thanks for reviewing!
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{reviewid: 2505838, reviewer: 'siriuslylovelupin'}
10th April 2011:
Andromeda is my favourite sister of the three Black sisters! :-D
I really really liked this chapter. Your writing keeps better as you go along. Keep it up!
-siriuslylovelupin (MLL)
Author's Response: Thank you so so so much! Your reviews keep getting better too!
Hugs~
Tashi
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{reviewid: 2505837, reviewer: 'siriuslylovelupin'}
10th April 2011:
BELLATRIX!!! Oh, no, suspense here at the end!!
Oh, and I LOVE the beatles.
I love how you're making Remus' character, he interesting to read when it's his P.O.V or about him. I like it!
-siriuslylovelupin (MLL)
Author's Response: THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU! Thanks so much! I really love this review!
Hugs~
Tashi
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{reviewid: 2505834, reviewer: 'siriuslylovelupin'}
10th April 2011:
Amortania is my favourite potion just because of what I would smell! ^.^
I liked this line very much: "If he were a dog, his tail would be wagging so fast it would be a blur."
Very well done!
Yay Remus SPEAKS! :-D
-siriuslylovelupin (MLL)
Author's Response: Ahh, thanks MLL! You're so nice!
Hugs~
Tashi
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{reviewid: 2505832, reviewer: 'siriuslylovelupin'}
10th April 2011:
Very nicely done! You write the James/Lily relationship very well. Off to the next chapter.
-siriuslylovelupin (MLL)
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! I'm glad you think I did the James/Lily well!
Hugs~
Tashi
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{reviewid: 2505830, reviewer: 'siriuslylovelupin'}
10th April 2011:
I love Sirius' love for his brother despite what Regulus "wants." Very well done!
-siriuslylovelupin (MLL)
Author's Response: Ahh, thanks so much!
Hugs~
Tashi.
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{reviewid: 2502490, reviewer: 'siriuslylovelupin'}
3rd April 2011:
Write more write more write more! I wanna know whats up with Artemis loosing her memories if shes not a werewolf!! Ahh youre a confusing person!!
loved this chapter!
Author's Response: I try to write as much as I can, when I can! The next three chapters should clear up everything. And if you think I'm confusing to you, be grateful you're not Artemis! Thanks for the review!
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{reviewid: 2500764, reviewer: 'siriuslylovelupin'}
29th March 2011:
Remus sure can pack a punch! LOL!
I liked it. Off to the next chapter.
-siriuslylovelupin. (MLL)
Author's Response: Thanks! Thanks bunches!
Hugs~
Tashi
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{reviewid: 2500414, reviewer: 'siriuslylovelupin'}
28th March 2011:
Interesting.
Very good moral: Be yourself.
Never thought J.S.P of being gay.
I LIKED IT!
-siriuslylovelupin. (MLL)
Author's Response: Hey MLL! Thanks a lot. Personally, I can't see J.S.P. any other way! Thanks again!
Hugs~
Tashi!
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{reviewid: 2498502, reviewer: 'siriuslylovelupin'}
24th March 2011:
Oh my gosh! I loved this. I teared up like three times. It was so GOOD yet so sad. Very well written too. I love the ending how Regulus turned a bit evil. Very nice twist!
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{reviewid: 2498048, reviewer: 'siriuslylovelupin'}
23rd March 2011:
I KNEW IT! :D lol, love this chapter!! cant wait for the next!!
Author's Response: Ha ha! Glad you loved it! Next chapter will come in a few days!
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{reviewid: 2490761, reviewer: 'siriuslylovelupin'}
7th March 2011:
ugh, you are confusing! :P
great story, I really do love it! its great, youre a talented writer. :-)
i love remus as well, haha, ;)
i cant wait to figure out her secret!
Hey, could you check out my story? No ones really reviewed it and I need opinions, especially since youre an awesome writer. Thanks so much. :)
Author's Response: Ah, I love being confusing, although I hope it will make a whole lot more sense when the story's over. Oh, and thank you for the compliments! Makes me feel like I'm good at something!
And sure, I can read over your story. Make a suggestion here and there if you like. My time is really strapped, but I'll try to help you out as a fellow writer.
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{reviewid: 2487473, reviewer: 'siriuslylovelupin'}
1st March 2011:
So, is artemis a werewolf? the last chapter, the way you ended it, got me a little confused. lol.
I LOVE YOUR STORY BY THE WAY!
Author's Response: Ooh, that would be telling! Tee hee. You'll just have to wait and see. Thanks for the review!
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{reviewid: 2485405, reviewer: 'siriuslylovelupin'}
24th February 2011:
wow, really...i LOVED this story. its so...sweet. :3
Author's Response: Thanks for your kind comments
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{reviewid: 2482534, reviewer: 'siriuslylovelupin'}
19th February 2011:
Bellatrixs last name is black, not lestrange.
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