Very well written chapter! But, I really don't like Albus and Ranny together. They just... don't seem to fit together, I guess? She should just tell all the boys to shove it and go about her merry, single, way. xDAuthor's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm glad that you're enjoying this still! :) Not everyone is a fan of Albus and Ranny together, and I know how annoying that must be for you, to have read all of this for it to come to an end with a pairing that you don't like. But I do hope that you like the ending. :)
I have actually considered that, and I do like the idea of Ranny going about life by her whimsical self, but you'll have to wait for the epilogue to see for yourself! Thank you again. Report Review
If HPFF was Facebook, I would like this ;DAuthor's Response: Why, thank you. I'm glad to hear it! :D
The next chapter is in the queue, I hope that you like it! And thank you for the review! Report Review
(my favorite line)
"Yet, by fearing, I had tamed a dragon, the most beautiful dragon of them all. With skin as hard as hide, and a tongue as fluent as water. A boy of pure poetry. My Charlie."
You, my dear, write pure poetry. Every single time. :)Author's Response: Thank you so much. :)
I am so glad that you've enjoyed this, and honestly, I am very flattered. Thank you again. Report Review
Lovely, as always :) Your take on Rose was really unique. People usually portray her as the goody-good/overly nice type of person, seeing her in a meaner light was refreshing :D
I quite like Tom. A potential love interest, perhaps? Can't wait for the next chapter! < 3Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely review. I have just answered your other one, on my one-shot about Charlie - another sweet one, thank you :D
I'm glad that you enjoyed this chapter. :)
I can't seem to write a character for Rose that stay's nice, I have tried to many times to make her sweet, and also to write stories from her point of view, but I always struggle, so I thought that I would embrace it all in this story, and go ahead with full force :D
I'm afraid that you'll have to wait for that. ;) Thank you again! Report Review
"Shiny!" Scorpius said excitedly, dropping the food and running over to me so he could take it. "Can I keep it?"
lol that's my favorite quote. Report Review
i think that scorpius and ranny would make a better couple than albus and ranny, they just seem to... fit. so i am secretly shipping them ;)
i really love this story so far. the characters are already so vividly developed, and it's only chapter 3! it's different than your other stories but in a good way. keep up the good work! Author's Response: I wondered how long it would be before someone said that! :P :D
It's okay, I had planned at one point for them to end up together, but then . we'll you'll just have to wait and see!
Thank you for the review! I'm glad that you're enjoying this! I have tried to make it different to my other stories, so I hope that you still enjoy it! :D Report Review
i loved it! the ending was perfect!
and i'm glad that adam got what was coming to him ;)Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm glad that you enjoyed it!
I thought of so many things that they could do to Adam (however most of them were illegal) and so I went with this one in the end. Thank you again!
I'm so glad that you liked the ending! Report Review
gah! stupid seven! he ruins everything!
rose better turn him down! why can't she see that he's no good?! scorpius is so much better than him! grrr.
i really liked scorpius' POV :) you should do more chapters with him narrating (hint, hint ;D)Author's Response: He is quite the poop head. I just can't wait until you get to the next chapter :) it is the dance from Rose's POV... more to be revealed and possibly reviled. :) Report Review
my favorite character is scorpius. he's exactly how i imagined him to be :D my least favorite character... i don't have one yet. i don't know enough about adam to hate him haha.
awesome chapter! 10/10Author's Response: Thank you for the review!
I'm glad that you're liking Scorpius, I love the bloke! :D
I will update soon. Maybe you'll have an opinion on Adam then :D
Thank you again! Report Review
"Give me a minute; I'll make it beautiful for you." that's my favorite line :) Report Review
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