i love it! good job! the ending was especially emotional!Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm super glad that you liked it! Report Review
Loved it! Hope you've got some other stuff this good up your sleeve!Author's Response: Haha I hope so too! Thank you for the review! Report Review
Really really good! I like that Ginny understood, but I think she was little too excepting. I imagine she wouldn't have been surprised, but she loved him so dearly, she was depressed without him at Hogwarts, I can't imagine that she would have accepted it so easily. But Ron and Hermione are perfect, good job!Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! I appreciate hearing your thoughts. I'm glad that you thought that Ron and Hermione were done well. As for Ginny, I tried to allow the reader to see that she was really hurting, but was putting on a strong face. I think part of her knew that something like that was going to happen sooner or later. She understands his 'saving people thing' more than any other character, in my opinion. It doesn't mean she likes it, and it doesn't mean that she isn't going to break down later. I think she's just trying really hard to fake nonchalance. Does that make sense? I'm not sure I'm explaining it very well.
I've written a follow up to this story, "This Ends Today" that explores nine character's reactions to Harry's 'death' and Ginny's is one of them, if you'd like to check that out. I'd love to know what you think.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing :) Report Review
I like it! It's really good :) You should put a little more descriptive into stuff like this from now on, 'cause you've got a strong vision and great emotion, it just goes by too fast. i have the same problem sometimes. Good job !Author's Response: Hm...I'll keep that in mind the next time I update. I might add a few things here and there...who knows? Thanks for reading! Report Review
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