great job! a lot of stories on here don't have enough description but I'd say you definitely have enough!! again- awesome job!
for some reason, those twins creep me out. and I don't like the name Xander or Zelda at all, but besides that I really like it!Author's Response: Aww, that's so sweet! The twins are a little creepy, aren't they? And as for you not liking the names, they're strange, so I understand. Thank you for reviewing! :) Report Review
sorry but this doesn't really make sense. the reason harry was almost sorted into slytherin was because of the connection that he had with voldemort. harry had a piece of voldemorts soul inside him (horcrux). while his son, albus, obviously does not have this at all.
sorry that im a stickler for the rules. im just a diehard harry potter fan.Author's Response: Firstly, thank you for reading and reviewing; I appreciate it. For this story, I decided that Albus shouldn't be automatically sorted into Gryffindor just because he is a Potter/Weasley. Albus might have ambitions or another Slytherin trait so he was considered for Slytherin. Hope this helps.
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