Ah! This is so good!! Update soon please!(:

Author's Response: working on it now!! Keep reading!! thanks for the comment!!

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This is orginal! I love it! You should get a banner for the story! Your story would get so many bloody reviewss!(: (the-dark-arts)Update soonnn(: 9/10

Author's Response: Thanks SOOO much! The third chapter is in validation as we speak!



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Aww i love it! There suppose to be hating each other but really love each other. Are you going to add Pansy in there that would be intresting? The story is like Foribbean Love(:
Update soon! 10/10

Author's Response: Wohey! Pansy will be in the story, and there will be some drama. Of course :)
Thank you :D Next chapter is up today!

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This is going to be a good story(: updte soon!!

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This is really good. Please do continue and update soon (:

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I absolutely love this story! Amy is a little weird/crazy but who isnt ? Ido hope Amy and Draco end up together (: keep updating!

Author's Response: I have to agree Amy is kinda wierd in a good way and you will have to wait and see, it will happen eventually! The next chapter should be out soon :)
Thanks for taking the time to review :)
MissDiggory x


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This is such a brillant story!! I wish you would have given more information on your characther. Besides, that it is amazing! I can't wait till the next chapter. Also, i would like to know why she is a 'Potter' but her last name is Winter. Can you please clear that up? I love this. My new fav story!

10/10

-MacKenzie

Author's Response: *happy dance*
Thanks! First, I am terrified of being one of those 'My name is black, I look like blah, I'm wearing designer blah'...but I could afford to put in a bit more flesh. ;) And she was originally not James's sister. Somehow, it seems that I've missed something. *scampers off to find all typos*
And your new favorite? *blush* Aw, shucks.
Thanks for the helpful review! The next chapter (and the fixed 2nd chapter) are in the works.
Hugs For You!,
Lucky

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I got to admit this is an amazing story! I'm not just saying that, this story is well written and it has that edge to it that you want to keep reading and reading and not have it stop. I'm not all that into reading certain Snape stories, but wow. You are an amazing author that can really write. You have every detail, and the beginning, the middle and hopefully the end. I wish there was an higher number to rate this story but sadly there isn't. ): I can't wait to read more and i am patiently waiting for the next chapter. I will most likey see if you have written any other stories and read them.

10/10

You have a great talent for writting remember that and dont let anyone tell you differently (:

-MacKenzie

Author's Response: aw thanks :) I admit that I think fanfiction has improved my writing a lot. Again, thanks for the review.

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Hi, I know your re-writting this story, but I think you should keep ar least most of the story one point of view. You can add thoughts and all that, but at least try to. That's only my opinion. Besides that though it's really good!! 10/10 (:

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Amazing. Update soon!!

10/10
Kenzie Black

Author's Response: thanks!! xx

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Wow. Amazing chapter! I like how Remus is the one to tell her. I also love that the temper she has,i really am interested to find out what happens next. Update soon!

10/10
Kenzie Black

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you like the next one too!

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I love it! Its so funny! Please update soon!

10/10

Kenzie Black

Author's Response: lol thanks will do =)

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Oh my MERLIN!!! Amazing. I lke the suprize, and the alliance at the end was unappected. Intresting chapter. I love this one, not that i don't love the others but this one is so far my favortive. I probably missed spelled alot of words so sorry. Hehe(:

10/10

-Kenzie Black(:

Author's Response: Oh wow! I'm so happy you liked it that much! Thanks for making my day with that review. :D

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Ooo. Interesting, hmmm i love that quite with the drumsticks and boys and swords, very funny. I enjoyed reading this as usual and, i cant wait for the next chapter. I also love your banner, wonderful! 10/10

-MacKenzie(:

Author's Response: Thank you! I just thought it was the perfect place for a Starkid quote. :P I'm getting to writing the next chapter, so hopefully, it'll be up. Thanks for the great review!

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This is so funny. I love it!! 10/10

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I like it. She is the air.. hmm. Very intresting, shes going to get in trouble one day with being the air and find out horrible information. Amazing as always though(:

-MacKenzie

Author's Response: I'm happy you liked it! :D Thanks for the awesome review!

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This is really good. I really like how started out the story, with some background information. It's not too much though and i like the way you did that. Now, i'm not sure how your going to start the next chapter, but it would really cool if you just atomically skipped to sixth year was it? I think it would be best to get to the details, but then again her life is really intersing, so maybe her starting at first isn't so bad. Even her telling a little bit of the years, and her worst nightmares/visions would be a good way to start of the next chapter. Just some ideas and tips, it's not my story though(:. It is really good. I am hoping to see the next chapter soon(:

10/10

-MacKenzie Black(:

Author's Response: Thank you! For the compliments and the tips, I'm always open to critizism and advice. I hope you like the next chapter. :)

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Go Sydney!! Girl is doing the right thing. Once a Black, always a Black. (:

10/10 (:

Update soon?

-MacKenzie

Author's Response: Thanks! :)
And the next update will be right after another story's chapter posts. Thanks for your support:)

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This is really good! Like really good! It discribes the whole the girl population. I hope you continue(: Please, update soon!! Amzing. (:

100/10 (:

-MacKenzie

Author's Response: Hi!
Thanks so much for the lovely review!
Haha, well I'm trying to give a good picture of how complicated girls can be, hope you keep enjoying it!
Next update coming next week, as soon as I find a moment between finals to put it up!
Thanks again,
Lots of love,
Kate

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Wow. This is good. Update soon!(:

Author's Response: Wow. Thank you. I'm trying, but I have to FINISH the 3rd chapter first! Haha... no, but I'll finish as soon as humanely possible. It's been pretty hard, but I think I'm getting there. :)
Thanks for the short and sweet review: I really appreciate it, thank you!

MW X

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Amazing!!! Natalie. Should really tell Dumbledore!! Ah!! James or Remus might find out soon. Maybe Sirius might. Well, i dont know. Update sonn pleaseee???

Author's Response: haha if shes smart she will soon haha its getting harder for her to keep things a secret so you will be satisfied soon. i hope. thank you for reviewing!!

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Amazing as always! Update soon(:

Author's Response: Thanks!:)
Also, thanks so much for finally being the one to break the thirteen reviews. I was getting nervous, lol.

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Oh my merlin!!! Thats crazy. I love the detail that you put into this story/chapter. Please update soon! Amazing so far. Adding to favorites. And will keep looking to see if you put up the next chapter. Amazing.

-MacKenzie

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Amazing. As normal. Whats going to happen when see shes James? Does anyone know she is gone? Ahhh please update soon! And amazing story. (:

-MacKenzie

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the great review! I'm glad you liked the chapter. (: The next one's waiting to be validated and will hopefully be up soon.

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Omg. What does Sirius think hes doing?? I think shes loosing up to bim or else she would of killed him. Shes going to embrass herself i know it. I love it!! 10/10 (:

Author's Response: Haha, thanks!
They have a crazy relationship:)

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