This is an awesome story! I've read about a thousand and three Marauders fics, but this is (literally) the very first one I've ever enjoyed. Poppy has a fun POV to read from, and your style feels so similar to JKR's that it feels almost canon. Please update this soon, now I want to see what happens! 9/10 and favorited.Author's Response: oh wow thanks so much! your lovely comments are definitely appreciated! (: Report Review
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THANKS FOR READING :D Report Review
Oh, don't give up on this! This was a wonderful chapter and I for one can't wait to see what happens next. You have captured an amazing original idea and you should update much more often! Contact me if you need a beta, I'd be ecstatic to help :)Author's Response: I'm really trying not to give up on this. lol. I have the next chapter written I just need to type it. Actually I feel stupid asking this but what is a beta? I probably need it lol. Thanks for all your kind thoughts. Report Review
This is the most wonderful thing I have ever read in my life.
I am BLINDED by the wonderfulness.
I AM NOT WORTHY TO READ SCORPIUS' MIND.
AGGGHFLNFRRGHN. Et cetera.Author's Response: WELL OF COURSE, IT'S ONLY NATURAL TO BE INTIMIDATED BY THE WONDER THAT IS LE SCORP.
Thanks for reading, amigo! Report Review
PLEASE write a sequel! This was an incredible story, your writing style is nearly identical to JKR's, the characterization was spot-on, and you developed the dynamics between Harry and Snape flawlessly. This needs a sequel! Since this takes place (I assume) during Chamber of Secrets, there should be one for Prisoner of Azkaban as well! Will Ron ever get over himself? Will Harry find out that Sirius is innocent? These questions need ANSWERING! Please write a sequel, if you need a beta then I'll be ecstatic to help :) Report Review
ARGH! What's the deal with Astoria?? Is SHE Hermione??? Is Draco insane? SO many questions!! They'd better all be answered by the end! You are a master of suspense and I will be checking this for new chapters until everything is resolved >:D hurry and post the next one please!Author's Response: LOL haha thank you so much! Report Review
I may or may not have shrieked like a small child when I saw this new chapter >.> Even if I did, it was still amazing! I can't wait for the next one, there's so much suspense happening right now! So many questions! Is Hermione still dead? Is she an Inferi? Was she never dead to begin with? And where does her creepy stalker fit in? Is Astoria really Hermione? Is Astoria dead? AUGH SO MANY THEORIES. 10/10 for another spectacular chapter that's keeping me addicted!Author's Response: OH thank you so much! I love you, I love everyone who has reviewed this story, today being my birthday especially :D I am writing the next chapter, it should be in the queue BY THURSDAY AT THE VERY LATEST. Mhmm. Thanks love, have a great day. Report Review
This was a beautiful one-shot. There aren't enough fics about Ariana, and this one captures her perfectly. 10/10Author's Response: Thank you!! :D Report Review
So as I am re-reading this, I think to myself:
Who stole my cookie?
And also, WHEN IS THERE GOING TO BE AN UPDATE?
You totally left us on a cliffhanger on Chapter 11! NOT COOL. I've been hanging in suspense for so long my elbows are starting to cry. PLEASE post again! Or at least tell us when we can EXPECT another chapter! GAH, SHUT UP ELBOWS.Author's Response: Oh goodness, I'm really sorry. I'm so sorry, I feel so awful, you have no idea. I'm on writer's block atm, but I have the next chapter done, I'm just terribly unhappy with it. I am so sorry, I will try to get it up as soon as possible! It might be in the queue by tonight if we're lucky. Maybe review the other chapters? Maybe that would help... Report Review
Not fair! You have to update soon or I might cry! You have one of the most-reviewed stories on this entire WEBSITE so that should give you sufficient pride to motivate you to finish it! We all believe in you!!! *strikes dramatic pose* But yeah. Seriously. Update this story. Report Review
Umm, this is wonderful. WHY HAS IT NOT BEEN UPDATED??? Please continue this story before my brain melts and becomes sad!!Author's Response: Thanks! I'm sorry about updating; my life is kind of busy but I'll try and get a new chapter up soon! Thank you so much for reviewing!
~mads Report Review
AH!!! This is terrifying! Hurry and post the next chapter or my poor little brain might implode from strain and suspense! (P.S. this was a wonderful chapter, I love how seamlessly you can switch from POV to POV without confusing the reader! 10/10!)Author's Response: Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you! That is all I have to say. This means a lot to me, I really appreciate it! Report Review
This is simply beautiful. I'm speechless. An amazing story that meshes seamlessly with Moody's character and gives him a depth that I doubt even Rowling could parallel. This is a spectacular work of art and I applaud the author. Incredible work. ~KAuthor's Response: Thank you very much! It's a wonderful compliment that you enjoyed this story to such a degree. I'm really glad to hear that what's here suits the Moody of the books - it was wonderful to give him both a history and a family, rather than leave him the paranoid Auror and nothing more. :) Report Review
Please update, this is a really good story that I love and want to see the end of. True authors never give up! Stick with it and you will be happy with the results. (As will many of your readers!) Report Review
"...because hitting them at the rather pathetic Hufflepuffs would have been too mean."
Gotta love those Hufflepuffs. Great story by the way! Finally, a fan fiction that is NOT centered around vampires/odd pairings/forbidden love/Dramione/some swooning girl falling for Sirius Black and then dying a tragic death/James and Lily and how they fell in love. THANK YOU. 10/10.Author's Response: Haha I'm so glad you liked it and that it was new and different for you! Also delighted you thought that was a good line - I love when readers quote bits at me :D Thank YOU for reviewing; getting feedback is wonderful!
~mads Report Review
Awesome chapter as always, even if it was a little short! Whose body was in the Vanishing Cabinet? AHHH I feel like I'm watching a TV show, and it's almost at the season finale! More, please! 10/10Author's Response: The next chapter is in the queue, thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Grr! Every time this gets updated I keep looking for answers but every chapter raises more questions and just pulls me in deeper! Update soon please, or I might implode :)Author's Response: LOL, I'll try to update soon. My beta's on vaca, but I might just post chapters and edit them later. Thanks for the review! Report Review
I'm dying laughing over here. Report Review
Amazing one-shot! I hate how everyone just sort of overlooks Peter. All these fanfics about the Marauders, and they only seem to include Remus, James, and Sirius. But here, you have done something that makes sense, and that's saying a lot. Perfect mix of flashbacks and present, and the whole seeing-Harry-as-James-and-Ron-as-Sirius thing was very well thought of. 10/10 for (in my opinion) what passes for a perfect one-shot!Author's Response: Oh wow...thank you so much! This really means a lot.
I am glad that you liked it!
So many familiar names! Pince, Peverell... they all ring a bell, and that gives it so much of the "realness" of the actual HP books! Props to you :)Author's Response: thanks! :) Report Review
An absolutely breathtaking and beautiful piece. Just short enough to keep it sad and melancholy, but you manage to squeeze so much emotion and friendship into so few paragraphs. The analogy of the daisies was perfectly structured, and the way you put everything from Harry's point of view made the entire thing mesh into an exquisite piece that is truly moving. 10/10 for one of the most amazing works I have seen on this site. Report Review
IDEA: I will not claim that there is a prequel to "Hogwarts, A History" and proceed to explain about Bilbo Baggins.
Awesome story, funny and well-written aside from the occasional grammatical error that nobody besides me notices. For a story based on a series of Pieces of Flair on Facebook, you have somehow managed to give it plot, drama, and dialogue that sounds exactly how the characters (i.e., Snape, Malfoy, Pansy) would say it! 9/10, keep this up :) Report Review
Wow! To be honest Regulus Black was my ABSOLUTE FAVORITE character in the Harry Potter series, even though he's not really a "character" at all. To see him characterized like this, the way I always imagined, is awesome :) I love the way you made him and Sirius be sort-of-friends, instead of always mortal enemies like everyone else. Kreacher was adorable! Couldn't find any spelling/grammar mistakes, and the dialogue fit the scenes perfectly. 10/10!Author's Response: I know what you mean. He's one of my faves too. Non-character characters are the best. :P
Yeah, I really felt like as children they would have been closer. Then school caused their split. With such different personalities and all. I explore their connection and past a bit more as the story goes so I hope that you enjoy those. :)
Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to review! --Jenna Report Review
I love this story! The plot is original and believable, and this is coming from someone who usually *hates* next-generation stories. I really want to see what happens next! More chapters please! 10/10! P.S. Props for using Alex Pettyfer for a chapter heading ;) HOTAuthor's Response: More chapters are coming soon :)
Thanks for reviewing. And yes, Pettyfer is hot :) Report Review
Wow! How does this only have one review??? This is an awesome idea! Original plot, fitting dialogue, and perfect characterization. I can really see Ginny thinking these things! Love the way you introduced Luna. 9/10 for what promises to be a wonderful story! Report Review
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