you must be kidding me.
seriously? WHO DO YOU THINK YOU'RE DEALING WITH??? I don't remember giving you permission to leave us on a cliffhanger after EVERY CHAPTER! argh it's unbearable! unspeakable! unbelievable! and every other un-word which describes this situation!!
okay, I'm gonna continue a bit calmer now.. it was - DUH - amazing. and I can't think of anything else than polyjuice potion.. probably Alex drank some? to become James? and then real James caught them? urgh I don't know, what's the point of guessing, you will surprise us anyway :D
okay now begins my universal begging to you to update next chapter soon... it must be easy for you, you know what is going to happen! and you know that this everything will have happy unicorn ending. but we - the poor and devastated readers - still have no idea what kind of ending it has! so, well you know what to do : )
waiting for the next chapter
- MaryAuthor's Response: haha I'm sorry! You should know by now I just can't resist my cliffhangers :P But I'm glad you liked it! Next chapter is up so I didn't make you wait too long :P Report Review
Yay to your survival!!! I honestly feared that something bad happened to you, usually you don't make us to wait a month. so I'm glad you don't have an aneurysm of coronary artery and didn't die...
sorry I haven't reviewed the previous chapter, so I'm reviewing both of them now. they're A-M-A-Z-I-N-G !! I should mention that I've never seen anyone such a joykiller as you :D those stupid stupid stupid marauders. what the hell was that list?? but no judging, I know boys have problems with understanding girls (and I mean a problem problems) so I don't blame them for coming up with the list idea.
but I'm a little worried you know. It's nearly the end of the story. in previous fiction there was Holly who would keep the tensed situation and bitch around to make story even more amusing. and what will be here, only the list? cause I don't think there is something bitchy about Celia, in fact I really really like her! but that's okay, I believe in you. I am positively sure you'll make it as wonderful as the last one.
oh and I loved James' POV (as always). it's rather amazing how you - a girl - can give readers a correct thoughts and emotions from boys twisted mind =))
I am SO waiting for the next chapter! I'm dying to know who the hell is the person Lily meets in the forbidden forest. something tells me it's James, though it could be Severus as well, or maybe Dumbledore, or what if it's Barty Crouch!
Anyways, the sooner you update, sooner I'll feel better.
Remarkable, outstanding job! waiting for the next chapter :)))
-MaryAuthor's Response: I know I'm sorry about the long wait :( My life was shambles for a bit with moving around and finishing school and such. But Glad you liked this chapter! And I'm glad you like my James chapters. I'm always slightly worried that my boy-centric chapter won't be convincing but James is so fun to write :) Thanks for reading!! Report Review
hey =) I'm reviewing little late but guess that's okay.
I loved the chapter. and this is getting more and more ridiculous every chapter! how the hell can you come up with such awesome ideas??!!!
Sirius/Scarlet moments are really funny and sweet, I just can't wait to see how Sirius solves this all.
say whatever you think idea was super awesome! wish it was true :D just imagine -- you see your crush and blurt: omg I like you so much! and he says: hey I like you too, let's be together!! dream sweet dream :D
even though that was probably the best snog of my life -- I officially love you for that line :D:D
And if there will be some sensitive-sweet-romantic-dramatic-exciting-touching Jily moments in next chapter I'll ask you to marry me! I know I know you're a girl, I'm a girl, just forget it, we can make it work!!
seriously, I sense some reeeally huge drama is coming. I already know the prologue by heart so please upload soon, pretty please???
jaw-dropping work! waiting for the next chapter :) oh and good luck with finishing school. we readers are best at cheering up aren't we? :D
- MaryAuthor's Response: haha you know sometimes I just don't know how I come up with it. I have a very strange brain, I guess. Haha and I'm glad you liked the snogging line. I was particularly happy with that one. And there will be many many jily moments in the next chapter :) and the next, and the next. yeah. Oh god, if only you knew the drama that was coming... you might not want to marry me anymore :P
Thanks so much for reading and your review :) You all are the reason I keep going! Silly school... Report Review
whoa whoa whoa!
do you actually think you can just say: Iím listening, Alex finally said, a hint of a smile pulling up the corners of his mouth and leave it at that??? Do you??? My father will hear about that!!! ( © Draco )
firstly. I KNEW IT! audience, please allow me remind you fragment from chapter 23. ehem ehem...
"I watched his eyes rove over the statue, a smile tugging at one corner of his mouth."
I am brilliant, am I not? :D:D:D thank you, thank you...
by the way, happy 30 chapter :) please promise you won't stop at that story. pretty please?..
well I said that chapter 29 was my favorite chapter so far. I'VE CHANGED MY MIND! and excuse me if there is lot's of yelling in this review, I'm just thrilled. (oh really??? you are surprised?? damn it I'm 16 years old and I'm reading how Lily hugs James and hides her face into his chest! you merciless writer!)
OK I'll try a bit calmer.
this was simply.fantastic.chapter.
you know what I admire about you most of all? you know when to quit. this is a quality most young writers don't have and it's priceless.
I mean you describe L/J moments like REALLY delicately. and you know when to finish. most authors would've made them snog after their hug, they would've made them fall in love instantly. other writers are afraid of dilemmas and they prefer to do everything simply. you never do that. I love your challenges.
yeah well... Alex...
believe it or not, this guy is making everything much more interesting. and also... I knew James was clueless since like.. forever? but honestly, why can't he understand that Lily did this Celia thing just to make him happy... and talking with Alex is not a good way to pay him back. BUT! I love when things are messed up XD
So good job, you are beyond amazing =) and like a person to person, I beg you please don't let us die from waiting, because our 50% will have their psychics ruined, 20% will commit a suicide and they'll be regarded as mentally ill people. 30% will simply get depressed and as for me, I'll be reading previous chapters over and over and over and over again :)) (I made a pretty good mournful person, what do you say... I knew I should've attended drama class! I knew it!!!)
so well done, waiting for next chapter!
James is so cute.. ok I'm leaving..
so ds;f really I'm leaving
cute .Author's Response: hahaha you know how much i love my cliffhangers :P Although this time I genuinely do feel bad about where I left it... I foresee a lot of unhappiness about that :P Haha and you totally did call that one :)
And thank you :) You know what? It takes MONSTROUS amounts of self control to quit when I do haha. I'm trying really hard to make this relationship between James and Lily seem real and at least in my own experiences, things like this don't just HAPPEN, you know? There's a lot of build up and tense moments and angry moments and blah moments and I wanted all of that to come across so I'm glad it does :) Sidenote: when I read this review earlier while I was at school, I may or may not have gotten a little teary. you're too sweet and this is such a lovely review :)
And don't worry, I wouldn't dream of making you guys wait too long for the next chapter. It's just cruel. so hopefully the next one will be up within the next week or so? Thanks :) Report Review
OK so I just had a heart attack, I was immediately sent to the hospital, doctor said that I have a cardiac angioreticuloendothelioma, that my aortic configuration of heart is destroyed and advised not to read J/L fan fictions especially authored by someone called Laura. but guess what? I'm not obeying!!!
SERIOUSLY, this is my favorite chapter so far!!! this WELL and MIRROR and Albus and Rowena and oh my GOD!
I remember myself saying that I'm depressed for Lily. what are you trying to do with me? where's your humanity??? I don't want to take antidepressant medicines, people will never believe that this is all because of fan fiction and I'll end up in some madhouse. so please don't destroy my future and make that JERK James dump Celia and get with Lily already! pretty please?
and by the way, I was planning to ask you if that pig head hippogriff Alex was going to show again and TA DAAA here is Lily with her cool speech with him. *sniffs* you are adorable!
this whole well-mirror parts were simply breathtaking! you planned everything REALLY wonderful! well done!
so um... next chapter... dying for it!!!
it's gonna be James' POV and Lily's birthday!!! I gotta go calm myself down.
loved the chapter!!
-MaryAuthor's Response: bahahahaha ok I didn't mean to stress you out :P I'm glad you liked this chapter though :) Haha yeah Alex made a reappearance and geuss what? We're still not done with him unfortunately... *hides*. But don't be depressed! Things get better (kind of?) from here :) And if you end up in a madhouse because of my story, I will personally come rescue you haha cheers :) Report Review
Hey there! I guess I'm a little late with new year around :)
But anyways, before I begin with this chapter, I should say that Celia banner was simply AWESOME! I do like her so much!!! is this part of your little project? to make everybody like Celia?.. well, I should mention you're pretty successful at that. I thought you were gonna make Celia just like you made Holly in the other story. I mean nice at the beginning, mean at the ending... but now I doubt that, I think you're planning something different this time (and I totally can't guess what is that because a) I'm not as creative as you are; b) I have SUCH a strong headache right now that it won't allow me to think about it. It hardly allows me to even write this. yup. new year.)
I really liked the chapter. To tell the truth I really wanted to read it from Lily's POV as well and you are pretty fantastic for making this.
I feel depressed for Lily!!! She deserves MORE!! And last two sentences were so spectacular!! I gotta go read York chapter once again...
I'd love to keep writing but I really need to go get some sleep :D:D waiting for the Well in the next chapter.
Happy new year to you!!
- MaryAuthor's Response: ha you know, I originally thought about making Celia like Holly but then I realized it would probably make it much better/frustrating if she were actually nice haha. Anyways, Glad you liked this chapter! (and good luck with the headache... I feel ya there. oy.) I'll have more up soon! Report Review
Hey there!! I was SO shocked when I saw a new chapter!! and not just a new chapter - an AMAZING chapter!!
this is so adorable!! I love it!
you managed it perfectly. I mean Davy is so cute and nice but I also feel extremely sorry for James. he seems so lost and mournful! And I love it that you make Lily this sensible and far-sighted!
Hogsmeade day was wonderful though it left James a little miserable. I'm really looking forward to next chapter. I bet something interesting will happen in holidays xD :)
I just really hope you won't stop writing this because it's MOST DEFINITELY one of my favorite stories :)
- Mary :)Author's Response: THANK YOU!!! You don't know who surprised I was to see a new review! haha :D
Thank you so much for your amazing review. I'm glad that you liked the chapter! I have found that quite a few people, while they don't necessarily hate it, are not big fans of Lily dating other guys. :D From the start I have set out to write the most realistic story possible from the information that we have from J.K. Rowling. Time and time again Lily was described as beautiful and popular..so of course she would have dated before James! :)
I really appreciate the fact that you like my portrayal of Lily! The way people characterize her in their stories, while hilarious due to the crazy things she does, has seemed to me to lack a faithfulness to her descriptions in the books. She's supposed to be smart and wonderful and kind. As such I have always felt that she must have noticed that James, while insufferable at times, was truly a good person.
Yes. I definitely want something huge to happen during the holidays. Because of such I've been a bit stuck, but I'm working through it. :)
I promise I won't give up on my story!! I've been planning this for a long time and now that I've started it, I am determined to finish it. :)
Thanks again for taking time to review!!! It certainly helps to motivate me to burst through the writers block that I am constantly plagued with!!! :D Report Review
Merry Hippogriff!!! new chapter!!!
once again, thank you thank you thank you thank you!
and once again, I love you I love you I love you I love you!
firstly, let me tell you that I feel AWFULLY bad for Celia... I mean, sure I'm a big Lily/James fan and everything, but come on this is soo unbearable to see that your boyfriend MOST CERTAINLY has a feelings for other girl, which ironically looks exactly like you.
but I feel just as bad for Lily too. ugh you are doing it again! making me feel so so so lost and miserable while my favorite characters are too lost.
anyway, it's worth mentioning how much I love Remus. this is why I love your stories! there are four Marauders in your stories, not just two of them (James and Sirius). I don't like it when authors are ignoring the other two. surely it would be awesome if Peter was not in their year at all but since we can't do anything about it... and Remus is one of my favorite characters with painfully cute character and I love it when he has a decent role in the story.
I like that time by time James is awkwardest person in the whole world. I mean, what the hell was that: "What if it were you?" like this whole mess isn't enough for poor girl :D:D
so, looking forward to the next chapter. I still have a doubt somehow that Celia will turn into a bitchy horntail, but right now I feel sorry for her. perhaps following chapters will show :))) that was an excellent chapter by the way. I loved it. waiting for some romantic actions xD
I guess next chapter won't be up before Christmas, so I wish you a merry Christmas. have a wonderful time :)) thanks again
- MaryAuthor's Response: haha thank you! I'm glad you liked this chapter :) And I love all four marauders. James and Sirius are obviously adorable, but I simply love Remus, and well... they wouldn't be the Marauders without Peter I guess haha. I hate when people leave him out, although I admit I don't like including him all that much haha.
Anyways, Thanks for the review :) Merry Christmas! (and the new chapter is up!) Report Review
that was just umm... first impression :))
BUT HOLLY GIANT SQUID I ALMOST FAINTED WHEN THEY KISSED!!
you are. ughh abnormal!!! how on earth can you write this brilliantly??
ok that's it, I'll speak a little adequately now.
Sirius and Remus' quarrel was SO much fun!! ("-oh yeah?? -yeah!" I laughed so hard about it that even my grandpa called from the other room and checked if I was alright :D )
Slughorn is such a slug... I don't know why but I simply don't like him. I know he hadn't done anything, I'm just being evil muahahaha xD
Anna and Scarlet are so hilarious :D:D we all should give them a giant thank you, nothing would've happened without them :D and I like this rebellion of their's. it's not fair that marauders are always the pranksters and others are victims. I just hope there will be more Anna and Scarlet scenes. I think they've become a bit minor characters.
I guess it's done with Severus. I'm madly in love with him and everything but Lily and Severus simply don't belong together... and this time he meant it when called Lily a mudblood. ouch, that hurt..
oh I almost forgot. I have a one more guess. I remembered the first chapter. it was a party, right? where everything went wrong and Lily was mad at James and everything... is that a Lily's birthday party? you don't have to answer though :D I couldn't help it, it's not my fault that Casandra Trelawny was my great great great great great grandmother and that I can predict things :D
I'm sooo looking forward to James' POV! he's gonna be like "us?? kissing?" and I will faint again and again... I love life...
thanks for the coolest funniest saddest and best chapter ever! waiting for next one :)))
-MaryAuthor's Response: haha thank you! I'm glad you like this chapter :) I honestly don't know how I come up with this stuff haha, it just kind of happens.
Bwah I know Scar and Anna haven't been it it much lately but they will be, don't worry! As for the party, I'll just go ahead and tell you that it's NOT Lily's birthday party... the party from the prologue as at the end of the year :) So we've still got a ways to go haha.
Anyways, thanks for reading! Glad you liked it :) Report Review
Holly Hippogriff... A DRAMA! :)
that was REALLY amazing chapter! oh my good I almost fell of my chair when Sirius said he and Lily overheard James' speech!
well Celia is getting a bit annoying but still no judging... I mean seriously, it's totally normal that she doesn't like Lily. but my inner eye is telling me that Celia will turn into a bitchy hippogriff soon.. Casandra was my great great great great grandmother, didn't you know? xD
Sirius is so cute :)) it's odd... Sirius - cute? won't he do anything a bit marauder-ish?
whoah love potion.. I won't make any predicts this time. you will surprise me anyway :))
Truly amazing chapter, congrats :)))
looking forward to the next chapter
I don't think my English sometimes makes any sense, hope you don't mind :))Author's Response: hahaha no I love your reviews! Especially the bitchy hippogriff :P But I'm glad you liked this chapter! Yeah, I was just proof-reading and realized that the Marauders have been kind of tame lately... but don't worry, I'll fix that :) Anyways, glad you liked it! I'll have more up soon! Report Review
Okay. so I wasn't in country, I come back and there are 3 unread chapters and Aaaagh!
Vulnerability - wow!
Houston, we have a problem - wow! wow!
Let it be - wow! wow! wow!!!
Sweet Jesus, that was totally awesome! the week in York, fight and everything, that bitch Petunia, Celia and Sirius...
I sense next chapter is going to be a drama-ish... in my opinion Sirius is going to shake James a little. I think it will be better if he tells James that Lily overheard his speech.
ANYway, I totally understand Celia's position... so I'd love it if she and Lily will achieve some peace after all.
Sirius is... cute :)) I can't think anything more define than cute :))) and by the way last "yeah, see you" broke my heart..
I understand James' position as well... though it's quite unfair. The "whole bloody weekend was a nightmare" was pretty harsh.
well done indeed! not everyone can manage to write such an intriguing story, where is a lot mess but that's exactly what you like in it :))
I simply love it :)) I acknowledged you as a Wonderful writer a long time ago, in case you need me to remind you that... :))
waiting for next chapter :))Author's Response: asdfdgdajk thank you so much! what a nice review :) I'm glad you liked the last couple chapters!!! And you know me, I just love writing drama :P I'll have more up very soon! Thanks for reading!!! Report Review
whoaaah AT LAST!!! I was beginning to find some rope to commit a suicide... I thought something went wrong or.. I don't know, I'm not actually an optimistic person :D
OH MY GOD Lily's dad is probably dying and James has to stay with her and Severus was watching all this and Celia is going mad and and and... wow...
actually, I feel sorry for Celia... of course she annoys me but I think I was too hard on her... it is not a crime to have James as a boyfriend and watching your bf staying a week with other girl (and not just any other girl!) must be sooo offensive...
well, York, here we come... spending a week together in York must be even more interesting from James's POV ! I SOOO can't wait!!
oh and also, it would be really sad if Mr Evans dies... sure we don't know him, but I think he's very nice person, since he's Lily's dad... and it would also devastate our red head so.. yeah..
well before I finish, I should say once again that you are BRILLIANT! please PLEASE try to update as soon as possible. I hope Moving won't cause trouble anymore and don't be afraid of school.. we all are :)))
MaryAuthor's Response: Hurray! I know, I realized once I posted this chapter that it had been AGES since the last one and I felt really bad :( But it's up! and I have internet! And anyways I'm glad you liked it :) I'm kind of glad you feel bad for Celia... most people don't haha, but that would SERIOUSLY suck to have your boyfriend go off with some other girl. Anyways, I hope you like James's POV!! I'll have it up very soon! Thanks for reading! Report Review
Yippi new chapter!!! Again, I come back home after week of holidays and I find this!! Only Colin Firth was happier than me, but that's only when he got his Oscar lol... :D
It was tenderest tender moment and I loved it when James said: Infuriating, sexy, bossy... That was funny :D
Um.. That Alex-Malex boy keeps screwing everybody's life and I'm 100% sure he will reappear. Idiots always screw till the end that's true :)) A good punch from someone would be awesome :) or as we are in magical world, I should have said good Ammito Punchus spell :D
well well, a wee bit drama from you means LOT's of drama, a LOT's of tears and yells and screams and dramatic run aways am I right? is it still necessary to say I can't wait?? and that I am looking forward to Slughorn's party?
you asked about what will happen in Slug Club party. well I won't even think about it :D because you will surprise me anyways and I better save my mind from making lot's of lot's of plans about party :D
I should say once again that you are an amazing writer! and that you must win lot's of stuff for this novel. when a writer can make people jump in their chair while seeing his new chapter, than there is no doubt he/she is simply awesome :))
I hope you enjoy it in halfway across the country. can't wait till next chapter :))
-MaryAuthor's Response: aww thank you so much! Reviews like yours make me so happy :) All I will say about Alex is that he gets his in the end :P so yeah, he'll reappear haha. Ammito Punchus hahaha that's perfect.
And ummm do I have a habit of making things a tad overly dramatic? haha, screaming, crying, running away... yup, those are definitely my specialty :P Anyways, I'll have the next chapter up hopefully before I move! Thanks for reading! Report Review
TA-DA!!! new chapter!! *smiles, laughs, reads, smiles*
Sooo although you acknowledged that you lied, I magnanimously forgive you and even more magnanimously am waiting for tender James/Lily moment in next chapter :D:D
you really can make people anxious :D I mean you can make ME anxious about this Celia girl... she TOTALLY can't be like Lily, I'm sure she is NOT THAT SMART, or that beautiful, or that sweet, or or.. (see the hysterical background??)
well that's only because she was snogging James. I know I shouldn't really be upset, James was famous skirtchaser but it still makes me uncomfortable. and seems that Lily isn't pleased as well. frankly speaking, Celia can be pretty and smart and everything but James will never EVER be able to replace Lily with her.
Alex Winchester is still getting on my nerves. even if he doesn't participate in the story. and Lily should have managed to get over him. I mean HELLO, he's an insufferable evil wicked prat who can't appraisal whatever he's got. just tell me one thing - will Alex reappear in the story? or shall I forget about him and beg Lily to forget him too?
I don't think that Sirius will tell other Marauders about the Well. by the time I'm getting more confused.. I want to figure out what does this Well actually make. and you've been really great in making people intrigued :D:D
so then, I simply hope that you will update next chapter soon :))) and that you'll make me very happy-meal indeed :D:D
-MaryAuthor's Response: hahaha I'm glad I've got you all anxious :) It means I've done well as a writer haha. But seriously, don't get TOO anxious, I don't want you to pass out or anything haha. Anyways, Celia... well, I won't say much :P but you'll find out what her deal is. As for Alex, he will reappear unfortunately. We're no where near being done with him :/ But at least it makes for a good story :P
Anyways, glad you liked it! I'll have more up soon :) Report Review
Whoah.. Well firstly, I absolutely loved the chapter. I'm glad you have internet again :))
sooo obedience potion.. That was something I totally didn't expect. And frankly speaking, I think that was a little scoundrel thing from James to do with Lily. I mean the idea was really funny but cleaning the spot from his shoe was really bitchy thing... I would've die if I were Lily. Ruining the date is bad enough but making her doing the stuff like that was a disaster. well at least for Lily :D
Truce part was something I didn't expect either. I have no idea how long that will last. maybe a month, or week, or just an hour. this is something I can't tell.
Kissing was really thrilling and I think Lily is finally over Alex, but I think (you promised!!) that Alex will show up soon.
About James's POV. I think it's a GREAT idea! I'd love if you do so. At least we can see the view of great prankster :))
And er.. veritaserum comes up in next chapter... soo here comes the fortune-telling days about why would you use a veritaserum in story. that was bad thing to say :D poor readers have to suffer before you update next chapter. and this automatically leads us to my request: please update as soon as possible :)) thanks for writing :)
-MaryAuthor's Response: haha aw thank you! I'm glad you loved the chapter :) And yeah, James was a HUGE jerk for using that potion, but he's kind of supposed to be a jerk haha. And I already have 2 chapters written from James's POV, they might need a bit of work, but I like them so far :) And YES veritaserum in the next chapter (which I submitted to the queue last night so hopefully it'll be up soon).
Thanks so much for reading! Report Review
Hey, first of all thanks for uploading. I just had a wonderful week out of noisy town and new chapter is best ending of weekend =))
Chapter was truly lovely and really intriguing. You're a terrible person, now I have to die before I find out what did James put in Lily's drink! I bet it's nothing good. And also I'm surprised he didn't react horribly about Lily and Amos going together. Maybe whole this Drink Plan is more foreseen for Amos than Lily.
I know it's odd but I still want more Alex Winchester parts in the story. I don't want him to escape easily, somebody has to do something bad with him. I'm evil haha :D:D
And I really don't want Amos Diggory to get hurt. you know, he hasn't done anything wrong but I guess with marauders around it's just impossible in your story.
I'm really sorry about your internet, I hope you'll be able to fix it soon. So perhaps it's pointless to ask you for more up soon, but I just can't quit asking you for more chapters :D so.. er, please? as soon as you can?..
P.S. should I believe this whole 'we're just friends' thing between Scarlet and Sirius? hmm interesting... :))Author's Response: hehe thanks! Glad you liked this chapter! There will DEFINITELY be more Alex, never fear :) As for Scarlet and Sirius, you'll just have to wait and find out :P
But the next chapter's in the queue, so cross your fingers that it'll be up soon! Report Review
there was really too much news in this chapter so I don't even know where to begin. But before I begin, I want you to know it was totally awesome chapter!
Book of Wishes really made me curious. Yet I can't actually understand what kind of wishes it makes come true, but I was thinking. If "I wish he would be happy without me" was crossed off, than maybe the well makes your dream come true only if you mean something good for someone. Blah, I don't know... I better read what comes next, it'll be more interesting :D
about Celia, however, she annoys me too. I understand, she hadn't done anything wrong but yet, I feel there's something wrong with her. maybe she turns out to be really bitchy or something..
Alex is a jerk there is no denying, buy he is really interesting character so I think you'll keep him in the story.
And finally, I'm looking forward to Slug Club party. I sense lot's of interesting things will happen there, so once again I should ask you to try and update next chapter as soon as you can :D
P.S. I loved the chapter!!
P.P.S that's my biggest review ever.. wow :DAuthor's Response: hahaha thank you! Yeah, lots of stuff happened here. I won't say whether your guess about the Well is right or wrong... you'll just have to wait and find out :P And yeah, Celia. well she was actually meant to be a nice person but as I was writing she just kind of ended up being an annoying cow. oh well haha. thanks for reading! i'll have more up soon :) Report Review
as usually, perfect! you keep amazing me with your wonderful imagination!
James' reaction about "second best" was really funny and so was Lily's prank. It was well planned and I felt soo proud for her!
Can't wait till next chapter, please please try to update it soon..
I still wonder what happened after party in the village so I'll probably keep asking you to update new chapters quickly :))) sorry if it annoys you, that's your fault, you write too interestingly :D
MaryAuthor's Response: bahaha I know it's my own fault :P But I'm glad it keeps you interested! And I'm glad you liked this chapter too! I'll have more up soon, don't worry :) Report Review
yay that was super duper awesome!! James is soo cute... not to mention Sirius and Cam! you really should be proud, chapter was truly amazing!Author's Response: Thank you!! I love that you thought it was that good. I astonished myself in pounding this out in like a day :) the next chapter is much harder though. I'm making an attempt at Sirius-POV fluff. As a teenage girl, delving into the mind of a boy is proving...difficult. Especially when describing Cam... Report Review
it was... ADORABLE!
I hate myself for NOT reading it before... I started reading it yesterday and finished it today with my eyes like tennis balls.
you're SO good at writing I can't even express!
I suck at praises but you really got a talent so after I'm finished with my comment, I'm going to find your other stories : )
all OC characters were amazing! I absolutely love Pippa and other girls and absolutely hate Holly which in my opinion, is the best statement that you're talented. only REALLY great writer can make reader hate character this hard.
wish I could rate it as 100/10 but unfortunately 10/10 is everything I can say : ))
MaryAuthor's Response: you're so sweet! Thank you so much, that was a wonderful review :) I'm glad you liked it! I had so much fun writing it, and truth be told, Holly was one of my favorite characters to write, just because she was so darn evil haha. Anyways, I hope you do check out my other story (it's another Lily/James because I just can't resist). Thanks so much for reading! Report Review
holly fantastic, that was really awesome chapter!
you really noticed the main property of boys - they think they can do everything but they're beloved can't. James' position was just the same.
Also the Davy Gudgeon moments were great too. it's fun and more interesting to see new characters in the story.
so chapter was truly lovely, i'd be happy to see next chapter soon. don't stop writing, you're really good at that : )))
MaryAuthor's Response: thank you thank you thank you!!! I've worked so hard in trying to make my story as real as possible, and to hear comments like that just make my day! I'll definitely never ever give up on this story, especially if I keep on getting feedback like yours! Thanks again!!! Report Review
wow wow wow
this is something different! in every Sirius/OC novels there are only Gryffindor members and this Ravenclaw-Gryffindor hatred is really interesting.
Cam seems very interesting sugar queen person, Sirius' POV was awesome too.
please keep writing, you're great at that! include me as one of your constant reader, waiting for next chapter :)Author's Response: oh i just love happyful reviews. I think everything about Gryffindor is a bit overdone, and I personally think Ravenclaw's the best house and where I would want to be, so...yeah. I'm so glad you like it! and I'm very happy you found it different. Report Review
story is just awesome! I haven't noticed it before and I've read it to the end in no time. it would be great if you update new chapter soon, nothing upsets the reader more, than waiting.
keep writing, you're good at that. waiting for next chapter
Mary :)Author's Response: Mary: Thanks so much!!! Reviews like yours make my day, no, my week! I'll try my hardest to update, I really will. I will think of my wonderful readers, and I'll get some motivation ;) Thank you again SO much,
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