This is so heartbreaking and yet, so lovely. Really nice work. :) Report Review
This was sad and lovely. Nicely done. :) Report Review
Oh, my heart. This is so lovely and heartbreaking at the same time. Very nice work.Author's Response: Thank you for this review! It's pleasing to know that some people appreciate my writing; though I am still only a budding author :).
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I really, really enjoyed this story. It perfectly puts into perspective Hermione's character during HBP. Honestly, this is basically how I viewed Hermione in HBP. JKR, though a lovely writer, clearly lost track of some of her characters, Hermione being one of them. JKR tried to turn our lovely heroine into a mere plot device, and I'm so glad that you picked up on that injustice. This is an awesome, awesome story, and if you ever decide to continue it, please let me know. :)Author's Response: Aw, thank you! That's a relief to read. Yeah, I was not pleased with what JKR pulled in the sixth book ... not at all. Thankfully she improved for most of DH. Report Review
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