I loved that awkward moment that Tosh caused because he thought that his sister was pregnant. I can't wait for him to find out that Heidi's actually pregnant. I wonder if he would like it better if his sister was pregnant or Heidi was. Hmmm. Anyway, great story! Update soon!Author's Response: haha i'm pumped to write tosh's reaction. i think it'll be fun. and tosh is kind of selfish so i think he wishes that it would be his sister (: Report Review
I really like ur story so far!
Don't abandon it!Author's Response: Thanks! Anyway, I think instead of abandoning it, I'll just rewrite it, yeah? What do you think? I might do a worse job, though. Thanks for reviewing!
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