This is such a great idea!! I would of never thought of that!! How'd this come to you? It was definately spontaneous and romantic:) I can't even begin to tell you how much I love this one-shot!! 10/10. :)
-Arya

Author's Response: I honestly have no idea how this came to me. I was literally sitting in bed on my laptop on tumblr (as one often does) and I was like, hmm, I want to write another Rose/Scorpius, and this thing was born, lol, i'm so glad you liked it :)

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I love how in the summary, you had written this to avoid AP exams:) Sounds exactly like what I was doing! Anyway, I love this, it's so cute! I love Scorpius' personality and the whole freckles thing:) It was just very cute, sweet and lovely!
-Arya

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First off, I have to compliment you on the name Vick Snakepot. I mean, who thinks of this stuff? Only you haha:) And on the subject of Rose and Scorpius, I think that they will try in forget about and just become really awkward about it, or, they'll keep it all a big secret which would be nice also. They would have their public and private persona's of each other. Anyway, I loved the chapter and can't wait for for! I also just love Rose's personality and her random outbursts of insanity:)
-Arya

Author's Response: Thank you so much! This review was fantastic and I loved every word of it!

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This is absolutely fantastic! I used to be a Dramione shipper, but noticing how cliche everything was...eh. Anyway...I love everything you poked fun at! From the whole spin the bottle thing (gets old) to Hermione swearing...that really bugs me 'cause she's supposed to be a goody-two-shoes. And the "Draco was totally hot" thing and the "Hermione was totally gorgeous" thing...I mean wow...I read so many of those now! Also, I'm so glad you dedicated this to Peeves. It made my day:) I love how people write stuff like this when they haven't read the books and leave out amazing characters...like Peeves...I was so upset when he wasn't in the movies:( Anyway, sorry this is really long, but it totally made my day!
-Arya

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah.. I don't really read to many Dramiones.. It's just a ship I could never really like. I tried to pick out some cliche's that I've noticed through all of Fanfiction as well as the bad dramione ones :p
and Peeves! I know.. I wish he would have been in the movie. The directors seemed to try to throw extra comedy in there when ever they got the chance and he would have been a perfect oppertunity! Thanks so much for reading, and the wonderful review!

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I totally saw that coming haha:) Cliffhanger!! I'm gonna guess it's Miss Hermione Granger:) Love, love, love this story so much, so you should update soon:)
-Arya

Author's Response: Oh... weasleywizardwheezes101,

Do you realize your name is 23 characters long? That's a mouth full. LOL!

Am I too predictable with my cliffhangers? Sorry! Hahaha! XD So far, I do not plan on having one in the next chapter.

Honestly, I wasn't going to put that in there at all, but I thought people would hate me if I didn't give them a hint of Draco's vault. :P

As it turns out, I'm having fun with all of the guesses and I thank you so much for participating in that. Yours is a popular guess and I love it!

Thank you so very much for your review and your kind words. You put a smile on my face today! I needed that!

Thank you!
Dark Whisper



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So...I'll go to the criticism first...the only problem I had with it was sometimes when the story was. It kept switching from past to present tense so it gets confusing at time. As for the praise...I really like this story...I think the idea is pretty good also, it's sort of an arranged marriage but not;) I also loved the way you described Hermione's dress and earrings! (Especially the earrings). It was so vivid, that I could just see them in my mind...so yes:) You need to update again very soon, because this story has major potential! Sorry it was so long...just needed to say all of that:)
-Arya

Author's Response: Oh, Yes I know I keep changing the tenses, but I don't even realise it! I'll get my beta to help me correct them, and thank you!!

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I love the idea you had about "Girl talk" with Lily and Rose...it was just great! I love all the letters...it was something I would never think of, and I loved it! :) Upload soon please!
-Arya

Author's Response: Thanks! The letters have a big role in this story...(;

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Ummm...so basically best, funniest, stupidest and utterly awesome story ever! I especially love how she named one of the random octuplets Chapstick after the headmistress who is now introduced as her idol! :) I love it...It was so cliche and freakin hilarious! You should check out my super short one-shot about Snape that my sister and I wrote one night at one in the morning:) It reminds me loosely of this!
-Arya

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I love this chapter especially just that random spurt about cabbages. It's hilarious! I love Rose in this because she's just so completely out there and just says the most random things sometimes:) Anyway onto your questions...

1. I happen to very much like Willow. I'm beginning to think maybe she's part-veela and is so self-conscious about how beautiful she is, she just hides. And I really like the idea of James and Willow. James seems to be a bit cocky and cocky mixed with shy seems to work. And maybe they've been secretly dating? I don't know...

2. I think maybe Robby said something about Scorpius really liking Rose and Scorpius is just stubborn as a mule and didn't want the world to know so he simply punched him:)

3. Lily will have the baby and she and Robert will live happily ever after. I think the school and her parents should find out by Robert. Robert will stand up in front of the school during dinner or something and say that he's tired of hiding, he loves Lily and their baby.

4. For this question I seriously have no idea...maybe he turned it into a cabbage? ;)

So anyway...sorry this was so long, but it was necessary:) So pleaaassseee upload more soon, because I pretty much love this story and wish it was mine:)
-Arya

Author's Response: Thanks for the AMAZING review! And no, I just happen to LOVE long reviews:D thanks so much!

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This was really sad but really well written...I really like narratives with only snippets of dialogue in them:) But seriously, this was really sad...I can't even imagine how Scorpius must have felt! Anyway, keep writing 'cause you're pretty good:)
-Arya

Author's Response: :D Thank you so much! I've been really blocked recently, so I haven't written really anything since this one. I'm so glad that you liked it though!

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Okay so, it's a great start and I can totally see this going places:) The only issue I have with it is capitalization. I'm just really OCD when it comes to grammar, so sorry:( It's just names and the pronoun "I" should be capitalized, but otherwise, I love your look on both Scorpius and Rose. They've always been two of my favorite characters:) Keep on writing!
-Arya

Author's Response: oh thanks, i know i'm not the best on grammar. I started to write stories to improve it but failed quite miserably! Scorpius and rose are my fav paring, half my stories are about them!

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Okay...great chapter! And personally I love the name Christine or Kristine, either way...It's Greek and seems to fit perfectly for Mazie. Mazie Christine Malfoy. So anyway, there's my two-sense of the whole thing...can't wait for more chapters:)
-Arya

Author's Response: Thanks! Ooo Mazie Christine Malfoy... I like it! Well, you might see that name in later chapters(; Thanks for the review!

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I love it, it completely makes sense in a weird, random way:)

Author's Response: Awesome! I'm glad it gave you random pleasure!

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This is really cute:) I love the way you put them together and the whole conversation between the two:) It's so great! You're an awesome writer so keep it up:)
-Arya

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The only thing I have to nag about is just the dialogue. Try seperating from who's talking 'cause it gets confusing on who's talking, but otherwise, I love this story it seems to be going places:)
-Arya

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! And, I'll try to improve; I don't have time to check it over, since I'm busy with hwk but half-term's coming so I have more time! :)

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I really love this story so far. It captures basically everything that me and my best friend are like. We've been inseparable since we were five too, and he's still my best bud:) So, this is the best Lily/Scamander Twin fic that I've read so far:) It's amazing, so keep writing:) 10/10
-Arya

Author's Response: I'm really trying to capture a 'real' dynamic; thanks for letting me know it's working. ;)
I'm glad that you like the story, and would love your feedback on the next chapters!
The next chapter will be posted mid-October.
~Always

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It's a really good start! So, keep updating:) This should be a pretty good story! And your writing really captures the moment! I can tell this is going to be pretty good:)
-Arya

Author's Response: Thank you! I have the chapters ready its just a matter of waiting around for validation for each one. Chap 2 is up, 3 is waiting

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I really like this idea! You know what they say, "It's always best when you marry your best friend." :) So, this is a really good start and I love how it's James' Worst Memory. Snape and Lily are amazing:)
-Arya

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Okay, so this is like my favorite out-there story ever! This is the third time I've read it. and realized I haven't left one little review, which is pathetic! Anyway, I absolutely love everything about this story. I love Harry's personality and having to constantly tell Draco what to do:) It's amazing!
-Arya:)

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I'm so glad you got this chapter out! It's wonderful, even if it is filler:) My only part of constructive criticism I could give is to make Draco more like himself at some point so he doesn't seem like and angel all the time...but other than that, I absolutely love this story, and the title is great:)
-Arya

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It's a really good start to the story, I can see where you might be going from here. So keep writing, I can't wait for more chapters:)
-Arya

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This is probably one of the cutest one-shots ever. You never see one's like this. They are all about Hermione and Draco when they're older, (Me included) so I loved this:) It seems so Hermione and Draco-ish. Draco coming up with a way to taunt her and Hermione coming back with something incredibly clever. So I loved this, awesome job!:)
-Arya

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So I've had this story on my favorites for a long time and I just read again and realized I didn't review this at all, so now I feel bad and will do it:) First off, I love Draco's OOC-ness. It's awesome, it totally seems like something Draco would do. Stand up in front of the entire Great Hall and make an announcement. It's perfect. Keep writing!
-Arya:)

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So, like I've said in past reviews, you are like my favorite-ist author on here! And this story shows how you can make something as simple as a one-shot into something beautiful:) That's pure talent! And, I love the story anyway, it was just so cute the way both Hermione and Draco find the most simple things amazing! So great job!
-Arya:)

Author's Response: aw thanks ^_^!!! i thought this one-shot was so cute and i loved writing it. sometimes its good to do a light-hearted fic every now and again :)

so glad that you liked it!!
-WP

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So, I basically love Draco. I love how it shows the sensitive side to him. I t seems like he was hardened by all the stuff going on in his family life, but I like the sincereness in this chapter. So great job! Keep the chapters comin'!
-Arya:)

Author's Response: Thank you xx

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