I really like this story so far however, one thing I will say is you need to double check and check again on typos. Apart from that I'm really enjoying the read. Keep up the good work! :DAuthor's Response: I'm glad you like it, and I know...those typos drive me crazy! I'm going to go on a typo hunt now,
thanks for the feedback as well!
Personally, I think the ending works really well. Like you said having someone there that would've been at both weddings is so effective. I love the way that James and Harry were both feeling similar things about their wives. I just love it. I'm now going to have a read through your other fanfics on here. Based on this You're a really good writer. Keep up the good work :DAuthor's Response: Aw thank you so much. That's a good ending to a good day! And I'm glad you think so. :)
And I always get the feeling that they would both feel the same about their respective wives.
Aww thank you, hope you like them :) and thank you for making my day :) Report Review
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