My gosh that was fantastic! Usually on here you only find a story through Lily's eyes when it comes to Halloween 1981. You said in your A/N to tell you what to improve on, but really I think it's just perfect as is.
:DAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for the review! Yeah, I thought a James P.O.V would be intresting, he seems such a deep, brave charator to explore :)
Woah.you think its perect!?! Thats a huge compliment, although I'm sure there is lots I could do to bring it up to scratch ;)
Really please you enjoyed it, thanks again for the review and your kind words =) Report Review
My gosh it's beautiful! Especially with the forshadowing at the end! Completely amazing!
10/10Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm really pleased you liked it! Lily and James are my favourite pairing so I might write more one shots for them soon. Thanks again.
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LOL OMG. sorry but that was HILARIOUS! i totally figured it would be the stereotypical proposal story, but its SO NOT!
i love it! great job!! Report Review
oh i simply love it! :) its hilarious/cute/romantic all in one! definately my thing!
10/10Author's Response: haha all my stories are like that! At least I try to make them like that. thanks for the wonderful review :) Report Review
Oh. My. God! This is totally perfect! I absolutely love it!!! You should totally write a sequel...like about when James meets Lily in the afterlife or something.
You're amazing! This story is amazing!
10/10 and I just favorited it!Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate the compliment and the enthusiasm! I'll definitely consider a sequel. Trick is sitting down and writing it! Thank you so much! Report Review
ahaa this is super cute! i love the French/slightly bitchy Hermione!! Well done!
:)Author's Response: merci, me to, its everything she didnt like about Fleur, which made me lol Report Review
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