I am enjoying your story. It seems to be well thought out. However, the spelling errors and run on sentences are driving me crazy. It is scar meaning a mark left after an injury. Scare is to be frightened. I am giving the story a rating of 8 due to to grammar problems.

Author's Response: Thanks for pointing that out I'll go fix it. And I will pay more attention to the editing in the next chapter. Thank you for reviewing.

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Thoroughly enjoying your story. Please keep up the great work.

Author's Response: Thank you. Next chapter awaiting validation.

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Thoroughly enjoying your stories. Nice to find someone still writing about Potterworld.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoy them! There are plenty of people on this site still writing. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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Enjoyed the story. Well thought out. Grammar and typos should be corrected though.

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Enjoying story. So sorry for your loss.

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Thank you. I have thoroughly enjoyed your story. Your two stories are the best that I have read and I have read a lot.
I hate to see it end, but we all know that everything works out for the characters. It was nice to see them develop and mature in a more normal set of circumstances. Again, Thank you for the effort and all of the time it took.

Author's Response: thestral517,

Thank you for your review. I'm glad you've enjoyed the story ... both of them.

Writing and posting these two stories has taken three years. I don't think most readers realize how much time it takes. Thank you for acknowledging that. I do appreciate it.

I am not a professional author ... indeed, this is only a hobby for me. I am a working professional and this is something I have managed to do in my spare time ... something I don't have nearly enough of these days.

Thanks again for reading and for leaving me your thoughts so regularly.

Mrs_Granger

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This chapter and the storm are two of the best that I have ever read to discuss the nature of a relationship. And Arthur Weasley telling Harry and Ginny to expect the same amount of time to repair the relationship as it took to reach the bottom is fabulous. Even though these chapters are in the middle of the story (just read chapter 72), they are my favorites because Harry and Ginny found out that they have to work at the relationship as much as they have to work at their careers. More people would do well to realize this fact. The mystery is wonderful, but there something extra special about these chapters.

Author's Response: Dear thestral517,

Thank you for your review.

I really enjoyed reading your thoughts on these two chapters. It sounds like the lessons Harry and Ginny are learning here are things you know from experience. I wanted to build in this bit of realism into the story and to give the characters the firmer foundation for developing the solid, comfortable relationship that they seem to have by the HP7 Epilogue.

Those sorts of relationships generally come from hard work, and often there is something in the couple's past, sometimes and event or an experience, which results in that level of commitment to their relationship. One of my ideas for this novel was to tell the story of what happened to them, what the event was which generated that level of commitment from them. I'm glad you felt it was a worthwhile story to tell too.

Thank you again for writing and sharing your thoughts.

Mrs_Granger

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Again, another wonderful chapter. The characters have matured so much through out the story. It is a pleasure to read.

Author's Response: Dear thestral517,

Thank you for your review. I'm glad you've enjoyed the chapter and the way I envisioned that Harry and company would develop as they enter and begin to take their places as adults in the wizarding world.

Until next time ...

Mrs_Granger


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It is like waiting for HP7 to come out. I am checking everyday to see if the new chapter has been listed. I have throughly enjoyed this story. This chapter was no exception. Thank you for all of your work and for sharing it with the rest of us.

Author's Response: Dear thestral517,

I'm sorry about the wait. If I would write these last few chapters faster and have them come out in a way I was happy with, I would.

Thank you for your review. I do appreciate it.

Mrs_Granger

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Another wonderful chapter in the saga. I am sorry to see the story coming to an end, but am looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: thestral517,

Thank you for your review. It's been a long haul, but all good things come to an end. I'm glad you've enjoyed it.

I'll be working on the final chapters this weekend. I hope to have the next one ready soon. I hope you will like it.

Mrs_Granger

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Thoroughly enjoyed the story.

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Enjoying the story.
On Ginny's Chocolate Frog card it says that she is the brother of Ron Wesley, may want to change that to sister.

Author's Response: Yeah, I've got a bunch of fixes to make. At the end I'll go through and do another full edit. But thanks for the tip!

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Have throughly enjoyed reading your story. Awaiting next installment.

Author's Response: Thank you. And you're waiting, waiting, waiting.

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Thank you. Enjoyed it immensely.

Author's Response: You are most welcome - I'm very glad you enjoyed it!

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I am enjoying your stories. I stayed up entirely too late last night reading them. I am adding your collection to my favorites.

Author's Response: Thanks so much - sorry you missed some sleep but I consider it a lovely compliment that you couldn't stop reading!

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Enjoyed it. Now on to read the rest of your stories.

Thanks

Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying the Crusadiverse and I hope to hear from you again soon.

Eldy

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Once again, enjoyed the chapter. Eagerly awaiting next.

Author's Response: thestral517,

Thank you very much for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Mrs_Granger

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Thank you for the wonderful story. When I found your stories, it was like Book 8 & 9 had been released. I couldn't do anything else until I finished reading. Anxiously awaiting next chapter.

Author's Response: thestral517,

Thank you for your review. I'm glad you enjoyed my stories so much when you found them. I hope you continue to.

Mrs_Granger

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The Summer After the War -- simply the best--
well presented, thought out and true to canon.

Thanks for filling in some of the 19 year gap.

Author's Response: thestral517,

Thank you for your kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Thank you too for leaving a review. It's what keeps us authors going!

Mrs_Granger

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