I love this, it's amazing! :) I love it when they find out that James and Lily and Harry are still alive, and I think it's a great ending :) 11/10Author's Response: Thanks so much. Yes, it's happy here, sort of, but the adults all know that there is something coming that they don't want to be part of.
The next story is called "Woven" and I'm in the process of posting it here on HPFF. I hope you enjoy it as well.
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Wow. That was a really awesome fanfic :) I loved it and the ending was really cute! 11/10 Report Review
Aawww this is amazing! I can't wait till the next chapter :DAuthor's Response: oh good! you found the sequel. hehe. next chapter should be up soon--it's in the queue :P but soon it shall be here! so keep an eye out for it (;
thanks for continuing to read! Report Review
Aaw the ending is so cute :) I loved this fanfic; it was amazing. Your ideas are really good :DAuthor's Response: oh yay! thank you :D i'm glad you liked it! Report Review
I thought this was one of the best fanfics I've ever read! I loved the idea of the Hogwarts Confessional, and now I really wanna know what the Marauders planned for History of Magic lol. It was awesome :) 11/10Author's Response: awww thank you so much!! I'm glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reading :) Report Review
Oh my gosh, I loved this fanfic it was amazing! I actually thought the fake ending was the real one, and I was like 'NO!' But I thought it was amazing, and really cute :) I loved it Report Review
Wow, that's really good, I can't wait for the next few chapters :) Report Review
That's cool, but I really thought she was staring at Rochelle. But that was funny :) Report Review
That's really good :) I loved it, but at one point you changed from 1st person to 3rd person. 11/10 :) Report Review
I love this :) It's amazing, seriously. Really well written and everything. I Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) Report Review
That's cute :) I love it. Report Review
I thought that was well good :) I liked it a lot Report Review
That is so cool! And by the way, it just occured to me, is that Tonks? Anyway, this is amazing Report Review
W. O. W. That was amazing! I'm serious! I loved it! Carry on writing Author's Response: Thanks so much!! x Report Review
I love the way he has no idea what a telephone is (I'm guessing)! Very good :)Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! Report Review
This is good! It's quite funny, the way she has to live with him, even though she doesn't like him much. T'is good! :)Author's Response: Thank you so much!! It's lovely to get some new reviews. Report Review
That was... cute. I like that a lot. But - don't worry, I'm a total grammar freak, I critisise everyone about that - you spelt a couple of things wrong and stuff. But overall, I loved it Report Review
I liked that :) that was really good!Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
That was really good well done :) I really loved the special place and the gift Severus gave her, and the way it said 'goodbye' at the end, for a moment I wondered if he comitted suicide, and then I remembered he was in the Harry Potter books! I fail, I know. Anyway, that was amazing :DAuthor's Response: Thanks! It took me a while to think of James' place, I wanted something different, and beautiful, and... sort of spontaneous to have as a wedding proposal spot for James and Lily... and I thought his secret place fit the bill! I might even snag it for another story?? Who knows ;)
Hahaha, you don't FAIL, I guess he COULD have been committing suicide, but I just meant it as an official end to their friendship... oops!
Thanks again for the review! And like I said in the last review thing, I am SO sorry for not replying >.< I'm so dummy sometimes!
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This is good, and you should totally add to it. Although I see you've already added to it... anyway, I really like it :)Author's Response: haha thanks :) This is actually the FIRST fanfic that I have ACTUALLY completed! I KNOW, I'm proud of myself too! hehehe!!! Thank you so very much for the review!!!
AND I'm sorry for not replying to this review for. like half a month, I didn't realize that I had any new reviews! GAH boo me :)
~ Hayleekins! Report Review
That's good. I tried it backwards, and it really does work both ways! Well done, I could never do that. That's really good, you know :)Author's Response: Thanks so much! (: I'm glad you liked it, it took a while to get it done. xD
-Jasmine Report Review
OKAY OKAY OKAY. I will never be able to write another fanfic again. You have made mine sound TOTALLY PATHETIC. This was just so GOOD! I totally loved it. 1,000,000,000,000,000,000/10. :DDAuthor's Response: No, no, no! Just because you think someone is better doesn't mean you should stop lol. While I thank you loads for how much you enjoy the story, I am positive that you have as much potential as I do to write a story. I literally spent ages on this: maybe 5 years, so it's really about not giving up (or stopping) the writing process.
Thank you SO SO much for the review, I am so glad you enjoyed the story so much. Report Review
WOW! Amazing! I'm so glad you actually wrote an epilogue :) This is one of the best fanfics ever! 11/10Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm just as surprised as you are about that epilogue lol. I am actually really proud that I even did it, because I was so out of the writing mood when I did it. I am very glad you liked it though. Thanks sooo much for the review! Report Review
Aaw this is so good! :) Love it.Author's Response: Thank you, thank you! Report Review
In answer to your note at the bottom - I will when you comment, as I'm interested to see what you say. I only started reading this today, and as it was so interesting I continued reading it! And I don't normally read things that are work in progress, because I always feel that when the next chapter comes out, you've forgotten what happened before, you know what I mean? Anyway, you're a really amazing writer - well done! :)Author's Response: WIP?? The status is WIP! It's definitely a complete story lol. I've taken a while to respond to this, so I doubt you're going to bother to reply now but it's the thought that counts :).
I don't read WIP stories either. AND thanks again for the reviews, you've given me so many lol. Report Review
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