This is absolutely amazing. Your language is beautiful and your characters are flawlessly flawed and real. Well done!Author's Response: thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for the review. :) Report Review
Aww, this was so so sweet! I love how kind Mrs. P is, and I think you really captured how a childhood devoid of love would make Sirius completely oblivious to his feelings and also completely out of his comfort zone- he really has no preparation for this. Lovely! :)Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for the review!
Yes, it was kinda sweet, wasn't it? I thought it was an important chapter to show (in part because the next chapter, which is my personal favourite, wouldn't make much sense without it) because, as you said, poor Sirius was completlely out of his comfort zone with this and had no idea what was happening to him or how to deal with it. Very pleased you liked it. :)
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