{reviewid: 2586226, reviewer: 'Ravenclawgirly07'}
8th September 2011:
First review! I think. Well I hope it is otherwise I'll look like a loser. Anyways I think your story plot is great and I can't wait to see what happens
Author's Response: Yeah, since it was validated an hour or so, you are the first reviewer ever. In my life :D
So thank you^^
By now I've written the second chapter and part of the third as well - so stay tuned and check it out for updates ;)
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{reviewid: 2586218, reviewer: 'Ravenclawgirly07'}
8th September 2011:
I really love your story!!! it's so cute and im curious about characters relationships. Like evander. Does he like her or something? That's the impression I got? Also inyour earlier chapters I got the impression that James friends new he liked her in the carriage. Am I right?
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you like it! :)
Very good guesses, but I'm not going to give anything away. Both are possible - but then again, maybe something happened to Evander that made him want to be kinder to Aurelia? And maybe James wanted her alone in the carriage for a different reason completely?
...Mystery...
Thanks so much for taking the time to review!
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{reviewid: 2584751, reviewer: 'Ravenclawgirly07'}
5th September 2011:
I really love your story!!! Normally I'm not a big fan of the muggle narrated stories, but you make it work and She is sooofunny! Anyways I think it's adorable how James likes her so much. And how he's like slightly protective of her too. I think I'll just steal him right out if your story.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you!!! I'm glad that you gave the story a chance despite not being a fan of muggle narrated stories! And liked it! I really appreciate that.
Spencer is my baby so it's always nice to hear when people say that they think she's funny. And as for James; he's mine but I suppose we can share :D
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{reviewid: 2578369, reviewer: 'Ravenclawgirly07'}
26th August 2011:
Sorry I didn't review last chapter. I'm actually not sure why I didn't, maybe I forgot. Anyways, I think the while story idea is cute and I can't wait til the story gets moving. It is a little slow right now but I'm guessing you just needed to establish stuff. Keep writing! I plan on staying with this one all the way
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{reviewid: 2577167, reviewer: 'Ravenclawgirly07'}
24th August 2011:
Even though this story is random like you said and not realistic it's very funny. And truthfully I could totally see it happening. I just want to see te wedding and what happens! And as much as I'm addicted to some of your other stories, I wouldn't mind a spree .hint *cough* hint
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{reviewid: 2573688, reviewer: 'Ravenclawgirly07'}
19th August 2011:
You have no idea how deprived I've been for a very long time because you haven't updated this story!! I started jumping up and down when I realized you actually updated it yay! Yay for james and Artemis! He totally still loves her I mean come on why else would he volunteer himself to kiss her under the mistletoe!!!
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{reviewid: 2571969, reviewer: 'Ravenclawgirly07'}
15th August 2011:
Wow!!! I LOVE your story. Your character personalities are great and rAine is super funny! Also, I've never read anything like this and it's great that you were so creative to even think of the plot. Keep writing!!! I plan to follow your story all the way
Author's Response: Thanks so much! It's funny because I was just thinking one day "so what if the sorting hat broke or something? what would they do?" and then i created this monster and yeah. Thanks so much for your review! It means a lot :)
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{reviewid: 2567095, reviewer: 'Ravenclawgirly07'}
10th August 2011:
Happy birthday! You will have to let me know how that special cake your mom insisted on was! Anyways I think my favorite part was when Fred was looking out for Heidi during the fight. Too adorable!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! And she actually decided against getting the special cake because she knew that I just wanted duncan hines so she just bought that and it was delicious.
And I loved that part. Freddie can be a sweetheart if he wants to be (:
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{reviewid: 2562890, reviewer: 'Ravenclawgirly07'}
6th August 2011:
I love papa Zimmerman! Anyways I love the chapter although it was sorta short :/ but, I kind of like masons character although he was more laid back than I imagined. I guess I was just disappointed because there wasn't any Fred. And you know how much I love him! Love you care bear update fast :)
Author's Response: HEYOO!
the next chapter is a lot longer so don't you worry your pretty little head! and mason is awesome, which is why he's so laid back. there will be freddy in the next chappie i promise! it's in the queue already so i deserve some cheesecake or something for being a fast updater!
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{reviewid: 2558551, reviewer: 'Ravenclawgirly07'}
1st August 2011:
So here I am :) after I saw you not to long ago I realized that reading your new story has been long overdue! I really really really love it, and if you decide to just stop this one like you did with the other story that I liked I will be furious with you. I LOVE FRED! And his point of views are so funny. Lol I also loved the turnip awareness month, I almost fell out of my chair when I was reading that! Anyways, I really love your story and I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: hey hey hey! yeah, like four months over due! what took you so long?! (:
i'm glad you liked it! now i can ask your advice over different things when i need it! i definitely won't ever be abandoning this one. i love it way too much.
fred is pretty much a boss. like legit.
turnip awareness month. join the cause.
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{reviewid: 2556716, reviewer: 'Ravenclawgirly07'}
29th July 2011:
Wow! First, I would like to apologize for this being my first review. I liked your story so much that I couldn't bear a couple seconds to type anything. Second, I almost spazzed when I heard tegans mothers name because I have the same name! Which normally isn't that special, but how many eleni's are there really? So anyways great story!
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{reviewid: 2542547, reviewer: 'Ravenclawgirly07'}
5th July 2011:
Ah I can't believe you left it off there! I really liked the Noah action but there wasn't quite enough James in the chapter for me. Oh! And I loved the albus part I think talking to the little brother is cute
Author's Response: They'll be an entire chapter of James up next, so I hope that satisfies your James fill! I adore Albus, I'm glad you like him :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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{reviewid: 2542542, reviewer: 'Ravenclawgirly07'}
5th July 2011:
I love those two together! It's so so sweet
Author's Response: :) Thanks so much for the review. We'll try to put up the chapters faster. :D
~Shooka
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{reviewid: 2542536, reviewer: 'Ravenclawgirly07'}
5th July 2011:
That was such an awesome chapter! Aw jamsie is finally figuring out that he likes Victoria! Yes! :)
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{reviewid: 2538519, reviewer: 'Ravenclawgirly07'}
26th June 2011:
Oh my gosh! How could you leave it like that??? Please update soon, I love it!
Author's Response: hey ive been having trouble posting here within the rules you can find me at ditsfics.livejournal
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{reviewid: 2538098, reviewer: 'Ravenclawgirly07'}
25th June 2011:
Omg I love al and ari! And I forgot to say earlier, when al was asking for advice and then called the girl Ariadne, that was jut too cute. I also really like how her older sister is trying to get then together and how albus is so obviously jealous of James. It was jut so cute!!! And I really hope that you update soon!
Author's Response: OMG I LOVE THEM AS WELL! YAY!! -huggles- and awww i know. they are so adorable and i just think ari's mad for not seeing it *insert heart here* haha, thank you!
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{reviewid: 2538095, reviewer: 'Ravenclawgirly07'}
25th June 2011:
I think k like ari for the most part. Maybe she's being a little too hard on al?
Author's Response: i do as welll ;) and yes, she's been VERY hard on Al, but because she's little witch. But i hope they sort each other out B)
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{reviewid: 2538094, reviewer: 'Ravenclawgirly07'}
25th June 2011:
This sounds so good! I can't wait to see what thy get themselves into!!
Author's Response: ohmygod yay! Im glad its good at the beggining! thanks!
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{reviewid: 2538088, reviewer: 'Ravenclawgirly07'}
25th June 2011:
You did a great job with the game! It was suspenseful enough but next chapter Im hopin for more James and kier action. Pretty please ?
Author's Response: Ahhh just for you! Thanks for reviewing :)
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{reviewid: 2537946, reviewer: 'Ravenclawgirly07'}
24th June 2011:
I absolutely love the story plot! New chapter soon?
Author's Response: I'm actually completely re-writing it...again!! haha, but hopefully I'll stick to one idea long enough to get past 2 chapters!
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{reviewid: 2537724, reviewer: 'Ravenclawgirly07'}
24th June 2011:
Oh my gosh!!! That quidditch math was so funny! I'm still rooting for some action from James though ;)
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! And patience young one, it will come!
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{reviewid: 2537538, reviewer: 'Ravenclawgirly07'}
23rd June 2011:
Okay I honestly just saw this. The captains name is oak wood? As in like and oak tree which is made of wood. Hahahah oh that is funny. Um... Yeah I loved the scene at the very end the humor is great
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{reviewid: 2537534, reviewer: 'Ravenclawgirly07'}
23rd June 2011:
I love when the unicorns explode. It's what keeps me reading. Only kidding bre keeps me reading
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{reviewid: 2537531, reviewer: 'Ravenclawgirly07'}
23rd June 2011:
I WANT A COOKIE! but actually I was planning on reviewing anyways, promise! I love your sense of humor, I laughed the whole way through although it may have been more of a chuckle I'm not sure
Author's Response: nono, feel free to have a cookie ^_^ thank yousss.
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{reviewid: 2537525, reviewer: 'Ravenclawgirly07'}
23rd June 2011:
I gotta say, you surprised me! I kinda expected em to randomly try out for the team
Author's Response: Hehe, no, I stick by my guns, she's awful at quidditch. Awful. Although I am glad I surprised you.. muhahaha more to come in the way of surprises I feel, just for fun! Alex (:
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