this is amazing. i wanted her to pick al in the beginning then perry then when he was with marilyn i wanted her back with al. i wish MY life was a fairytale. -.- :L good work. i love it. can't wait till the epilogue. :)

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm glad that you enjoyed this story, and that you like Al! I would like a fairytale life too ;) but reality will have to do :D Thank you again, I hope you enjoy the epilogue!

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:D two chapters! but i'm kinda lost; didn't voldy die. o.O

Author's Response: angelaaa,

Yes. Voldemort died. But then he came back to life (?!) as an evil possessed skeleton with red eyes. I think I was on a sugar high when I wrote the majority of this story.

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YAYYY!! roomies is ooouuutt!! hehe, i like this story already! mehe post the next chapter of this and love godesses and EwB and rewrite raine to snow. :D

i'm so demanding. >:D great story! keep it up!

Author's Response: Haha I'm glad you enjoyed it! The next chapter is already in the queue and I'm in the middle of the third chapter currently! Then I'll probably do Enemies with Benefits, then the rewrite of Raine to Snow :D

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ADELAIDE AND AL! :D wonderful story. epliogue. it's summer vacation!

Author's Response: Gosh thank you! I know, I know, but I haven't any ideas...:(

INSPIRATION COME TO ME!

~P.O.P

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epp! update pretty please. :D your story so far is very interesting and i would love to read more. :)

keep up the good work!

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omg NOOO!! you can't just leave it like this! i won't let you! happy endings. write next chapter. >:D

so beautiful. *wipes tear.* i was like NO CALL HER NAME YOU IDIOT! it was so sad. :( that's why you should continue it. ;D

Author's Response: angelaaa,

Well, I did, sweetie (is laughing at you). I figured some of my stories can't have happy endings --it's not realistic for every story to have one.
I kind of was too, actually. Thank you! :D

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eppp! put the next chappy up. :D this was funny, you should also update love godesses .. yeah. :D

Author's Response: i'm glad that you liked it! and i will!

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ASDFGHJKL. i winced when i read her arm was blue and turned a a strange angle. :L ^^ yay! this chapter is dedicated to me. i feel so special. this chapter was still short but it was good. OMG 6 CHAPTERS LEFT!? I'M EXCITED!!

keep up the good work! 10/10

Author's Response: angelaaa,

Eek, I winced when I wrote it. I'm glad you liked it though! :)

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why are all your chapters so shirt. :(

Author's Response: angelaaa,

i was wondering that too.

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SEQUEL
:D pretty please with a cookie on top ?

Author's Response: haha, I'm not quite sure what I would put in a sequel for this, but if I ever come up with something, you'll be one of the first to know! Thanks for the review!

Annie

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right a second part but in james' pv ? :D

Author's Response: i'm on it.
...actually, that's a really good idea...

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woah that was really good. you don't have to write more but i suggest you do. :)

10/10 KEEP IT UP !

Author's Response: I will, actually. I thought it was better to extend it a bit and show it from everyone's perspective. thanks for reviewing! -Triss *^_^*

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it was sad yet beautful i loved it. write a sequal pleeaaase?you're a really good writer. :D

10/10

Author's Response: Thank you! :) I might turn it into a short story. I'm writing a continuation right now. It's great people like it. Don't really know how long it will be though. But check in in a few days then it might be validated

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ASDFGHJKL A CLIFFY !?!?!?!?! >

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LIKE LIKE LIKE ^^
i likde the end 'tis one thing to be tempted, another to fall.' it's a good quote. i also loved the story, not much people write about andromeda and tonks, and i was happy when i saw one with a good summary !

10/10 :D

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! There really isnt much about Andromeda and Ted, and its a really good story waiting to be told. I'm happy you enjoyed my story :D

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awesomeawesomeawesomeawesome.
HERE'S A COOKIE ! :B

this was AWESOME i loooveee you .. in a totally non creepy way because that would just be .. creepy.

i laughed at most of it and was like OMG whehn they snogged again.

10/10 !

Author's Response: It's cool. I like creepy people. They are entertaining. (:

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LOL this was good and funny and awesome and YOU'RE awesome.
my favourite quote would be ' .. and i could have sworn that i felt something pressing against my arse.' LOL that was funny !

good work !

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hey there babe.
do you want me to be your beta reader ?
send me the things to angelaaa.hpff@hotmail[dot]com

btw good work but chyeahh i'm on the phone with you so that works.
kthanksbye.

Author's Response: :L sure thing aye, i'll add you :) thanks hun.

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I LOVE THIS STORY !!
please pretty please with cyber cookies on top write a sequel !!

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good story. (Y)
just wondering is it a freddie/oc or al/oc or something ... ?

Author's Response: Wait and see. to be honest i dont know myself entirely, but i'm leaning towards Freddie simply because it is less cliche. The second chapter is in the queue, and the third is about to be submitted so if you enjoyed it please do, r&r

Xxx MissMademoiselle

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! i LOVE it !!!

i like the last part when petunia says 'that's great Lily'

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NO CLIFFFYYY NO !!

DAMN YOU FHDSIUJHIJDNFJKDFNJKDFNCJKDFSNCJKDNCKJS


UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE !

Author's Response: BAH I'M SO I'M SORRY!

*runs to hide behind floral blankie*

I'll update soon! Very soon! Like, as soon as possibel soon!

PLEASE DON'T KILL ME!! I WILL GIVE YOU A MILLION CHOC CHIP COOKIES IF YOU DON'T!

And I have many choc chip cookies in store, having promised some to quiet a few people.

I'm not mental, I promise!

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yay a new story ! and i'm the 1st reviewer WHE.

i like the plot because james is portrayed a bit differently rather then an arrogant smoking hot guy he is scrawny and shy.

keep updating and writing, good work !

Author's Response: Thank you! I was hoping people would like my version of James(: I think the dorky persona fits him, haha. Thanks for reviewing!!

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who's the girl in the banner/chapter image ?

Author's Response: angelaaa,

Um, her name is Rachel Hurd-Wood. Yeah, she's awesome. :D

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i was just wandering, who's the girl that's lily evans ?

(for the character image)

thanks. :)

Author's Response: her name is Rachel Hurd-Wood :)

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