Is this the first review I've left for this story? Really? Shame on me. What a wonderful story. Quite amazing, honestly. Love Rose. Love how passionate she is about painting. Love how much she wants to create stuff and just live her dream. Scorpius...I did like him. I like the part where he gets slapped, that's good fun. Blargh. Rose should just tromp off to his rental and smack him again and then shove his stupid scroll where the sun don't shine. Was that violent? That was violent. Well, I'm proud of her for making him suffer because lying like that is a real son of cookie move. CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER. I want honesty! Go honesty! I want tear-jerking, emotional, heart-wrenching scenes of angst! Also, I kind of want to meet Danielle. I think she'll appear before the end of the story. Rose won't let him explain, he'll just find a way because he's a conniving Slytherin. She'll probs end up trusting him again, but I don't think she'll let him kiss her again. What I really think is going on is a jerk (cough Scorpius) didn't bother to tell a sweet, innocent painter his true evil intentions. But don't get the wrong idea, I don't hate Scorpius. I just think he was a right jerk. Report Review
Well. Damn. Um. Holy crapola. That was...wow. Yeah. So, I can't really think right now because of that bomb you just dropped. I think I'm going to just say that this was epic holy son of a nutcracker it's turning into a mystery with Vespertine being all evil and what? Yeah. I'm not too coherent right now. I think I'm just going to quite while I'm ahead. Report Review
Thank you. God, this was awesome. Man, have I missed reading your writing. Just - Rose was fantastic. Smart, fast, ferocious, violent, funny, sarcastic, and hot - what more could you possibly want? Scorpius's inner commentary was fantastic. Favorite quote: "In the end, Weasley decided that YOLO so we should totally just wing it". Sheer genius. Absolutely brilliant. I love Scorpius, and Rose, and Harry, and Ron in this. Harry and Ron in particular. Love those two. One of the great things about your stories is they always give me ideas for stuff that I want to write. Which just delays from continuing what I already have, so maybe it's not so good, but as Rose would say - YOLO. Report Review
I love Draco. I love him so much and it's all due to one-shots like this. Different Astoria. Not sure if I like her yet and I definitely never pictured her as a psychiatrist. Interesting. Anyways, brilliant job. (Please update etc.,etc., and life goes on.) Have I mentioned that I love Draco? Because I do. A lot. And I love your interpretation of him. And I want to read more of this. Please?Author's Response: Thank you! c: This leans toward my headcanon Draco more - sort of traumatized and mopey-kind-of-broken instead of angry-kind-of-broken.
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I don't know what to say. About you going AWOL. About this story. About all your stories. Let's start with this story. It's good. Really, really good, as per usual. I think I might have cried a little and I definitely lost part of my soul, but not as much as Steven Moffat takes from me every time I watch Doctor Who. I love the way you take these characters and really bring them to life. Honestly, it's because of your Draco/Astoria one-shot that I fell in love with Draco Malfoy and am now attempting to write about him. Anyways, I am holding you to that promise to write more one-shots in the future. Please do; if you're not going to continue your WIPs, then at least give us something. (I'm a little upset about the whole MIA-thing, but life goes on. You don't suck on majorly epic levels - you're like on level with expecting a snow day the next day and then not getting one and not having your homework done.) At any rate, this was fantastic. God, every time you write about the Marauders it hits me right in the feels because they all die! Gah! I think my soul is weeping right now. So. Don't abandon us again, please. Let us know you're still alive every once in a while. Report Review
I like the character of Delaney and particularly love her tomboyish-ness. Way to go, tomboys! Anyways. Crazyclaw is a fantastic nickname, and she is pretty crazy. I'll be waiting for the next chapter! Report Review
Insanely good. It's amazing that you can take such a serious topic on with such grace. Honestly, I don't care if this is a romance - it feels like it shouldn't be. I feel like it should just be about a girl who's not broken, just bent, learning how to fix herself. Lily is...sad. She's very sad. And I really hope she gets better because depression is an awful thing, and so is self-loathing. I'm interested in the familial aspect of her illness. That's definitely a different spin on it. Usually all the Wotters are perfect, Mary Sue types. I think Lily can't see herself and I hope she learns how to. I really want to know who she is and what went wrong. Also, that first chapter? Wow. What a tearjerker. I was swallowing a lead lump in my throat. The way James found her and how he and Albus said goodbye? Jeez. Right in the feels. Thank you for writing about this. It's a difficult thing to do, particularly in the generally fluffy realm of NextGen fanfiction, and I think you're doing it beautifully and quite well. Your representation of the other patients is very nice, particularly the difference between Hailey and Florence. Please write more soon, this is excellent. Report Review
Congrats on the Dobby. You totes deserve it. Also, whoa. This chapter. Da-yum. Scorpius IS gay (not surprising at all, but still). All the cliches of fan fiction (and YA, for that matter) are exposed and torn to shreds - thank you so much for doing that. The most shocking of all developments, even if this is supposed to be a filler chapter - that little...bit there at the end. Wow. Still kind of speechless about that (except not really, I'm very articulate about it). Yeah. No glaring mistakes. Hopefully you don't regret posting it because I don't regret you posting it. Also, PLEASE update soon. I simply must find out what happens next and how Clemence and Albus react! Scorpius and Pickett. I'm putting my vote in for perfect couple for those two. I now ship Scorkett. Just came up with that myself, by the way. They're almost better together than Sherlock and Watson. But not quite.Author's Response: Ah, thank you! :3 Heh it was interesting writing it, because it was like, crack crack crack OUTING crack SEX. Parties, man. No idea what'll happen.
I'm hoping for a winter break update. That's how it usually is for me around this time of the year; I have finals before holiday, so no hope for that week D:
Scorkett! Pickpius. Scorpick. I need to find a proper ship name for them.
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Oh my God, this was fantastic. Flora drives me batty half the time because she's so stuck-up, but I have faith that she'll gain some street smarts. Er, eventually. Might take a long time. Cupcake is officially my new favorite character. And I love Albus's reaction to him. Terrified of a giant gecko, eh, Potter? That was just absolutely brilliant. The second Flora put in her work-out video, I just went, "Oh boy. This is gonna be good". And it was. Anyhow, please update soon and good luck on your mocks! Report Review
OH MY ROWLING, THIS IS AMAZING. You won a Dobby, eh? You totes deserve and I'm sorry I didn't vote for you, but I didn't really vote for anyone, so...Anyways, our little Agatha is growing up! I'm so proud of her! She's taking matters into her own hands! You know, Potter drives me batty. I never have any idea what he's thinking. What he feels. I can't get a blasted read on him and it's the most frustrating thing in the world! (As well as he blatant and effortless hotness.) I would probably, at this point, kill for even 500 words from his POV. But beyond that, I would kill for the next chapter! (Hint, hint.) I'm dying to find out what happens. I don't think I reviewed for the last few chapters, so I'll give you some insight as to why: My thoughts: "WHAT. WHAT. WHAT! WHAT IS THIS CRAPPERY! WHAT IS HAPPENING. WHY. WHAT. WHY IS THIS HAPPENING. I...WHAT. THERE ARE CLOUDS. DARK CLOUDS. DARK CLOUDS OF DEPRESSED-NESS. WHERE IS THE HAPPINESS! WHAT IS HAPPENING! WHY DOES THE WORLD HATE AGATHA AND HER FRIENDS. WHY DID FREDDY GET EXPELLED. THAT'S MAJOR NOT COOL. I WILL HAVE WORDS WITH VESPERTINE. WORDS, I TELL YOU. WORDS. WHY IS AIDAN BEING DESTRUCTIVE. GO BACK TO YOUR ROMANCE NOVELS, AIDAN. AT LEAST THEY DON'T KILL YOU TOO QUICKLY. WHY IS DOM BEING SO ANNOYING AND SHUN-FUL. WHERE IS THE OLD DOM. COME BACK, DOM. I DON'T WANT TO GET OUT THE BLUEBERRY PIE."
So. Yep. That was me. Anyways, I like Professor Nott! He's a total jerk and I'd hate him in real life, but his cynicism and sarcasm remind me of House and are strangely endearing. So that was another ingenious plot twist. Report Review
Welp. This was awesome, let me just say that. Also, George is amazing and if my dad weren't so amazing, I'd want him was my surrogate dad. You know, in most fanfics with teen pregnancy - which happens rather a lot, though you're doing an excellent and pretty unique job of it - the male in the situation is never seen breaking down and crying into someone's shirt. Which is what I really like about Freddy. In my opinion, it takes a brave man to let himself cry. Also, I think Freddy's going to make a great dad. Not so sure about Ryan, she's... the other kind of witchy. But we shall see. Annie is really sweet, I like her. But jeez - what a date. "So, I know you're my girlfriend and all and I swear I've never cheated on you but, well, Ryan Davies is pregnant with my baby. Wanna go out next week, same time?" Yep. That'll go over well. Right. So, I can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon! (By the way, China is annoying and wad up with Roxy and her just blowing Freddy off?)Author's Response: I agree with you about Freddie. He's really a different sort of boy. He has been through a lot, which you can see has started to really chip away at him. He is very vulnerable, which he tries his best to hide but he really can't. He struggles, which I like about him. I am sick of pregnancy fics where oh no someone's pregnant let's fall in love and angst and yelling and kissing. Blah. Merp.
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Well. I'm feeling kind of bipolar now. See, I'm starting to like Potter, which is a new thing for me, as you might know. And...I dislike Dan. A lot, actually. He's kind of a jerk. Doesn't trust Aimee at all and went about having a romp in the hay with a bunch of exotic foreign women (not to insult aforementioned exotic foreign women, as I'm sure he was just another tourist to them) even while she was waiting for him back in England with - oh yeah, her engagement ring. Huh. Imagine that. I'm pretty excited for the next chapter. Aimee and Potter getting smashed out at a crummy pub in Wizarding London. This promises to be interesting. Please update soon! (Also, I didn't review for Daddy's Girl, but I liked it and Flora sounds disturbingly like me in some aspects - not the snobby part, but the over-achieving nerd part - which is probably not a good thing.) Anyhow, until next time!Author's Response: erm, is it actually possible to feel bipolar, pet? but anyway. starting to like potter... surprising. well, not really, because i'm quite fond of myself, but most people seem to dislike him, so you know. dan isn't kind of a jerk, he's a huge jerk. he loves the bones of aimee but he doesn't trust her as far as he can kick her. and yes, most likely he was just another foreign lad to sleep with. if he wanted to date other women then he shouldn't have told her to keep her engagement ring. yep, always time for reading about aimee and potter getting smashed together in a pub without any basic hygeine. and thank you so much for reading daddy's girl! and trust me, she's similar to me in some aspects, too. apart from, you know, the snob with a stick up her bum part. thank you so much for the review and sorry for how long the response took!
ellie :) xx Report Review
May I just say that the title of this story is the best I've ever heard? Because it is. So. I liked this introductory/prologue/thing, except it was too short. Also, I really liked that line, "Now close that mouth, I think I just saw a bird fly into it". You should copyright that before I steal it for one of my stories. Wait - no, don't copyright it. Then I couldn't steal - er, borrow it. Anyhow, this was very nice. I'll be reading and reviewing for future chapters, so please stick with this!Author's Response: Thank you! This reveiw literally just made my day :) I'm in the process of finishing the next chapter so be on the lookout for it!
- Sankavi ^_^ Report Review
Get rid of James. Seriously. Who needs him? He's a grade-A jerk. Ah, Aimee. Why do you have to be so argumentative? Seriously, you're a Puffer! Aren't you supposed to be all nice and stuff? Gah. She ticks me off sometimes. She's a lot like Summer in that whole sarcastic-and-easily-irritated aspect. It particularly annoys me when something like that scene in the cafe happens. Anyhow. Potter. If he MUST be included then I think he'll probably make a scene and he and Dan will start arguing or something like that and Aimee will just get angry and then get herself in even more trouble than she's already in. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. But not Potter. Rawr. I don't like him. I REALLY don't like him.Author's Response: ahaha, if i was to get rid of him right now then i'm pretty sure there woild be no more story... because the main plotline would be gone, you know. she's argumentative because she's angry, and she's angry because of everything that dan has done to her in the past ~ she's really furious about everything he's done, but she doesn't realise it. yeah, i'm pretty sure that potter has to be included in the next chapter... sorry about that. dan and aimee and dan and james don't actually argue that much... and the next chapter will be in the queue quite soon, my love :) and yeah, i kind of got the impression you didn't like him ;)
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d'awww, thanks! a sequel? heck yes! if it is at all possible to get more Being Summer stuff then i will take it, no matter what form it is in. Summer! i'm so proud of her! she's really growing up and she's acting calm and she's not getting angry as easily and she's not quite so cranky anymore! i really liked this chapter, what with all the talking and stuff. Frennie... that is possibly one of the best couple names ever. and... wow. you really have had 1500 reviews? wow. i must say, you deserve it. also! i hope Frennie isn't headed for disaster because Freddie is just so awesome that i would be legitimately upset if he was hurt. and i can't wait for James and Summer to officially get together. i mean, for crying out loud, she trusts him more than she trusts her parents! not that that's saying much, but still. and hey, look at that! she was being all emotional and stuff with her mum! next thing you know, she's going to be braiding flowers in her hair and singing old Beatles songs to random passersby.Author's Response: thanks for what, chickie? oh wait, i know :P stupid me... i really need to get my head checked one of these daysss. i am considering a sequel, but i'm actually leaning towards not doing one now. i think i'm just going to do an epilogue at the end instead. though a short story collection of one shots may be on the cards. who knows? summer is not snapping people's heads off for breathing too close to her anymore! now that is what i call progress ;) frennie... i don't think that is quite as good as connor & dom's couple name ;) yeah, i do ~ my reviewers are way too lovely to me :D freddie is my baby, i don't want to hurt him ~ him and penny have been through enough anyway. at least, penny has :( well, james and summer have to get together soon, at least, because there is only about five chapters left of this story :( yes, i can really see that happening... i'm pretty sure summer would kill herself before she would braid flowers in her hair ;) thank you for the review!
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ah...i really like this. Flo if funny and sarcastic and delusional. and Al is very smirk-y. and stuff. and it was kind of sweet at the end with the date in Hogsmeade and whatnot. i think you should turn this into a novella. or something. something with more than one chapter. largely because it's too good to just leave at the one. why is everything you write so amazing? like, you know, Being Summer *hint, hint*. which could really *cough, cough* use another chapter. yes. anyhow. i really did enjoy reading this. it's quite good. Flo is probably one of the most delusional characters i've ever had the pleasure of reading. i like Al. he's funny. and very smirk-y. yep. alright, i'm just going to wrap this up. until next time.Author's Response: WHOOO PLOUGHING THROUGH MY REVIEWS LIKE A NINJA BECAUSE I REALLY HAVE LEFT THEM ALL FAR TOO LONG. WHOOPSIE. ahaha, i barely even remember what is in this little one-shot anymore, but i think i remember a girl with a lot of denial issues and a rather snarky and delusional personality. i was thinking about doing that for a very short time at one point, and then i realised i had no way to do that without it being way too rushed and really rubbish, so i just kept it as a little one shot. ahaha, and the next being summer chapter has just come out today! how is that for a coincidence? mwahaha. well i'm glad you enjoyed reading it, but it is dead and done, thankfully. flo... whenever you say that i always end up thinking of a tampon or something... too much information? thank you so much!
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Dan's so awesome! he's WAY better than Potter. Potter is a rattlesnake with hydrochloric acid for blood and arsenic for venom. he's stupid. but i like Dan! he seems like a really good guy. argumentative, just like Aimee, but really sweet, too. i can't believe Aimee was engaged. that's just...wow. i also can't believe the press didn't get a hold of that. man, that would've been interesting. now, why didn't Aimee say, "I'm fake-dating James Potter for a new apartment because my current apartment is terrible and the press will have a major spazz if the see us together" instead of, "I'm dating James Potter blah blah blah". that distinction would have cleared up a lot of stuff. particularly the nasty verbal fight i'm anticipating for the next chapter (i really don't want to see a nasty verbal fight because i like Dan a lot but, of course, this is fanfiction and nothing will ever be simple because it's just no fun if it's simple). but! i did really like this chapter. no Potter (i seriously don't like him) and some Mark action! i like Mark, too. please tell me he finds a good girl by the end of this. or maybe a good guy, who knows. yeah, there weren't too many grammar/punctuation/English mistakes. it was legible, if that's what you're concerned about. please update soon! i can't wait to find out what happens next and i really mean that.Author's Response: ahaha, so you're one of the dan supporters, huh? it makes me laugh ~ it seems very split down the middle. people either love dan or they really hate him, and are like WHAT IS HE DOING HERE WE NEVER ASKED FOR HIM TO BE HERE BLARGHHH. well, maybe not quite like that, but you get the gist. wow, you really don't like james, i have to say :P maybe that's because he's such a nasty little snappy chap. dan was really nuts about aimee, he was absolutely mad about her ~ and she was mad about him. the reason aimee didn't say that is in the next chapter... wait, no it isn't, it's in the chapter after that. i'm getting confused. IT'S SOON, ANYWAY. she did have a reason for lying to him. dan wouldn't want to yell at aimee, anyway ~ he's not potter. well, you'll be thrilled to know that james is back in the next chapter! try to hold back from dancing around with joy and excitment, my love. i know you're secretly thrilled. mark is my baby... he can't find a girl because he is mine and therefore i am his girl. comprende? ahaha, thank you :) i didn't think this chapter was too bad, but the last one was awful. it was really, really bad. blargh. anyway, thank you so much and the next chapter of this is in the queue now :D
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screw Lemonade (even though i read that too). update this! you can't leave us with a cliffhanger like that! that just ain't cool, man. ah, poor Potter and his blatant disregard for the rules of pretty much everything, as far as i can tell. cheating, fouling, making innuendoes and implications at a mealtime. he does seem like a jerk though. "Oh, yeah, I won't do anything for this project. You'll do it all and I know we'll get an excellent grade because you're you." jerk. but i liked him more in this chapter. Carrie. my, my, what an interesting character. oh, and my i remark on the interesting situation of Albus being the captain (and also punching his brother in the nose after said brother pulled a Mclaggen) and one of the Woods being unable to play Quidditch. ah, and i also like Lyra. she is a nerd, as am i, and i like her for it. also for her personality and her narrations. she's a pretty sweet character. until next time (which i dearly hope will be soon)!Author's Response: This review, and the fact that I'm listening to the The Dark Knight Rises soundtrack right now, has made me smile like never before. 1.Sorry about the cliffhanger, but you know I have chapter 3 written and waiting to be queued as soon as chapter 6 of Lemonade is validated, and so it won't be an intensely long wait. :D
2.James is fun to write. A lot. Mostly because I can literally make do him anything I want and it still fits his personality because he's so hard to get.
3. I'm glad you liked my weird portrayals of those characters. I just thought it would be nice to try breaking the cliche of James being the Quidditch captain and all that.
4. I'm glad you like Lyra because she's based on me, which means you like me! :D
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Welp. this is quite the story as of yet. it's different from other fanfic i've read in the aspect that it's more along the lines of OLD Hoggiewarts. as in, the Hogwarts you can find in J.K. Rowling's books. if that makes any sense. but i really like it. and i am partial to stories told from the guy's POV, which doesn't happen all too often, so i enjoy it immensely. and he doesn't spend every minute thinking about sex, Quidditch, or food! he thinks about feelings and stuff! he genuinely cares about his little sister and it hurts to see her replace him! i really like him. he's pretty awesome. yep. good story, i really like it.Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far :) I hope you continue to follow because I have some fun things planned for Freddie & Co.
Though in teenage guy's defense... most of them actually do think about majority sports, sex, and food. So thats really not all that far off. The way Freddie was raised forced the feelings out of him :)
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so i went back to read this chapter today because i'd forgotten what happened. sort of. i remembered as i read it. anyways, i decided to leave a review. maybe just so i could use my brand-spankin'-new keyboard (it's pretty awesome) but regardless, i'm leaving a review. be proud of me, this is kind of rare. ANYWAYS, i loved this chapter (big surprise, i know). i particularly love the little mystery you introduced towards the end there. very... mysterious. what did James do? what will Tiff's reaction be? when will she find out? will she still trust James? how did Macnair find out? OH, THE SUSPENSE! i am Team James. without a doubt. Noah can have the blond Hufflepuff bint. just kidding, he can have someone worth his time. like, i dunno, maybe Addie! yeah! or Jen! it was, by the way, hilarious to watch Tiff try and comfort Rose. very unconventional methods, i might add. interesting idea. "Date some random hot jock to get over your longtime boyfriend after he dumped you in a seemingly endless circle of on-again-off-again! Don't worry, this will all work out just fine!" actually, it doesn't sound too bad to me. Tiff should pursue a career in relationship advice. how am i? (i just read over your A/N again and i noticed that you asked me how i was! i feel very special now.) i'm awesome. particularly after reading that concentrated dose of awesomeness that was very awesome. until next time (which i am expecting to be rather soon considering it is the height of summer and, i don't know about you, but i've got, like, nothing to do except sit here and read fanfiction like a nerd)!Author's Response: I'm jealous of your awesome keyboard.
And I am honored you chose to review little old me! Yes, so so much mystery and intrigue introduced this chapter.
HAHA Tiff the relationship guru. Spin-off perhaps? Lolz.
Thanks for this amazingly lovely review! Sorry it took so long but a new update's in the queue! :) Report Review
i haven't written a review for this story in far too long, so here you are. Summer.Summer, Summer, Summer. I'M SO PROUD OF YOU BECAUSE YOU TALKED ABOUT YOUR ISSUES AND YOU WERE ONLY A LITTLE SARCASTIC. i honestly can't wait until she and James get together. they're kind of perfect for each other. Jack wasn't right for her, James was correct on that account. i'm kind of glad they broke up and i'm also so proud of Summer for sending him the owl. i dare say that our lovely gal might be growing up and growing accustomed to these strange things called... feelings. (ooh, ahh.) oh, Fred. how i've missed you. only Fred would try and start a game of strip poker with his family. only Fred would act more feminine than Summer as he strikes a smexy pose and struts into her room. only Fred. he's probs my favorite character. i love him. but, unfortunately, he has Penny. oh. and Lulu? i hate her. Summer should dye her hair puke green or some other horrendous shade. Summer's daddy. he seems like clueless guy who's trying to care about Summer but is going about it all wrong. i bet he's just as screwed up as Summer. i'm very excited for the next chapter. i can't wait to see Summer talk more. so, ta-ta for now. (hopefully i'll get off my lazy bottom to review again next chapter.)Author's Response: RIGHT. i am working my way through these reviews. like a little review answering machine. or something along those lines. right. YES, SHE WAS ONLY A /LITTLE/ SARCASTIC. which is actually a huge achievement for summer, because she is generally very sarcastic and quite unpleasant. i can't wait until she and james get together, to be honest, because i love writing them so much as a couple. they're just adorable. at times. when james isn't angry and moody and summer isn't sarcastic and annoyed. jack wasn't right for her ~ he thought summer was perfect and wonderful and she really isn't. ooh, do you think she is? hm... suspicious. aaah, i have missed writing fred so much. he's my little baby. i adore writing him because he is just as nutty as a flapjack, and i love flapjacks. though strangely enough, i don't like nuts. i think anyone is more feminine than summer. well, i can always split penny and fred up for you ;) lulu. blargh. summer would do something much worse than die her hair, trust me. because summer is just like that :D summer's dad is a little bit of a mess, but he does love summer underneath all of it. the next chapter will be going in the queue very soon, after the next chapter of bang comes out :D thank you!
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I think that you shouldn't be nervous. Brilliant job, really. I gotta say, I wasn't expecting that. You write a lot of (addicting and quite good) fluff. But this was beautiful. It's the kind of story that leaves enough open to the reader so that they can fill in holes and give characters names and kind of build up a whole life around a page of writing. I really like it. The third person was perfect, and I think anything else wouldn't have been quite right. You most certainly did not fail. Also, I think the name of the person who made your banner is the best name I have ever heard. Just a little aside, there. Anyhoo, excellent job. Please update one of your WIPs soon. They are, as I previously mentioned, addicting.Author's Response: aww, thank you :D i wasn't really sure what i'd written after i'd written it, but you know. i generally only write fluff and humour, which is why i was so nervous about putting this up. that's exactly why i didn't give the characters names, i wanted the reader to be able to make them up themselves and decide who it was. i pictured dominique, possibly victoire, but that's just me. ahaha, i know ~ jabberwocky. i laughed for i don't know how long when i first realised. aww, well since you asked so nicely, i don't mind telling you that the next being summer chapter is in the queue :D thank you so much, love!
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That was really good. Excellent job, if I don't say so myself. I'll definitely be coming back for more. Oh, how I love spunky, Quidditch-loving, female OCs. James sounds like a right prick. Stupid idiot. I'm looking forward to your next chapter.Author's Response: Wow, thank you! Haha, yes, James can be an absolute prick most of the time. He'll develop more though, I promise. :) Thanks for the review again! Report Review
It's been a long time since I've written a review. But I think that this deserves it. You've captured something that's not about love; or passion; or romance; or drama. It's about living, I suppose. At least, that's how I see it. It's about saving people and why you do it and losing people you've never known and how that feels. It's about doing something that's right and not knowing that it is. That is how I interpret it. You always think about the soldiers. But you never think about the people who have to pick up the carnage and try and stop the damage humans do before it's too late. This story is, for that reason, unique. Heartbreaking. Beautiful. And so many more things that I won't write down for fear I'll run out of room. Brilliant, that I will write. I will also say that you have outdone yourself. Bravo. Report Review
OH MY FREAKING GOD YOU NEED TO WRITE THAT CHAPTER NOW. i so want to read that it's going to be EPIC! this chapter was good. i really liked the sentimental bit with James and Summer. it was very sweet. also, i liked seeing Kane get beat up. i hate that guy. i'm very glad to know that Penny isn't pregnant. that would just be...awkward. and terrible. and Freddy would probably kill Kane with a rusty dagger or by some other such diabolical means. anyhoo. please update soon! i'm really excited to read the next chapter. i have faith in your amazing updating skills! oh, one other thing: what would happen if James killed Kyle (like i thought he was going to do) and then he had to go to Azkaban? would Summer marry Jack the Prat? Jack the Prat with his perfect Edwardian script? and his muscles? and - screw everything else. you need to write a scene with a shirtless James and a shirtless Jack. yeah, that sounds fantastic.
wow, that was a long review. anyways. please update soon! i'm waiting!Author's Response: OH MY GOD I AM WRITING THAT CHAPTER NOW, I HAVE IT OPEN, BUT WRITE NOW I AM ANSWERING REVIEWS BECAUSE I LOVE THEM AND THEY ARE STACKING UP ON ME. ahaha, there isnt much sentimental stuff between james and summer very often, so i thought it was nice to have some now. kane getting beat up was good. he deserved it. and fred enjoyed it. fred probably would have roasted kane over a bonfire just because it would have looked cooler. which is alright, i suppose. ahaha, you thought james was going to kill kyle? well, alright then. hm... well, james would indeed have to go to azkaban, but because of who his daddy is he would only have to serve ten years. summer would not marry jack the prat, but she would start a steamy affair with him until lover-boy left prison. and then have him as her bit on the side when james does return, all azkabaned. yes. i shall write that scene. sounds good.
ellie :) xx Report Review
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