Oh my dear emma...what can i say about this? First of all, you should, you know, fix those grammar mistakes and all that jazz like your sister suggested. Atrocious title, of course. I could always help you with the banner thing, since i know how and all that. Longer chapters should be greatly appreciated...yada yada yada... Anyways, pretty good for a Lily and James story (blah!). I shall probably complain to you tomorrow about it, so be prepared. Your wonderfully wonderful story wizard, OhMyMangoJelly (aka MisWordNerd. aka Madison. aka your number one complainer)Author's Response: why thank you for reviewing. I will work on my grammer and u cant blame me, I was born with the gene of not being able to spell and not use grammer well! Anyway I would love to know how to create a banner it would help very much! Talk to u tomorrow. Thanks for the suggests. All together its good right. Better than u thought? Hahaha. See u -Emma Report Review
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