i love this chapter, i am also a rose/scorp sheeper..but i am waiting so much to get mystery revealed that at some point i was disappointed that in reality story has not moved a bit.
i am guessing the cameo will be draco malfoy, i like his character.
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really luv it.
be straight i am not so fond of maraduer era however i like to read lily/sev short stories or remus/lily. i started reading it because i thought its lily/sev fic.
but to be honest, i completely enjoyed it. this Aidan is sweet boy.
flow in this story was really good, story was moving very fast and i never felt bored.
why Aiden didn't come to escort lily, it would be more romantic as well as sadistic, seeing her luv getting married to someone else.
is he dead?
10/10Author's Response: Hello again and thank you for reading!
As I see it, when they got married there was a war going on so many of those that joined the resistance against Voldemort would be out fighting. Also, I think it's rather cruel to have your ex give you away at the altar. I wouldn't do it, personally. And since we know Sirius was best man, Remus just seemed the right person for Lily to walk with.
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one line .. i love ron. he has not changed a bit...:D.
little disappointed when read that scorp didn't know much abt her. i thought he would be boyfrnd..anyway its ur plot
going for next one to meet mysterious rose ...hahaha
10/10Author's Response: Ron is one of my favorites to write, he is brutally honest at best. :D
As for Rose and Scorpius, all will be explained in due time. :)
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really nice chapter.:)
little disappointed that parvati is still unmarried..:P
i was hoping that parvati is going to be murdered but its hestia turn so sad. u r killing all lovely characters one by one.
but as i remember hestia is already murdered in the book if i am not wrong ( or may be i am mistaken and forgot) leave it.
i am dreading now that what if killer is planning to kill minerva ..she is very strong character but if he did then story will be more instance. going to read next chapter...
10/10Author's Response: Hello again!
thank you for taking the time to leave a comment. I'm happy that you enjoyed it. As for the killing of characters, something has to set the events in motion. And Hestia survived the Battle and before that she was in hiding with the Dursely's.
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really i enjoyed it totally and going to add this in my fav. list. generally i prefer reading completed story as many time its frustrating to see author suddenly stop updating. but this plot is catchhy so i am taking risk..:)
may god bless ur writing and imagination and u never suffer author block..:)
10/10Author's Response: Your comment totally made my day! Thank you and God bless you too! :)
I'm happy you enjoy reading this, the next chapter is written and will be posted in the next couple of days depending on the duration of validation! Report Review
really good work. i must agree with u that its strictly cannon even a little detail like filius his only classmate nice work.
i always wonder abt fred jr and james sirius era!! what it would be like...see both are connected to masters of mischief makers from different era , anyway i am rambling now and lost in my own thought like minerwa lolzzz
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nice chapters u know i use to check this story in a week to see it updated or not.
amazing flawless chapters.i think molly must have convinced james to play chess and he too understood that killian is a good choice.
waiting for teddy...:)
10/10Author's Response: Really? There were still people checking for updates? That really touches me a lot :)
I'm really sorry it took so long; master writer's block got in the way and I pretty much abandonned writing but suddently, an idea hit me and I was able to write 3 chapters in a week! Only one left and it's a bit harder to write (I have a hard time with conclusions!) but it's coming soon, do not worry; it certaintly won't take as long!
I'm really pleased that you enjoyed the new chapters and although I already have my reason as to why James did what he did, I have to admit that the idea of Molly asking him would have been a great plan as well.
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really nice chapter...waiting for next post soon...Author's Response: Thanks. Next post got a little bit longer to upload since my laptop broke down. Thank God I managed to retrieved my file
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awesome awesome awesome
i am ur one of the silent reader but this chapter made me to write review once agn after many chapters. i had a feeling that james will survive somehow and when his ghost didn't appear my doubt became strong and finally he is alive ..but who made the sacrifice, i hve a strong feeling that some one has used timeturner here ( as u r master writer in using it )...any way may be i will be wrong but i am waiting desperately for next chapter.
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hello again ^_^
first of all when i saw the next chapter is about Harry, i became little sad ( sorry but its true), as JKR has told us so many thing abt him. so i was not interested in reading abt harry childhood.
but, u know how bad curiosity is!. so finally i decided to read it.
even though it was predicted that Big D would be there with his gang to torment our little harry, i must admit i never felt bored whiling reading this chapter. its so well written, that it seems jkr herself has has given us a new inside story abt harry :), really awesome work.
was that tree magical ! just grew in muggle london, like muggle born witches or wizards :P.
i was grinning when dudder was unable to catch harry.
p.s- i will read next chapter later as my final exam is going on, bye
parashar_harryAuthor's Response: No worries -- I totally understand your reason for not wanting to read this. I used to feel the same about writing Harry after JKR's already told us volumes and volumes about him, but I really enjoy writing his character, I've found. I'd like to write him long-term, if a plot ever came my way, but that's another story. ;)
As for the tree, I think it's more of the idea that Harry injected a few of his own magical properties into the tree. If that makes any sense. :P Sort of like Colin with the photograph, or Hermione with her books, I suppose. But maybe it had a bit of magic of its own, too!
Don't stress about reading the last chapter. :) Get to it whenever you have time, and thanks so much for taking the time to tell me what you thought of this story. I'm pleased you enjoyed it! Report Review
really dark chapter, i must say. i am feeling very sorry for harry and mostly for little octavia. percy is in the control, poor man!
i like the ron character most, he is my fav too. in ur fiction he is now a grown man and he is not like harry side kick. thanks for that.
i know in the end octavia will be fine but i have a bad feeling that harry is not going to survive this war, there seems no reason to kill esme otherwise.
tanbera ordered that dada professor to dispose sord in the last chapter and he did it, but in my view its a bad move, now moine will soon figure it out, why she wanted to dispose the sword. i think sword is one of the way to destroy the book.
i am enjoying ur story completely. thankyou
10/10Author's Response: Hello, again!
Just when it seems that everyone was about to be out of danger, Lady Tenabra manages to get the upper hand again. She's very, very clever.
Lady Tenabra isn't precisely sure why the sword needed to go, but the book told her to do it, so she did.
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this story is completed, so i am reading chapters one by one.
just one thing, its really best mystery fiction i have read till now. i am so eager to know abt the next chapter that i am simply ignoring the little review box. i am sorry for that.
but its all ur fault, u have written so so well this mystery that any one will not want a simple break.
i have a very bad feeling that harry is dead and ginny is the mother of this child, then again who was the lady with malfoy, here i am assuming that the person she described is lucios
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u have written post- hogwarts in the era section, but this whole story is during hogwarts times isn't it? Report Review
i enjoyed each chapter. its really amazing, this epilogue is perfect for this story, i would be little sad if in epilogue u would have created a stage where harry and his family are meeting. as this story is for duddley and his new frndz, this epilogue is awesome.
who cares abt vermon, his name even seems like insect.
so finally someone named his son after colin, i like this thing very much in it. and finally in future first time one dursley will go to hogwarts hurrey.
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so in this chapter duddley seems replica of harry. he is worrying abt his frndz and also feeling guilty that he let them go.
at one stage u have written " she cussed under her breath" , i think it should be she cursed under her breath.
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love it, our big D has completely changed. now he is wishing for learning the spell. bad luck he has not the evans blood which are magical.
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perfect perfect perfect!!!
just one typo, i know some one must have told u already, while writing about daigon alley, instead of writing the owner, u have written he owner
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it must be taboo, that gave away their location. duddley seems so changed, i think now he wants to be a wizard. now i am hating vermon even more. he is a most selfish person on this earth
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first of all thank you so much for this story. i always wanted to read the story of duddley.
there were so many questions in my mind, but jkr simply ignore that family :(
this first chapter is really well written. i love the dedalus house, he always seems full of spirit.
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really perfect chapter, all the fight scenes among students were amazing.
i just don't know but i have a feeling that this slytherin girl has her own history against voldy. she seems so determined to fight against her.
but the length of chapters are really very short. it is breaking the flow of story, u can sum up last 2 chapters together easily. pls update next chapter a little longer.
9/10Author's Response: Thanks. THis Slytherin girl might have her own history ;)
but that is still chapters away. I am trying to make the chapter longer but somehow after editing, it keeps getting a little bit shorter. anyway, next chapter will be a bit longer than this one.
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love it. nice one. first time i am reading this pair, and its adorable. maybe now draco will be with ginny.
10/10Author's Response: Now there's an idea for a sequel.
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hello maraduer ^_^
i am so so sorry that i am reviewing this chapter after such a long period. its not like that i have not read this chapter, but i thought that i had left a review but today when i was checking any new story on ur page, i found that i havn't left the review for it. ( human error )
anyway i re-read this one agn, i am really surprised why less review for this fic. really both chapters are amazing, in the first chapter u have introduced moody really perfect and this one what to say fabulous.
i really enjoyed the house description. and all the security arrangement, only moody can do that.
in all arrangement that puzzle one was my fav.
all the fight sequences are perfect. really i was praying that he should win, but alas i knew that its not going to happen, first time he had to lost the battle.
i just don't know abt it, actually i am asking u only " is it possible to change in anigmi form without wand? " as peter did in this chapter.
p.s- i am ravenclaw in pottermore. ^_^
10/10Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks so much for your review, I really appreciate it, especially since no one has really read/reviewed this story much! Don't worry about the human error - it happens to us all - you're grand, it's fine! :)
I am so glad you liked the house description and all the security - my favourite bit was the puzzle complex too, so I am really glad you liked that! I am also very happy you liked the fight sequence - I really love writing them!
I know what you mean about using a wand to change into an animagus form - I am not sure on this one, I am basing this on the fact that Sirius could turn into a dog in Azkaban and he clearly didn't have a wand with him in there, so I figured that having a wand is not necessary for changing into an animagus form! Is that reasonable enough, considering Sirius could change form in Azkaban without a wand?
Thanks again for this review - I really appreciate it! Also congrats on getting into Ravenclaw - I got Gryffindor and am slightly worried the hat made a mistake! :) Report Review
that's good chapter. but i am little sad from ron that, he was unable to defend katrina, i just don't want to imagine what was going to happen if charlie wouln't show up. i was bit surprised that ron was unable to overpower 3 wizards because in diagon alley ( may be i am wrong abt place ), he fought so many dark wizards single handly. anyway kingsley is safe, that's all matter.
there is one typo mistake, i think, in the last u have written george instead of charlie, i hope u will correct it.
waiting for next one.
8/10Author's Response: Ron lost his cool that is why 3 wizards managed to almost defeat him when in Diagon Alley he was almost unstoppable. Thanks for pointing the mistakes. I will correct them once the story is complete since if I correct them now, new chapters will have to be pushed back since I am only allowed to submit one chapter at a time for validation Report Review
i like this chapter.finally all of them r coming together to oppose voldy openly. just curious when moine is going to come back from bulgaria. waiting for next chapter eagerly
10/10Author's Response: Thanks. and yes the fight against the regime of Voldemort has began. Hermione will be coming back soon :) that I promise. and she will return with a bang! Report Review
wow amazing one-shot and also very realistic.
the starting of this one shot is really superb ^_^.
right now i am also a student and in final year, whatever preparation we have done before the exam, it seems always less just before the exam.
i was laughing when i was reading each and every character's description. they have just fought a war against the dark lord but it seems long forgotten when exam comes in picture. ^_^
my prayer is for draco, i wish u all the best brother( lol), really he is so desperate to achieve good marks for proving himself.
what about Luna, she is typical :), nothing can distract her from Wrackspruts (lol),even though its NEWTS. but here just one thing i didn't like ( i am sorry its just my point of view ), u have mentioned mitosis, its a biological term from muggle world, how come Luna can compare wrackspruts with it.
that four five lines on trio is really fantastic. i was just imagining their expression and it make me laugh.
i was little curious why ginny is not with trio but when i came to next paragraph, the doubt was gone. lol, u paired up ginny with neville to make hannah jealous and hannah expression make justin jealous, if i am not wrong, rally amazing, hats off to u :)
comming to minerva, me too have always pictured her from a pureblood family, i must admit that i was little disappointed when i read in pottermore that she is half-blood :(. u have created pureblood minerva flawless. and her struggle during study also seems very realistic. in past, its true that boys were always treated superior than girls. but i was shocked when i found out her newts result.
lol, i love her nickname minnie, its common thing to give our professors nickname ^_^.
P.S.- i read this one shot 2 times. :)
parashar_harryAuthor's Response: Hi again! Yeah, the part with Luna comparing Wrackspruts with mitosis... hmmm. Whoops! I'll be sure to fix that. Originally, I think I just assumed she'd have weird knowledge of things like that, but in retrospect, she's grown up in the middle-of-no-where with very little exposure to Muggles. I will definitely fix that. Thanks for the tip!
She's a half-blood? Hah, hah. Well, JKR should have included that in the books! I can't deny that i'm a little annoyed that she didn't include this stuff in the books, or leave it to readers to fill in the blanks. I have trouble keeping track of all her post-book canon tidbits.
I'm so glad you enjoyed this one-shot! Thank you so much for all the wonderful reviews you've left. They always make my day. :)
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