Can't wait to read the rest of it!!
Please update soon!!
Although I reallyyy want Hermoine and Ron, and Harry and Ginny, and Grandma Molly and all of her family, ROSE most of all, to forgive her. But I don't see how thats gonna happen. Hopefully, you do.
Please update soon!
I really really liked it!!! :)Author's Response: I'm sure they will forgive her eventually...when the kid is like 5...nah I'm not sure yet, I have some idea. They are family after all, and family means everything to the Weasleys. Thanks for reading and reviewing, and I shall try to update before November. Sorry, but that's the best promise I can make.
~ginny_malfoy22 Report Review
Hey! I used to be Twobsessed, and then Harry Potter happened to me (I know..I was such an idiot for not reading it for such a long time) So yeah Twilight+HP=My kinda thing!! Thanks a lot for combining my ultimate favorites!!
But the ending was..well..abrupt, dun you think?? I mean they are 'The' Volturi!! (Note the emphasis on The! =D) So, it seems rather surreal not to mention unlikely with Edward taking them all of a sudden..I mean of course he was strengthened by remorse because of Bella (exactly WHY do you authors have to kill all the good guys/gals?? =( Sirius Black..aahh..) Please do edit that Bella dying part if u want to, I hated it!!! :(
Yeah so he was strengthened but it seems unlikely!!
And poor Laiet...it took me the whole story (and I still don't quite understand) if the poor girl was positive or negative!!!
But thanks again for the combo!Author's Response: I like these strong emotions. It means I wrote well enough for you to have an opinion. Yes, the ending was abrupt. Maybe I'll work on it, but Bella willl still end up dead. Sorry, I hate her. And Laiet, like Snape, has bad and good in her, but unlike Snape she never managed to redeem herself. Report Review
Okay the story is great and all, and I love reading it..
Just one thing that perturbs me..
There's of course a lot of Harry and Ginny, and Harry and Ron..
But Hermoine is Harry's best friend too, you know! There's no Harry-Hermoine thing if you know what I'm saying!
Ginny is the love of his life, but Harry isn't the kind who forgets friends for a girlfriend you know!
Otherwise, its unputdownable (untabclosable in this case! :P)Author's Response: haha thank you so much :) I really appreciate you pointing that out, and I will soon to be re-writing the first five chapters, and I will be sure to put that in there, probably the second chapter ^_^ Thank you so much for reading :) Report Review
You love reviews and I love giving them..so all in all..its a cool thing right???
I loved the whole "Umm. Yeah" thing!!! I was LOLing so loud my mum just passed me a you-re-crazy look!!
I am a Harry/Ginny fan too!! I ll be writing a story set in the HBP time soon!!!
I loved it, and I am definitely clicking the next chapter! =DAuthor's Response: Haha thank ya :) I hope you like the rest of the story. Some people tend to read the first chapter, and give up on it. Thank you so much for reading :) Report Review
I love it I love it I love it!
I love it and thats that!
I am sure your friend must have loved/ is going to love this!!! :)
Add some new chapters if you can, this is awesome! =D
PS. Next time when u write, re-read the whole thing..there are some usual typing mistakes which happen when u go with the flow!!Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you liked the story! She ended up liking it very much! I won't be adding on this this story in, but I might write a sequel/more stories on Rose and Scorpius! They're too adorable of a pair not to!
Thank you for warning me, I will do a re-editing session soon. Report Review
The story is over-all, quite unreal? I mean not the pairing and the cheating and stuff. However irritating it is to see Hermoine do that to Fred, for Malfoy, its still something that, you know, happens!
Its just something!! Maybe its Malfoy being nice, or Hermoine cheating on her husband. Thats seriously unlike the Hermoine we know.
And Ron is a bi??? LOL, That made me LAUGH!!! =D
I wont even talk about Harry!! All of it was beyond me!! =P
I do hope its Hermoine and Fred in the end, something about Malfoy and Hermoine doesn't feel right!
Fred and Hermoine seem like the 'it' couple!!! :) Report Review
Woah. Now thats SOME unlikely pairing, which nevertheless makes it far more intriguing!!! :)
Hermoine loves Malfoy? Oh boy!
"He knows that he shouldn’t be with me. No one would approve. But we didn’t care. " indicates theres something going from Malfoy's side too. But the chapter contradicts.
Whats up with that?
Otherwise, its seriously COOL!!!
Poor Hermoine though! I wish Ginny was in their batch, right?! Report Review
Okay this is intriguing!
Cant wait to read the next chapter, and of course, what Sirius is gonna think when he she comes across him!! :)
Write more soon!! =)Author's Response: thank you so much !!! :D
I'll try posting more as soon as possible. :) Report Review
This one is the best of all the four stories. Although I don't understand. Harry being with a girl and not remembering her and getting stoned is plain weird, yet real! =)
But seriously, after reading all the four stories, I felt like going there and kicking him in the shins (and immediately conjure a shield charm, ofcourse) and SCREAM, 'GET A LIFE, literally!'
His best friends, the love of his life, Mrs. Weasley, and all of Ron's family, more like HIS family, is there for him and yet he is acting like such a jerk!
He couldn't have helped it, took four people to make him understand that. Although in Harry's case, thats far too less, considering how stubborn he is.
I loved it, though! :)Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. I'm kind of worried about it since Harry is a bit out of character with the whole 'drinking away his sorrows' thing, so it's nice to get some positive feedback.
The thing about the girl was no so much that he didn't remember, but was more along the line of he never bothered to find out her name, one night stand kind of thing.
Thanks for reviewing :) Report Review
The one mark I really wanted to give but did not was because I wanted to read more! I wanted to hear Harry say that he loved her too, so you know, I'd know that Ginny knows too. I wanted to hear them talk, like normal teens do, Harry sure does deserve it. Of course its not possible. Harry and normal teen stuff are poles apart. But still you know, however close they COULD get.
I loved the story thought. I almost felt like I was reading the 8th part of Harry Potter!! There were always really less Harry-Ginny moments in the book, they definitely didn't suffice.
The way Harry is chastising myself, how Ron and Hermoine subconsciously hold hands, its all so real!
I loved it. Do write more!! :)Author's Response: Hmm, you have a very good point. There aren't a whole lot of 'normal teenage moments' for Harry and Ginny, or any of the characters really. Their lives have been really intense, so their conversations have a tendency to be quite intense as well. I did once right a /relatively/ normal interaction between Ron and Hermione if you're interested. Well, it does involve slight talk of zombies, but otherwise it's pretty normal. :P
I'm glad you mostly enjoyed this story. Thanks for reviewing :) Report Review
Terms of Service
categories & genres
short story collection