this was a sweet story. kind of tragic.. but not too bad. great job.

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this was really great. i like how you kind of changed up the mood of the story.. because not everything is all happy-go-lucky if you know what i mean. your story is by far the most excellent piece of writing i have ever read. please keep up the good work. :]]

Author's Response: You're right, I'm not a fan of stories that end, "and they all lived happily ever after." It's just not in the least bit realistic. Instead, I, being an individual who adds -ish to the ends of words quite frequently, would say that they live happy-ish ever after.

But this is by no means a permanent switch. Next chapter should be quite a bit lighter, and hopefully funny. It is George and Weasley's Wizard Wheezes after all :)

And my standard response to your compliment would be to say that you've obviously not read very much, but that's too much of an insult, so I won't say that. :) Instead, I'll just say...

Thanks!

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cute cute cute story. at points it was a bit hard to follow.. im sure if you went into greater detail you could make this a longer fiction also. nonetheless.. cute story :]

Author's Response: thank you!!! sorry for any confusion...

Jorie

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aw!! this was cute!! it would absolutely suck to hermione in this situation.. but nonetheless harry was there to save the day. and i loved the ending.. how she forgot to plug it in. nice touch. many pats on the back for you. great job.

Author's Response: It would suck, wouldn't it? Sheesh. I hope my days are never like that one. But yes, Harry's always the perfect hero...who can't do anything right and thus must be saved by our favorite heroine. Hee. Thanks for reviewing! :-)

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these are great!! i really like how your going about these... i wasn't to disappointed with the epilogue but it was a bit of quick finish for me. i really like how you are lengthening them out. great job!!

Author's Response: Yes... but really to lengthy to really be considered an epilogue anymore unfortunately. Now it's more of a short story, albeit one with almost no plot. Ah well, thanks for the review!

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aww this is sooo cute :] it was really well written. and i have a question for you.. and really hate doing this in the middle of a review, but i had no other way to contact you. i've seen your banners everywhere and they are absolutey gorgeous.. and i was wondering if you would work your magic to whip me one up. i would be forever grateful if you had the time. other than that... GREAT GREAT story!!

Author's Response: :D Thanks very much - your review made me smile! I dont mind about the request in a review and would be happy to make you a banner - but you'll have to be quick! Send me the request soon or I wont be able to do it before DH comes out ... so, just tell me what you want on your banner (pictures, colours, quotes, titles etc) and a brief description of the story and send it to flippinmental8S@hotmail.com - I'll try and do it as quickly as I can and thanks again for the nice review!

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AH! THIS WAS AMAZING!!! i started bawling :[ but this was a well written story. i loved it. very good job going back in time. loved it!!

Author's Response: Thank you!!!!!


Hehe, I'm glad you liked it so much. I loved writing it, so I'm happy to hear that people have enjoyed it.

Thanks!

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wow this is great!! i really thought she would go back to him.. but i love the way this ended. she did the right thing.. he waited way too long. this was really outstanding. 10/10

Author's Response: thanks for the review! glad you enjoyed it :)

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i liked this.. it was very cute :]

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OH MY GOSH!!! this was AMAZING!!! i actually started playing the song on my computer as i was reading this.. AND i started crying!!! hinder is one of my favorite groups and you portrayed this song PERFECTLY. i LOVED it. i am DEFINITELY reading your sequel. this once again was AMAZING. 10/10

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very very very very VERY good story :] i absolutely LOVED it. definitely a 10/10!!

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i really really really enjoyed this story. it was great!! definitely 10/10 :]

Author's Response: Thank you very much. This was my first attempt at writing and I am happy that I could make a good story out of my imagination.

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i really enjoyed reading this. it would be good if you could continue on with the "wedding" and such. :] thanks!!

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this was really good.. i wanted to start crying!! lol :)

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this was great!! very romantic :)

Author's Response: aww thanx ;) i was hoping that it wouldn't be taken the wrong way. *hermione is a slut, etc.)

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WOW!! amazing first chapter!! im excited to see what happens next!!

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WOW!! im excited to see where your story goes!! plz update soon!!

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aww!! so sad!! i wish they woulda gotten together!!

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lol i this is a cute story!! update soon!!

Author's Response: will do! that was my goal last night...but i fell asleep! (loser) thanks for reviewing!!

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nice first chapter!!

Author's Response: thanks so much!

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aww!! that was sooooo cute!! great story!!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot!!!!

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hey!! awesome story so far!! love it!! hurry w/ the next one!

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i love your story!! plz plz hurry w/ the next one!!

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hey firefawn!! i absolutely LOVE your story!! its amazing of how great of a writer you are!! im one of your readers from quizilla, and now you have gotten me addicted to all these wonderful HP stories!! i have even started writing one of my own!! keep up the awesome work!!

Author's Response: Sweet! Ill be sure to check yorus out!

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omg i love the conflict!! its so awesome!! great job!

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