Very intriguing first chapter. Can't wait to see where this goes. Update soon!Author's Response: Thank you, unfortunately, this is to be a one-shot and nothing more. I'm sorry for misleading you, but I appreciate the review! Report Review
Loved it! And you. This is amazing, and I'm so glad you have so many reviews, you deserve them. Can't wait to read more, especially about the wishing well!Author's Response: aw thank you so much! i'm astounded that this story has gotten so much attention. I never expected it haha. But I'm glad people like it! And you'll find out all about the well in the next chapter! Report Review
Haha, first Hermione & Draco interaction! Yay!Author's Response: Yes! I'm glad you liked it. Report Review
When you mentioned that the scar was lightning-shaped, well that was just heartbreaking. Like mother like son.Author's Response: ah yay! i'm glad you liked that bit! I didn't know if it was too cheesy or what but I really couldn't help myself :) Report Review
BEST MOMENT EVER.Author's Response: aw thank you! I'm glad you liked that part :) Report Review
Breathtaking. That's all I wanted to say but apparently my review doesn't meet the minimum length of 20 characters. So yeah.Author's Response: haha thank you! This was definitely my favorite chapter to write and I'm glad other people seemed to like it too :) Report Review
When you write form James' POV, you reveal a lot to us about the story. I had no idea how aware of his feelings for Lily James was. It's great, because I feel like now we are fully informed. Can't wait to read the next one!Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad that came across with his point of view, that was what I was hoping for! Thanks for reading! Report Review
Loving this story! Great job. I'm giving it a ten out of ten, which, I'm sure, happens to you a lot, but I don't give them out a lot. I can only think of two instances off the top of my head. So, your story really is top notch.Author's Response: oh goodness you're going to make me blush. Thank you so much! I'm so glad you're liking it! Report Review
So I must say that I never read James/Lily stories. I feel that since we don't know the characters nearly as well as some of the others (ie Luna, Hermione, Ron, Ginny, etc) that there is too much room for interpretation, and the character's personas can vary greatly. However, the title of this story intrigued me, and I'm loving it so far. So, well done! You even managed to attract someone who makes a point of avoiding Lily & James stories. 9/10Author's Response: oh wow, thank you so much! I'm the same way with next-gen stories but there are some that really just captivate me so I definitely appreciate that you are reading this :) I'm glad you like it so far! Thanks for giving it a chance! Report Review
So I've only just started reading this, but I must say I really like it! And I particularly love the interaction btwn Lily and Severus, it's really cute. Hope it lasts.Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it so far! I have a soft spot for Severus so you'll get to see him throughout the story :) Report Review
I like long chapters. A bit slow moving, but interesting. I hope we get some other characters soonish. :)Author's Response: It is a novella (possibly a novel) after all, so bear with me please. But some things have to be said and done before the fun starts (: Chapter four is being validated as we speak (er...write). Thank you for the review! Report Review
Even though I barely have an inkling of what this story is going to be about, I'm really intrigued. So far so good. 9/10Author's Response: Thank you so very much, I'm glad my writing had that effect on you (: Hopefully, you won't be disappointed. Report Review
It has become quite clear that this is not going to end as a Dramione story, which I am entirely ok with. But I think their complex relationship in this story could be further explored. That's why I hope you do write an epilogue. Update soon!Author's Response: You'll just have to wait and see! I will! :)
-Katie:D Report Review
Asking the Portraits, very clever. I never would've thought of it. I love the kiss scene! They were both very in character.Author's Response: Thanks! I thought that would be a cool thing to put in :)
-Katie:D Report Review
I've just returned to HPFF after a long leave of absence, so I'm rereading a lot of my old favorites. I really like this (again), and how it explores many different Hermione ships, so everyone's happy! The story has a great concept and is well written, can't wait to read more.Author's Response: Hey!! Welcome back! aww, i'm glad you came back to this. Thank you so much!
-Katie:D Report Review
Breath-taking. This story is going places. 10/10
I can't even remember the last time I gave out one of those.Author's Response: Alex,
Wow! What a compliment from someone who takes the ratings seriously. That really is saying something and I cannot tell you how appreciative I am.
This next chapter will be about Hermione and what has been happening to her since the war. It continues the level of seriousness that I'm trying to convey.
I do hope that you'll come back for it.
I thank you sincerely...
Really interesting. This could be an intriguing and hilarious multi-chap. It really does bring to light some of the awful and overused stereotypes that one will often encounter on here. A sequel or even another chapter would be great!Author's Response: thanks for reviewing, and i do agree with you...
cliches are often overused, but when they are used well, they make very interesting reads ;)
im working on a sequel tight now :) Report Review
Hmmm. I'm interested to see where this goes.Author's Response: Me too... :)
Great start. I like where this is going, and I hope to see more Hermione/Blaise interaction soon. The summary sounds good too. Hope it goes somewhere great!Author's Response: Thanks :)
But you know it's a one-shot, right? It can't go any further, than it already is :) But I'm glad you liked my story! Report Review
More more more! I like this story a lot. Draco is more himself; I hate it when ppl turn him into a sap. Cannot wait to see where this goes, although I thought that Conrad would go out with more of a bang. Update soon! 10/10Author's Response: well, with this kind of fic, there's no room for any sign of weakness whatsoever! im so glad that you liked it and as for conrad, im not much of an "action/adventure" writer, so that was the best death i could come up with lol.
glad that you like it and good for you that you dont have to wait too long for a post! another shall be up tomorrow (3/3).
so until next time! :)
-WP Report Review
I can see where this is going and I will warn you that it has been done before. However I am very interested to see your take on it. I like the first chapter, Ginny's reaction was great. I'm looking forward to more.Author's Response: it might not b as predictable Report Review
Again a good chapter, however I noticed a few grammar mistakes, but nothing major. Update soon!Author's Response: I know ):
A friend pointed them out to me AFTER I posted the story. I'm going to see if she wants to be my beta and hopefully she can catch the mistakes. Thanks for the review (: Report Review
Yay Hagrid! Great story so far. Can't wait for the next chapter. I hope Jackie gets dumped, lol.Author's Response: haha :)
thank you! I'm so glad you liked it!
haha, I'm glad Jackie already has bad feelings towards her. She is not a good person as you can probably already tell! haha
The next chapter should be up soon. I'm almost done writing it! Report Review
Haaha, can't wait to see how this turns out. Great start. Report Review
This was really cute, however I hope that it will become more than a one-shot. I'd like to see other moments.Author's Response: Honestly? My other one shot, A Day In The Life of Portrait Snape can be seen as a spin-off sequel to this story. It follows the same timeline. Report Review
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